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Posted: 14 May 2009 at 1:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ruchimayur

wow...too good yaar
 
mayur moments..kuch bhi unke liye yaar

 please thoda wait  karo main type kar rahi hun  10 mins mein part up date ho jaya ga

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 thanks a lot for all your comments



Edited by lekhaishwar - 14 May 2009 at 2:04am

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Posted: 14 May 2009 at 2:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ILuvArjun

OMG OMG OMG OMG...
lekha..u knw wot makes me smile..dunchya??
1st ur poems,then those diamonds for new thread...then mickey...now ths...ClapClapClap
MAIN HOON NA!!!!
 
ahaaaaa...*SIGH*..ma coochicoo..SRK And..cutiee MAYU in a combo...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
muahxxxxxxxxxx to u janu...mujhe tumhari tarah..pix post karne nahi ate. comments main..buh here's a hug*HUGS*Hug
 
FAB FAB FAB FAB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
AND WOT IS THS...do i hv to tell u to add me in PM list....???
hmmm...
 
mayu ko thapadd....hehehehe...nups...kya baat  hia??
 
toh voilins...kab bajenge????
can u belive it..i read all updts so fast.....heehehe...greedy..
 
do cont and pm me...
 
now i'll gv u a title..hmmmmm meri..PYAARI PARI..hwz it???
 
LUV ya
nihu
 


 bolne ki zaroorat nahi nihu cause this was a start because  you inspired me to do it because you are the kind of person who appreciates good work an d most of all cause you are a truew friend 


Edited by lekhaishwar - 14 May 2009 at 2:13am

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Posted: 14 May 2009 at 2:34am | IP Logged

 

 Part 4 and Part 5(long part)

Next few days pass with real fun and frolic Mayank, Gunjan, Trishala, Mayuri, Sammy are planning to go out for the weekend   Mayank knows that Raghav Datta and his men will be on the trail of gunjan and the gang so he asks Nupur to come with them so that in case there is any situation she can take care of them

 The gang r sitting and discussing as to which place to go

Mayank - humein is weekend Kahin Jana chahiye kyun???

 Nupur- sure we can go to Goa vaise bhi hamari college holidays dene wali hai and I don't mind       Joining you guys  

 Gunjan- so set hum sub goa jaa rahe hai       Mujhe mayank ke saath packing karne Jana hai so see u guys later

0 Sammy- Mujhe mom ke liye paying guest dhoond na hai aur  phir hum  challenge

Mayank - Sammy if you don't mind main tumhara pg ban sakta hoon and I would love to meet your mom

Sammy - whoa toh tum ne mera ek kaam aasaan kardiya phir chal Na ghar chalte hain

 Mayank- tu ruk Mujhe office mein kuch kaam ha  mein abhi aaya

Sammy - cool


Office

Mayank - excuse me Mujhe  samrat sharma ka information  chahiye

Mayank us printout paar picture dekhkar vahin khad reh jaata hai

Mayank - toh   itne din main apne bhai ke saath tha aur  Mujhe pata hi nahi chala

  Well he goes back to the gang and they notice he is a little sad

  Gunjan- mayank tum itne udas kyun ho kya baat hai???

Mayank - apne papa ki yaad aagayi bas

 Nupur - bus ab is bechare ki jaan loge kya?? Tum sab ghar jao  aur hum kal  gunjan ke hostel ke saamne     miltein hai  fine  at 11:00 am sharp

 Sammy - bye mam bye guys chal Mayank

  

 On reaching home  Sammy  sees  us ke ghar ka  fuse nahi hota hai

 Sammy '-shoot  maa ne bola tha ki fuse theek karo  tum andar jao  mai fuse theek karke aata  hoon

   Mayank enters  he sees  a lady  who is setting candles because  there  is no light

 

 Mom -samrat  kitni baar bola hai tumse ki fuse.... (Realizes he is not her son) kaun ???

 Sammy - aap ka naya paying guest oh mom yeh mayank hai mayank maa

 Mayank - Namaste  auntyji  sam  jaldi packing kar  kal jaana ha goa

  Mom - holiday ke liye jaa  raha hai  iss baar fail hua naa toh main......

 Mayank -aunty   main hoon naa aane ke baad us ko padhaoonga

 Mom - chalo dono so jao kal nikal Na hai tumhein

  Next day

 Mayank - uth  naa sam  ( idea clicks )  voh us ke  kaan ke paas jaake chilaata hai  SAMMY

Sammy - uff   kya hai  ??

 Mayank -  bewakoof  yaad hai na aaj goa jana hai 11 bajne mein sirf 2 minute baaki hai

 Sammy -   chal jaldi chal  please  humein ladkiyon ko naraaz  nahi karna chahiye

 Yeh argument khatam hone ke baad mayank Sammy hostel ke bahar pohante hai aur

 Sab apni  manzil ki ore nikal  jaate  hai

 

 Goa scenes

 Sab jab goa  mein land hotein   hai  tab  airport se nikalte  samay ek  freak accident  group ki in charge

Miss  nupur   dhamake ke saath  gir  parti  hai

 Sab  chinta mei doob jaate  hai not knowing what to do lekin mayank uses  his brains and runs to her rescue

 Mayank - aap theek toh hai naa??

 Nupur- lagta hai moch  aa gayee

 There is a brief  eye lock session between the two

And  both imagine violins playing in the background( for my dearest friend  NIHU)

He picks her  up  ( kya karein romantic  sequence ki aadat  pad gayi hai)

 

** Back ground music***

 

Pehli Nazar ne Kaisa Jaadu kar diya

Tera Ban Baitha hain Mera Jiya

Jane Kya Hoga ,Kya Hoga Kya Pata

Is Pal Ko mil ke aa Jee Le Zara

 

Mein Hun Yahan Tu Hain Yahan

Meri Bahon Mein aa ,aa Bhi Jaaa

 

oooo Janejaan Dono Jahan

Meri Bahon Mein AA Bhull Jaa

 

oooo Janejaan Dono Jahan

Meri Bahon Mein AA Bhull Jaa

Baby I love u

 Har Dua Mein Shamil Tera Pyar Hain

Bin Tere Lamha Bhi Dushvar Hain

 Dhadkanoo ko Tujhse Hi Darkar Hain

Tujhse Hain Rahatein

Tujhse Hain Chahatein

 Tu Jo mili Ek din Mujhe

Mein Kahin Hoo Gaya Lapata

 

OOOo Janejaa

 Aur dono us background music mein mann hi mann mein muskuratein hai aur the gang ke khayaal

 The gang-  yaar yeh toh sach Mein Gaya (man hi man main)

SAMMY - GUNJAN

 Sammy - gunjan tumhe kya lagta  hai  mayank aur mis nupur ki jodi acchi lagi naa??

  Gunjan - un k baat chodo apni  socho . kuch seekh mayank se duffer romance hi nahi karte

   Samrat- yeh ilzaam main nahi seh sakta(drmaticallyLOLLOLROFL)

      Gunjan - God is duffer  ka kuch karo



Edited by lekhaishwar - 14 May 2009 at 4:04am

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Posted: 14 May 2009 at 2:42am | IP Logged
awesum meri jaan
i am the first to comment   *pats my back*
 
wow ....totally gone after reading that sng..
mayank turning more and more romantic...by god !!!
kash aisa sach mein hota
 
u write beautifully...mast update tha
loved it jaani..
tooooooooooo good !!!!!!!!!...awesum job

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Posted: 14 May 2009 at 2:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ruchimayur

awesum meri jaan
i am the first to comment   *pats my back*
 
wow ....totally gone after reading that sng..
mayank turning more and more romantic...by god !!!
kash aisa sach mein hota
 
u write beautifully...mast update tha
loved it jaani..
tooooooooooo good !!!!!!!!!...awesum job

  HEYA  
 mere andar ek creative keeda ghus gaya hai  toh ultimate parts  me writing you guys commenting
 len den ka mamla hai bus  me give part you give comment

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awesome man.......plzzzzz update soon.pm me.Wink

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Posted: 14 May 2009 at 2:51am | IP Logged
haiyeeeeee..........main apne dreamworld main kho gayyi tumhara update pardhke...........d mayur scene was sweet..........and d sajan scene was funny.........yaar   nxt time have   more of sajan   scenes..........

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