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**lil_playa** Senior Member
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Posted: 23 January 2005 at 7:31pm | IP Logged

On a cold winter night, as I walked passed  the flower garden
I saw the most beautiful thing, it was a women
Her face was as soft as a baby's bottom
Her hair like pure silk
Her eyes were sparkling like the moon at night
Her laughter was as gentle as a lullaby
She was as beautiful as a rose when it blooms
That night I saw such beauty, oh such beauty
like I had never seen before
I felt so strange, what was happening to me
I didn't want her to leave, what was I to do
It seemed like I was stuck in one place.
With a blink of an eye she dissapeared in thin air.    

 

 

 

PLZ tell me how you liked my poem.  

                                             

 

 

                       



Edited by **lil_playa** - 23 January 2005 at 7:38pm

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Posted: 23 January 2005 at 8:14pm | IP Logged

did u make that poem up??Shocked not that u cant but WOW!Big smile

ClapClapexcellent poem! ClapClap

BRAVO!!!

cowz_lover Senior Member
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Posted: 23 January 2005 at 9:23pm | IP Logged

excellent'

 

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Posted: 23 January 2005 at 10:00pm | IP Logged
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sana_usa Senior Member
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Posted: 24 January 2005 at 6:34am | IP Logged

awesome!!

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Posted: 24 January 2005 at 9:05am | IP Logged
Superb Poem! Clap Clap
sweetyvk Senior Member
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Posted: 24 January 2005 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
really nice poem
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Posted: 24 January 2005 at 5:46pm | IP Logged
AWESOME, FANTASTIC, great, superb, just noooo other words to describe it! JUST EXCELLENT! Clap

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