At the Begining-a mayur ff (finished 14/5) - Page 5

oh nice i just read it and i cant wait to read more...do update soon and pm me

Originally posted by: xOxMwahxOx

Oooooooooooooooooo i am lovinggggggggggggggg this track.......nupur realising her feelingss coz of sheena....i wish they actually did this in the serial...as in sheena friends with sam n mayu.....it wud give the 2 sisters sumin 2 bitch abt and make every1 realise their love for each other lolzz😆😆......i love the way you right thanx hun 😳....like im reading their private diary...you go in so much detailll...thanks for the pm.no probs dear😊 can't wait for the next update....updated today..do read
heena

it was great yaar

Originally posted by: hgrhr

*reserved*

 

Thanks for PMing me.

 

EDITED

 

Oh it was such a wonderful description of Mayank's feelings...i'm glad you thimk so dear..

He loves her so much but is still unsure of what is right and what is wrong...!

LOL and that line "Samrat and Gunjan had made it the mission of their life to get us together!" 😆😆 Awesome! thanku thanku.....😆

And Sheena and Mayank...??Oh no...!! They're having debates....oh wow...now that's the polar opposite of the Sheena on the show! i know........i was kinda hoping u ppl won't mind that i've tried to develop Sheena's character differently than the show...

And Nupur got second lead...😲...lol...i'm mean na.....lolz 😆 i just thot dat it would suit the storyline.....and Sheena is supposed 2 b a 'very talented actress'...........😛

Oh I hope you're gonna make Mayank pay more attention to Nupur because just reading about those deate scenes and rehearsals are maing me feel bad for Nupur!..mayu will realize soon dnt wry......he just needs a liitle shove.....😉

 

But GREAT job!! thanx hun.

Do update soon!..... updated dear

 

Nidhi

Originally posted by: reshmahn

i was continuously lukin 4 ur update on page 4 ... sorry for the trouble dear.... all updates will be on pg 1......dn realised dat its on 1st page ....   fabulous update...thank you.... 😳.... gr8 work ... keep updatin ... k... ive updated it...do read..😊

Originally posted by: sweetvidisha

oh nice i just read it and i cant wait to read more...do update soon and pm me

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

it was great yaar ......thanx ruchi..😊

too good 😳😳😳

 

but why arnt u updating ur updates on different pages....actually....this was supposed to be a 1 shot before i let my imagination run wild...😆

 

like update2 on page 5..or so? so i thot that the continuity will be maintained if i post all parts together...

guys...ive finally made a pm list....if anyone else wants a pm, plz tell me....ill add you.........cheers gunjan

 

 

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Edited by crystal angel - 14 years ago

its awesome yaar.. feeling sad 4 nup.. sometimes ur ff make me feel like i'm in her place.. thanx 4 keeping all parts together.. pls continue soon.. can u pm me wen u update?

Hey, very nice update. Edited by Nishithini - 14 years ago