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oh hey!!! gr8 job! love the easy feel of the story..go ahead!!
continue soon alright??
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heyy--
gr8 story--
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Part 7

He moved his head to the side and retorted, "Ridhima, tum hosh mein nahin ho!"

 

"Mujhe behosh hi rehne do.  Kya mujhe dekh kar tumhe kuch nahin hota?" asked Ridhima with a glint in her eyes that cautioned Armaan of her not so sweet intentions.

 

"NO… ab hato aur jaa ke so jao!"  snapped Armaan, trying to be stern, hoping that she would back off.

 

"Acha?  Jab main tumhe chooti hoon, tab bhi kuch nahin hota?" She asked while her finger trailed Armaan's chest, descending and ascending to his hard rock abs back to his chest, making it close to impossible for him to breathe.

 

"Rr…Rrr… Ridhimaa, don't… provoke me. Tum hosh mein nahin ho… aur mujhe madhosh mat banao". 

 

Much to his dismay, Ridhima refused to listen.  She was high in her own spirits that she refused to subdue.  She started to shower kisses onto Armaan's body, trying to awake the devil within him that had been dormant for a while. She was too busy in turning her fantasies into reality to understand the effects her actions were actually having on Armaan. 

 

"RIDHIMA…" he grabbed her harshly from her shoulders, pulling her off his body and securing her underneath him.  "Don't do something that you'll regret later on.  Soch lo… there's no turning back".  He looked into her eyes to look for an assurance but her eyes were full of passion which were mesmerising him further.  Hell broke loose and Armaan gave into his inner demons.  It had been days since he was proximate to a girl and Ridhima had been driving him insane from day one.  He had promised himself that he will be a loyal husband after marriage but didn't did he know that his wife would be such a tough cookie to conquer.   This wasn't the way he was planning to consummate this relationship with Ridhima.  He actually wasn't planning anything; he wanted to go with the flow, letting the relationship progress as he could sense her inhibitions from the first night itself. Yet she was driving him insane now, encouraging lust to overtake his psych.  He was equally exploring her body through those drenched clothes of hers, fumbling with her body, kissing her wherever his heart desired. 

 

Ridhima was on a high. She had never been touched by a man in this manner.  Those teenage fantasies were exciting her and Armaan did just about everything right now to arouse her further, encourage though desires to peak.  Though she had started this off, she was so nave that she didn't know what else to do and let Armaan take the lead and enjoyed the joy he was giving her. 

 

He then did something that no one else had ever done to her; he kissed her passionately.  Ridhima felt like she was on a roller coaster ride, her emotions were swinging from left to right, making her head spin in euphoria.  Armaan was uncontrollable now.  He wasn't going to go back now.  He was going to finish off what she had started off.  However passionate he was, he knew not to be harsh on Ridhima.  He gently removed her vest top and shorts that clung onto her.  He was leaving soft kisses on her forehead, her cheeks while trying to undo the hooks to her undergarment when reality struck Ridhima.  This was one step beyond what she had imagined.  She started to feel scared of what was approaching next.  Armaan was about to kiss her lips again when she started to shake her head frantically, refusing to let him kiss her.  She pushed Armaan which made him jerk back, feeling surprised at Ridhima's sudden change in behaviour.  She grabbed the duvet and kept going back, distancing herself from Armaan and turned her back towards him.  He was stunned at this indifferent behaviour.  He didn't know what he did wrong.  He put his hand on her cheek and tried to turn her face gently so that he could look at her face, look into her eyes and see what was wrong. 

 

"Ridhima…"

 

She turned her face the other way, removing his hand in the process and said, "Please Armaan just… just…".  Saying that she turned her body to the other side. 

 

"Ridz, look at me".  He tried to turn her around gently when she snapped back at him.

 

"Armaan, just back off ok!  Mujhe… yeh sab… Please Armaan".

 

"Arre tumne hi to…"

 

"Haan maine hi kaha tha na, ab main hi na keh rahi hoon!"

 

Armaan was appalled at Ridhima.  He didn't expect her to behave in this manner, making him seem like a villain who tried to violate her innocent self. 

 

"You're just impossible, Ridhima!"  Saying that he stormed out of the room. 


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Wooaa..
this part just left me in awe..
I really thought Armaan to stop but finally they initially returned to their real selves..
loved it..
plz continue soon nd PM if possible..

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Posted: 06 May 2009 at 8:03am | IP Logged

nice part.

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Posted: 06 May 2009 at 10:28am | IP Logged
heyya kaj..... firstly welcome back hunny.... and mwwaaahhhhzzz 4 updating so quick!!!!! coming to the part....... oyyeee hoyyeeee..... awww kaj.. i can't tell u how much i loved ya... that was sooooo romantic....... haaaaaaiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!.... lolzzz..... cont soon and cheers 4 the pm.... ly...rav....xxx
 


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heyy dear,
nice part
continue soon.

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