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hey hi! lekha i just read ur ff & i loved it 👏. veryyyyyyyyyy nice🤗 love it . plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz up date next part soooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
thankoo falak yaar love you yu nd yur smilies muahz and 2 u alsovery sweeeeeeeeeeetttttttttttttttttt update jaani.....
yeah the kiss wala scene is sooooooo cute......waiting 4 d next part...sorry yaar main teri tarah song dedicate nahi kar sakti..wo kya hai na meri song knowledge thodi poor hai...😆😆issliye...
hey lekha sweetie!
it was so sweet of u to bring me n nihu in it! for this u deserve a lots of hugs n mmmmmmmmmmuuuuuaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! from me n nihu!
par yaar, thoda dhyan se, nupur se mujhe darr lag rahe hain! pitwana mat haan!
add me to pm list!
luv
di
really cute yaar
thankx shafoowowowow tht was amazing
thank u sweety for your valuable comments...wow nyc part.........
continue soon./.......................
such a sweet chapter ... ur gana time it so sweet ... i loved them 👏
i loved the kiss and i loved the bhabhi and jijo dialogues 👏
as u always give me such gr8 poems.... this below poem is dedicated to u .... ( i didnt write this one ..its from net. but i changed a bit for u ....)
My Dad
by Tammy I am old, but I am young,
In the memories of a distant sun.
talking and Laughing,
Smiles that we share.
It's a Father's love -
None could ever compare.
I am old, but I am young,
As long as childhood memories are sung.
hiii lekha!!
this update was awesome yaar......it was choooo cute!!loved the gaana time as usual!awww......u brought nihu and meela in ur FFloved the whole update!thanks for the PMcontinue soon.....waiting for more!
heyyy
gr8 part.continue soon.pm me.luvKomal.
HEY LEKHA WAS CUTE AND TOO SWEET!!
SO SWEET OF U TO ADD MEELA & NIHU!!THEY ROCKS AS USUAL!!!OK CONT SOONSEE YAALOVE UUU
aw.wwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....so chweet yar
kiss was the bst !!loved it
wowwwwwwwww gr8 parts dear....... continue like dis only..... thanks 4 d pm.... plzzz i m reallly sory 4 soooo late reply ... yaar i was out of town.. hope u will understand.....dont 4get 2 pm me next time 😊.......
hiya😊
I am new here
loved ur ff😎
was so nice👏
read it all in 1.5 hrs😉
Luved it😳
pm me next time will u?😊
hey hi! lekha i just read ur ff & i loved it 👏. veryyyyyyyyyy nice🤗 love it . plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz up date next part soooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
Part 14
Arrival of Nupur's friends, a surprise
Nupur - Armaan Riddhima chalo airport nahi Jana hai kya??
Riddhima - jii didi aayee
Armaan- chalo the chauffeur is waiting????..
At the airport
Armaan riddhima nupur are waiting outside when suddenly
Voices (behind Nupur) - boo
Nupur - aah (shrieks) meela stop it yaar
Meela (hugging nupur and armaan) hey guys long time aur nupur sorry
Nupur - Meela tu kabhi nahi sudhregi vaise Nihu kahan hai ???
Nihu - madam hum dono ne aap ko daraya tha ??(sternly)
Armaan - hi dono didi s meet riddhima Dr Riddhima gupta my???.. Girlfriend
Nupur - kya ???? Ridz kya bol raha hai mera bhai??
Riddhima - jii di yeh sach baat hai k armaan ne mujhe internship ke din hi propose kia tha
Meela and Nihu - oye ab toh do do shaadi mein aana padega
Nupur - apne jija jii se maila na bhi hai ab chalo
Meela- wah nupur ab acchi tarah iss ghar ko dekh yehi rehna hai tujhe jijaji ke saath (says this teary eyed)
Nihu ke Aankhon mein aansoo aajate hai
Mayank enters with samrat and the gang
Mayank - Oye Teri! Nupur kya hua mera angel roe q rahi hai???
He sees meela and Nihu Mayank says hi to them and hugs nupur
Nihu - aaaawwwwwwwww shoo shweet Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi accha nupur bata tune shaadi ki dress liya???
Meela - Haan re liya kya???
Nupur - haa?(cut off by Mayank)
Mayank - waise bhi she has an appointment with me in the night
Meela & Nihu- ooooooooohhhhhhh hhhoooooooooo
Nupur- Mayank just shut up (blushing violently)
Mayank- ok MAM just kidding aap log jaa k ready ho jao Sangeet aur Mehandi function ke lie jaana hai
Mayank - tum nahi jaanti nupur k aaj tumhe kya surprise mil ne vala hai( mann hi mann)
The entire Sharma family is ready to go to the venue but 2 couples are missing
Mom - yeh Sammy Gunjan , Armaan Riddhima kahan hai late ho rahi hai
Anjali - haan aunty di dikaiyee hi nahi di lunch kar ke chali gayee
Nupur- uff sorry maa abhi usse phone lagati hoon shayad Sammy aur Gunn bhi ek saath ho.
Mom - Mayu tu call kar ke poochle kahan hai who 4 ?.
Mayank - haan maa(thoughts) plan successful
Mom - kuch kaha kya dulhe raja
Mayank calls those 4 actually they went to receive Nupur's family and will reach the venue
Mom - kya hua??
Mayank- haan maa who venue ke lie nikal gaye the ?.
Mom - chalo
Nupur is actually unwell and tired she had fever throughout the day and she had also skipped her lunch so she is feeling dizzy and Mayu doesn't know that if she told him he would have fed her
Knowing that she is hypoglycemic
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