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AR *Unexpressed Desires* one shot (Page 6)

Krani IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 15 April 2009 at 11:13pm | IP Logged
Omg...I almost cried in the end...I have like tears in my eyes...seriously....the ending was so unexpected...You did a brilliant job, man I really wish this never happens to Armaan and Ridhima...lol, I am wishing now that by some stroke of luck, Armaan comes back..and ...I don't know.......you write beautifully!...I loved this one-shot....superb work!

Edited by sweetdamage - 16 April 2009 at 12:40am
ttimpy Senior Member
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Posted: 15 April 2009 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
sad story but so beautifullly written................but it made me cry!!!!!!
cutie_shalzy Goldie
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Posted: 16 April 2009 at 1:23am | IP Logged
aw dear dnt worry aise hi shots deti raho hehehe it ws beautifully writtn it made me cry nd still i jst lvd it beautifully  u hvdescribd their emotions lvd tht an unexpressd desire luvly title u hv givn to the story totaly perfct wth it beautifull.......
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna
sea_nyx Goldie
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Posted: 16 April 2009 at 1:23am | IP Logged
well honey,
talk of a *cheerful* story...you're really bent on spreading the sunshine aren't you? lol. but anyway it was really good from a plot point of view and the way you brought about Armaan's reactions was lovely but yeah, not helping the mood gurl!!!
 
but then everything can't be cheerful and light na and sometimes you just feel like wallowing in the gloom. so cheer up sweetheart and as soon as you do write us a nice sweet one shot *wink* just kidding!
janu1610 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 16 April 2009 at 2:46am | IP Logged
Rav   AWESOMEClapClapClap
I had tears in my eyes nd sadness in heart.
I never think about death of Armaan Not in my dreams

And i pray to GOD plz don't do this in my life time .Amen

thanks for pm dear
love
ritu


Edited by janu1610 - 16 April 2009 at 2:49am
disisSanaya Goldie
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Posted: 16 April 2009 at 5:20am | IP Logged

noooooooooooooooooooooShockedShockedShocked..........................u cud not make da ending so sadCryCryCry................u made me cry..........Cry.....................but da story was very well writtenSmileSmile..............it was beautifulLOLLOL....................loved it totally..........u described evrything so well!......LOLLOL.......u have great writing skill di.......LOLLOLLOL............u cud continue further but those f**king xams yaar!..........

love ya loads.....Big smileBig smile continue ur ffs plzzzzzzzzzzzz........LOLLOL ur peaches!....EmbarrassedEmbarrassed...
krazyboutkaran Senior Member
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Posted: 16 April 2009 at 6:51am | IP Logged
beautiful.....simply beautiful....
fantastic piece rav...uve got gr8 talent....
literally brought tears to my eyes....
sniff..hez dead.....god words cnt describe this....
i cnt tell u how much i luvd it......
write more plz....
teju22 Senior Member
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Posted: 16 April 2009 at 4:16pm | IP Logged
hey awesome one shot
superb
hope you cont

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