AsAn Luv will find a way(FF part 3-4 on pg 8 n 10) - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
Ramya plzzzzzz update .....i want  to know what's ur fiction with Shaque . har kadam......story...common now let's start....👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
1st part pls tell if u don like it...😊 Edited by shilpakaran - 14 years ago
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Dekho bakwaas shuru ho gayya 😊padho aur bore ho jaao. but don get angry for writin such a story...

Part 1:




Ashu- arre yeh to kuch zyada hi bekhauf ho rahi hain, Sharmaji aap zara yeh pakadiye.
(Ashu gives the headphone to Sharmaji n goes in. Anjie is comin out n Mangal's following her. Shez not aware that he is following her.She is out n Ashu comes n n stops Mangal n talks vagera wid Taneja. After that all head to Ashu's place. All matlab Ashu, Anjie, Datta Sharmaji n some other police people. Now in house: )

Ashu-Anjali maana ke maine aapse bekhauf hone kaha tha lekin aap toh kuch zyaada bekhauf….
Anjie-I am sorry
Ashu angry – Arre mujhse maafi maangne se kuch nai hota. Who saala Taneja…maine socha nai tha ke who itna ghatia kism ka…
Datta – Ashu relax.
Ashu – Kya relax yaar! Anjali agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh?!!!!!!!!!!?
Anjie, Datta, Sharmaji - ?!!?!!?!!?
Ashu – I mean ke…uh…who saala Taneja kuch b kar sakta tha. Matlab (cheerin up the situation) Agar aapko kuch hota to mayor sahib mujhe waapis Dilli bhej dete. Kehete ke"meri beti ki raksha nai kar sake tum case kya solve karoge? Jaao yahaan se taffa ho jaao." Aur waise b pehele se yahaan sab log…aapke siwaaye, mujhe yahaan se bhagaan a chahte hain. So…you see…
(Anjie chuckles wen all d oders smile. N poor Ashu cant take his eyes off Anjie.)


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Posted: 14 years ago
Great ramaya...👍🏼.so after serial's actual situation now ur  fiction start...👏arey wah wah 1st part mein hi ashu-anjali ke beech nain-mattka suru..🤪
 
but it;s very short part, i want more, plz more update soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oye hoye
great start dear👏
waiting for more
Edited by ruha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey, nice start! It's nice that you're writing about Ashu-Anjali, I'm hoping they end up together in the show as well. n your writing wasn't boring at all...keep it up!
love,
Anju
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Posted: 14 years ago
It was a great great great start.... So pehle ki nain mataka!!!!!!!! 😃 Waiting for more!
sunshine286 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
ramya...kitni der karogi....common update...we are waiting for more..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: saifeena143

Great ramaya...👍🏼.so after serial's actual situation now ur fiction start...👏arey wah wah 1st part mein hi ashu-anjali ke beech nain-mattka suru..🤪

but it;s very short part, i want more, plz more update soon..

Type karte karte bore ho jaati hoon...🥱😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: ruha

Oye hoye
great start dear👏
waiting for more

😳Tanx