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Posted: 20 April 2009 at 7:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by i-love-dr.rahul

hey GREAT PARTS yaar!!! just read all of them..and loved it totallly...thank good rahul is fine!!! please continue soon!!1 can't wait to read more!!!! and if possible please pm me when u update next time!!!!!!!!


heyy dear,
thanks for the comment it mean's a lot yaar
& i am a bit buzz
but try to PM.u
will update soon

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Posted: 20 April 2009 at 7:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Radhika Shah

Great part!!!!!!!


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Posted: 20 April 2009 at 7:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mithila2

thanks rids
beacuse of u i got new readers here
thanks a lot
love u all
mithila


hey  dear,
plzz don't tell me thanks yaar
i just wan'ted to share this FF
& i wan't to thank u for giving this lovly FF.

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Posted: 20 April 2009 at 9:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SaziArmaan

AWWW this was so cute...
Armaaanz such a sweetooo!!!!.. lolzz
amazing partzz riddz


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Posted: 20 April 2009 at 9:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by teenorchid

i read all of them
they r nice
cont son




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it means a lot
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Posted: 20 April 2009 at 9:49am | IP Logged
Part - 14

(at night after armaan reaching home at 2: 30 after changing
again calls ridhima. ridhima is very sleepy she ws on her
bed on verge of half sleep tring tring
ridhima in sleeping
 yawning see the phone flashing armaan name and
expression yeh bhi na)


ridhima: hello yawing

armaan: kya kar rahi ho

ridhima: raat ko dhai baje koi kya kar sakta hai armaan pls so
 jao tumhe aaram ki zarrorat hai armaan

armaan: are basket tumse milkar ,parathe kha kar aur baat karke
 meri thankan mit gayi pls pls main kal subah aoou jab
panditji aaege pls.

ridhima: armaaaaaaaaan now in strict tone maine kaha na tum aaram
karo matlab so jao aur haan kal half day ke baad aana main
dr keerti se baat karlungi aur don't worry panditji jo kahege
main tumhe sabse pehle phon karungi ab so jao bye love u
and cuts the phone

(as she knows if she will not do that he will continue talking
and don't sleep which he requires after last stress)


armaan: yeh bhi na phone kat diya par mai to jaounga agar us
pandit ne ab der ki na to main uski and sets the alarm clock for
7 0 clock as panditji will comes at 8
then goes to sleep



5 '0 clock

(padma comes to ridhima room ws walking her up to eat something
as she has to keep fast for the day as she ws touching her hand
it ws hot thinking she has fever isse fast nahi rakha jayega so
she wake p anji and tell her to take sargi to the hospital
for muskaan as she also has fast)


in sanjeevni

anji: muskaan yeh le teri sargi phir din main kuch nahi khana na maa
 ne bheji hai

muskaan: oh thanks tum log kitne ache ho and started eating

rahul: are muskaan ek baar phirse sochle tu aur kuch nahi khayegi
phir chakar aaya to mujhe mat bolna

muskaan: oye tu chup kar jab dekho bad bad karta rahta hai

rahul: main to mazak kar raha tha yaar iski kya zarrorat hai

muskaan:zarrorat kyun nahi hai just coming close to him main
nahi chati ki aur kuch aisa ho ja pechle dino
main hua hai samjha

rahul: acah hua mujhe kuch hua tumhe meri ahmiat

muskaan: just keeping her fingers on his lips: aage aisa kuch mat
bolna pls tum nahi jante meri kya halat thi us waqt

rahul: janta huun pulling her coser and there eyes meet and they were totally in each other thoughts.

anji: ahem ahem aap yeh sab baad main kijega pehle muskaan
pura kha le

muskaan: shying and said haan haan

7 '0 clock

(armaan wakest up get ready to go to ridhimas house and
ridhima also wake up seeing time just thought why mom
 has not woke her up for sargi and she is feeling
very week and having fever)


ridhima: yeh kya maa apne mujhe sargi ke liye nahi uthaya

padma: beta tumhe bukhar hai to socha tum mahi rakhogi

ridhima: aise kaise maa main fast rakh rahi huun

padma: par beta tumhe

ridhima: interrupting nahi maa main thik hun aur waise bhi jo
rahul ke saath hua main nahi chahati armaa ke saath main
nahi chahati use kuch ho aur uske liye main kuch bhi
karoongi yeh wrat to sab apne hone wale pati ya pati ke liye
 karti hai to main rakhungi

padma: just admiring her when she is saying all tis
ridhima: aisekya dekh rahi hon ma

padma: yehi ki meri beti kitni badi ho gayi hai tujhe
rakhna hai to rakh

ridhima: thanks par armaan ko abhi nahi batana raat ko to
usse pata chal jayega to main sambhal loogi agar abhi
 pata chala to woh aap to janti hai na usse

Padma: haan yehi ki who tujhse bhi zada pagal hai

ridhima: just smilingSmile


8 '0 clock

(pandit has comes and he is seeing the kundali just then bell
 rings ridhima goes to open the door and sees armaan
not shocked as she somewhere knew that he will come
bt giving him a look tum nahi sudhroge)


armaan: sudhrna shadi ke mamle main expect mat karo basket

ridhima: par maine kuch nahi kaha

armaan: to socha to sahi


Ridhima has already told everybody in the house not to tell armaan about her fever and fast


(meanwhile pandit jee see four kundalis yaar rm ki bhi shadi
tradition se honi chahiye na then he declares the dt 9 nov
every body itni jaldi)


armaan: jaldi aap logon ko galat phami hui hai 9 nov abhi
 tak pur 21 din baki hai aur aap keh rahe hai jaldi

nani: kyun nahi beta tumra bas chale to use aaj hi apne
ghar lejaye humara bhi soch yaar tujhe mile hue to isse
 do saal nahi hue aur itna tadap raha hai to soch
 hum logon ke bare main

armaan: aap to aise keh rahe hai jaise shadi ke baad
main usse aane hi nahi doonga

padma: haan haan mujhe pata hai kitna aane dega

armaan: aap boliye

padma: hafte main do baar

armaan: shocked yeh kuch zada nahi haiShocked


(everybody started laughing and he realses everybody is making fun of him he ws very embarresed bt looking at ridhima and giving him the same look which he has given when he ws make bakra in nach mauri ridhima is blushingEmbarrassed.)


armaan is out side talking to shasnk anji and ridhima getting
ready for hospital they have taken permission that they
will be late by 2 hours


room

anjie: ridhima tujhe bukhar hai aur tune fast bhi rakha
 hai aaj leave lelena

ridhima: nahi di agar armaan ko thoda sa bhi shak
 hua na to bahut problem ho jayegi aap to janti hai na usse

anjie: just trying to say something ws shocked to see
armaan standing right at the door and he ws looking very angryShockedAngry

ridhi: kya hua di looking at that direction

she ws also shocked and tensed how he will control herAngryConfusedOuch

anjie: I guess I should go out

armaan: just coming inside yeh sab kya hai ridhima touching her forehead which ws hot

ridhima: kya matlab ready ho rahi hoon just trying to divert

armaan: yeh sahi nahi just shouting main abhi tumare liye khane ko laraha hun

ridhima: par

armaan just not listening anything goes straight to the
kitchen to find something for her to eat

padma: kya hua kuch khana hai yeh lo giving him sandwicth

armaan: mujhe nahi ridhima ko

padma: par uska

armaan: cutting who to befkuuf hai maa par mujhe aap
 se aise ummed nahi thi

padma: beta


armaan not listning take the sandwitch and goes to room

(meanwhile getting ready fast and just want to leave for hospital before armaan comes from kithchen as this ws the only way bt tooooooooo late as she ws stepping out armaan ws at the door)

(just holding her hand and takes her towards the bed make her settle down and holding the sandwith in one hand just near to her mouth she just throws it away as she knew if she opens mouth armaan is ready to put that on his mouth without listning)


armaan now gets very angry: yeh kya bachpana hai basketAngry

ridhima: smiling and kissing his forehead yeh bachpana nahi hai pyar hai

armaan: agar tum smajhti hoon ki yeh sab karke tum mujhe
 mana logi to bhul jao tumhe fever hai aur tumne bhi
pechle dino main tik se nahi khaya issliye tumhe
 fast todhna hoga

ridhima: armaan pls tum kuch bi kehlo main vrat rakhungi
matlab rakhungi bas

armaan: haan haan mero baat kyun sunogi mujhe to bada
kehti ho armaan so jao armaan thik se khao zada stress
mat lo aur khud ka khayal

ridhima: interuupting useke liye tum ho na pinching his cheeks

armaan: haan hoon agar tum meri baat mano to

ridhima: main tumari har baat manti hoon

armaan: to phir

ridhima: yeh nahi armaan pls rahul ke saath jo hua uske
baad nahi main vrat nahi todungi ek baar rakhne ke baad
todhna ashubh hota hai

armaan: in sab main rahul kaha aagaya mujhe kuch
nahi hoga tum do baton ko mila rahi hoon

ridhima:
Angry bit angry kyn tum bhi to insecure the jab pata chala tha aurmain hoon to bachpana hai tum mere liye aoni jaan khatreh main dhal sakte ho aur main vrat bhi nahi rakh sakti now coughing

armaan: cools and afraid: ridhima kya hua thik ho na

ridhima: jerking his hand main thik huun aur fast nahi todugi bas

armaan: tum bhi na basket bahut ziidi ho tum vrat hi to
rakhna chahati ho agle saal rakh lena abhi tumhe fever
 hai basket pls maan jao

ridhima: giving stern look nahi armaan is mamale main to bilkul nahi

armaan giving up: acha baba itna to kar sakti hona aaj hospital
 mat jao main bhi nahi jata huun

ridhima: nahi armaan tum

armaan: interrupting maine kaha na main nahi ja raha matlab
nahi ja raha final

ridhima: acha baba par kuch kha to lo

armaan: nahi main bhi fast rakhunga

ridhima: par armaan

armaan: sochlo ridhima agar tumne yeh kaha ke peechle
dino se maine to phir tumhe bhi vrat todhna
 padega choice is yours

ridhima: knows that no point in arguing

Meanwhile padma watching this have little tears in her eyes
ridhima saw her are maa aaiye na

armaan: aapki anhkhon main aaso

padma; teri wajah se

armaan: kyun par kya hua maa

padma: tushe pata hai mujhe hamesha darr laga rehta
tha jaisa mere saath hua agar waisa hi kuch meri beti
 ke saath hua to par tumne to meri sari chinta door
kardi armaan meri beti bahut lucky hai tujse zada pyar
use is duniya main koi nahi kar sakta

armaan: who to janta huun maa par mujhe ek baat ka
afzzos hai main kash aapki umar ka hota meri shadi aapse hoti

Padma: hitting his face slightly badmash

armaan: sach keh raha hoon maa hugging her aap nahi to
aapki parchaye hi sayi winking at ridhima.

ridhima smiling


(Whole day armaan ws ridhima always finding a chance to
 convince her to take atleast medicine as her fever is
rising bt ridhima is stuburn not to drink water also.)


at night

(ridhima getting ready for pooja wearing red lenga choli and beautiful as always and armaan staring her as always)


armaan: coming near aaj kisko marne ka irada hai again checking her forehead

ridhima: main thik hoon armaan

armaan: kya khag thik ho tumara pura badan jal
raha ridhima pls meri baat

ridhima: interrupting who dekho atul dr keerti aur dr shub bhi aagaya

armaan: nt interested ridhima maan jao

ridhima: armaan pls thodi der ki hi to baat hai main thik huun


chit Chat

Everybody is there and doing pooja as ridhima doing pooja with the chalini armaan looking at her with total love and affection

ridhima: aise kya dekh rahe ho

armaan: tum apne chand ki pooja karo aur main apne chand ki

ridhima: blushing

armaan: oye hoye aaj to who chand bhi aapko dekhke sharma raha hoga

ridhima: ab pani peeyu aur fast todo

armaan: pehle tum


(as he ws going to give her water she fainted armaan
holds her and ws terrified as her body ws burning
like fire everybody get tensed armaan just lift her up and
go down and rest on the bed and check her then
dr shubh chek and says
shayad fever aur wekness ki waja se hua hai hai
don't worry abhi hosh aajayega just patting
his hand on armaan shoulder)


armaan ws really tensed everybody went out and left armaan inside the room as everybody know there is no use in talking to him

armaan holding ridhima hand with tears: kaha tha basket dawai lelo par meri baat sunti kaha ho sari meri galti hai mujhe tumhe vrat rakne hi nahi dena chaiye tha sam meri galti hai .

ridhima coming to senses: armaan tumari koi galti nahi hai main thik hoon

armaan: ws happySmile to see her coming to senses bt angryAngry also: dekha na kya hua
aage se aisa mat karna tumari health aur tum mere liye bahut important ho ridhima pls
ridhima: aur mere liye tum to main
armaan: is baat ka koi solution nahi hai bhook lagi hai na
ridhima: haan
armaan going outside and informed that she is fine and then goes inside with dinner for her they both are feeding each other armaan has bought 2 plates full of dishes

ridhima: aur nahi armaan

armaan: are abhi tak kuch nahi khaya

ridhima: armaan do parathe kha chuki hoon

armaan: do se kya hota chalo ek aur

ridhima: armaan pls
armaan: giving stern look
ridhima: knows no point arguing and ate it
after dinner armaan: tum so jao main yahi hun
ridhima: yaa bahut jan hai armaan tum ghar jao
armaan: maine kaha na main yahi hoon
ridhima: par armaan

padma coming from outside: koi phayida nahi hai basket yeh pagal nahi manne wala

armaan: basket

padma: kyun mujhe bhi yeh naam pasand hai

armaan: par is naam se to sirf main

padma: acha bachu itna possessive ho is naam ke
barre main ki main uki maa hoke bhi isse is naam se nahi bula sakti

armaan: aisa nahi hai

padma: bas bas vaise mat janti hoon iski zarrorat nahi
hai kyun ki um puri raat yaha se hilne wale nahi ho phir
bhi thak jao to guest room main so jana

armaan: maa aap chinta mat karomain sambhal loonga apne aapko aur
padma: aur

armaan: now shying a bit aur basket ko

padma: pata gud night

then armaan give gud night kiss to ridhima and asks her to sleep.


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Posted: 20 April 2009 at 11:00am | IP Logged
awwww such a cute part...
Arman is such a sweetheart...
nd lolzzz possesive of basket/.... lolzz
cont, soon hun!
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Posted: 20 April 2009 at 11:32am | IP Logged
hey dear... awesome job !!!
 
loving it...
 
continue soon...
 
luv
deepu :)

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