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-midnightsun-

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Posted: 23 April 2009 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kash fan4ever

hey,
gr8 try.
loved it. dunno why, but ever since riddhima came out, i felt that armaan was dead. but then i thought, i t was nt ur style. but, u ve really surprised me. gr8 story.
 
pls. cont ur ff's.
 
and do pm me
 
sakshi
 
aww thnx a ton sakshi... will so the other soon.Embarrassed
 
@ akanksha... thnx a ton hun..
 
@shweet.... omg hun.. ur comment made my day... thnx a ton for liking it... Embarrassed


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Posted: 24 April 2009 at 12:55am | IP Logged
a painful one shot rav...but  a real beauty...............initially i really really thot that armaan was waiting outside ridz's house..............u have shown a lot od sensitivity..........gr8

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Posted: 24 April 2009 at 8:34am | IP Logged
woah dearHugits really rocking oneStarnice one Armaan is dead sadBroken Heart thanks for the pmWink

"Zindagi nahin humein doston se pyaari,
Doston pe haazir hai jaan hamaari,
Aankhon mein hamaari aansoon hai toh kya,
Jaan se bhi pyaari hai muskaan tumhaari !"


From Armaan " Because of you my world is now whole,
Because of you love lives in my soul.
My love for you is pure, boundless through space and time,
It grows stronger everyday knowing you'll always be mine.
I have it all now and it's all because of you." To Ridhima

~sumedha~

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Posted: 24 April 2009 at 8:46am | IP Logged
you write really well
i know its a one-shot but i would have loved to read more of this story...
the way the scene carried forward was really captivating.........
hope you did well in your exams!
loads of love
and thanks for this little treat!
sumedha

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Posted: 24 April 2009 at 9:34am | IP Logged
hey rav...
awesome piece of writing...
loved it..made me cry as i reached the ending...its sooo sad...

In the never fading memory of my only love… Armaan… you will always be my only armaan… only desire... just unexpressed…. Love you more than you ever realized… Riddhima…

gosh..just love this line...and once again fantastic piece of writing...

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Posted: 24 April 2009 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ttimpy

a painful one shot rav...but  a real beauty...............initially i really really thot that armaan was waiting outside ridz's house..............u have shown a lot od sensitivity..........gr8
 
aww thankyou a lot hunny... mwwaahhhzzz

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Posted: 24 April 2009 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nidha1983

woah dearHugits really rocking oneStarnice one Armaan is dead sadBroken Heart thanks for the pmWink

"Zindagi nahin humein doston se pyaari,
Doston pe haazir hai jaan hamaari,
Aankhon mein hamaari aansoon hai toh kya,
Jaan se bhi pyaari hai muskaan tumhaari !"


From Armaan " Because of you my world is now whole,
Because of you love lives in my soul.
My love for you is pure, boundless through space and time,
It grows stronger everyday knowing you'll always be mine.
I have it all now and it's all because of you." To Ridhima

 
thankyou as always nidz di....Embarrassed

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Posted: 24 April 2009 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ~sumedha~

you write really well
i know its a one-shot but i would have loved to read more of this story...
the way the scene carried forward was really captivating.........
hope you did well in your exams!
loads of love
and thanks for this little treat!
sumedha
 
i duuno if i'll carry it forward sweety.... thankyou for ur reply... damn sweet of u yaar... lv ya...

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