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crystal angel Senior Member
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Posted: 05 May 2009 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cool.sindhya

u knw i rilly like ur style of writtin.. its beautiful n mesmerizin.. go for it!
 
~sindhya~
 
thank you sindhya...............SmileSmileSmile it feels really great when your work is appreciated............lolz...
crystal angel Senior Member
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Posted: 05 May 2009 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashred12

its very good....pls update soon...
 
thank you ashred.........SmileSmile i'll update tomorrow.......
crystal angel Senior Member
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Posted: 08 May 2009 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
guys........please do comment...i have updated...
blackdaughter IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 08 May 2009 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
Hey (this will be short, sorry) Embarrassed
 
Ooooooh you are linking it to the song!!!!! Embarrassed I knew that!!!!! LOL
 
You started this one from Maynak finds out the truth right!?!??! I think i'm right!!!! LOL Great part!!!! One think that is keeping me hooked and it definately will is your word choice / diction!!!!! I appreciate the usage of something more than the usual general words like 'good', 'bad' etc etc. *thumbs up*
 
I like how you are summarizing it in your own way while you keep the storyline of the show!!! You did it very smoothly and that is NOT so easy to achieve!!! Fab job!!!!
 
Great update and can't wait for the next one!!!
 
P.S. Thank you for the PM!!! *hug*
hgrhr IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 08 May 2009 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
I just saw your fic and read it.
I don't know why no one already said this but you write beautifully!!
I loved how you captured their emotins and thought though each phase...amazing!!
Now I'm gonna go read it again...
Please update soon, I really want to read more...
And if possibe, PM me when you do...
 
Keep up the good work!!
 
 
Nidhi
 
P.S. I just read the comment above mine and now I want to paste it here because it said everything perfectly!
Its really refreshing that you use newer words to describe everything.
And I felt like it was actually Mayank and Nupur's thoughts! 


Edited by hgrhr - 08 May 2009 at 11:43pm
sree_27 Senior Member
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Posted: 09 May 2009 at 8:56am | IP Logged
its really nice n captivating..keep up the good work gunja!!
sree_27 Senior Member
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Posted: 09 May 2009 at 9:02am | IP Logged
whn r u going to update next?
reshmahn Newbie
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Posted: 09 May 2009 at 9:18am | IP Logged
its awesome.... do continue k...

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