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Karan was shocked to hell he can only see blood fusing out from shikha head and was just calling princess princess

Armaan somehow manage to gain courage

Armaan: karan humhe inhe abhi hospital le jana hoga

Karan not responding just looking at her

Armaan just take her from his hand and proceed to he car anjie tum inlogon ko sambhalo aur ronak and anisha aap pls mere saath aaye

Maya: main bhi chalu

Armaan: bacha tum operate nahi kar paungi aur waha dr sasnk bhi hai aap log baad main aaeye jada time nahi hai

Ridhima understanding the situation told maya to take care of karan rather than ging with them

Finally armaan anisha and ronak left

Karan is still sitting at the spot not ready to accept what just happen right now only the accident and her face revolving in his head

Ridhima: karan chalo humhe hospital jana hoga karan get up shikha ko tumari zarrorat hai

Maya coming to hep him he just put his hand before her and got up

Maya was confused why he behaved like that bt thought to talk later

Then they all went to hospital rm don't know anything as they already went to home because muskaan was not feeling well.

 

Sanjeevni

All reach there armaan and ronak were operating shikha . maya is seeing the procedure karan was not allowed to see that as it might affect him

Finaaly the light goes off karan run as fast as he could just to see glims of his princess

Armaan: don't worry karan operation is successful usse 24 hours main hosh aa jayega bt she will be very week u need to take care of her

Karan : yes sir thanks kya main usse dekh sakta hoon

Armaan: haan bas sirf thode der ke liye jada der nahi ok

Karan: yes sir

Armaan: ok good job ronak I must say u handle this case efficiently

Ronak: thanku sir

Armaan: since u know this case very well u are dr in charge

Karan: sir if u don't ming can i

Armaan: sorry bt rules are rules u are her father aap bhi ek dr hai mujhe aapki capabilities par dobt nahi hai bt in this case

Karan: I can understand sir

Armaan: that's better acha ab aap thoda hans sakte hai aapki princess ab bilkul thik hai

Karan smiling slightly thank u sir

Armaan: ots ok jao ab usse mil lo

Karan: yes sir

 

 

 

Ot

 

Karan heart trenched seeing his pricess surrounded by machines and her face is very pale having bandage in her head and leg also he thought it was only his fault he coulnt take care of her hw can he thinks about maya that time when she was with her

Flashback

On road karan was continuosly looking at maya and thought who usse aisa kyun keh rahi hai ki usse dor rahe kya who usse door reh pa rahi hai only that were revolving in his head he forget that time about having pricess with him that had never happen with him he had not considered anybody important than princess in his life never hw can maya become so important

 

Present

Karan: just stroking her head sorry pricess is baar apne dada ko maaf kardo aage se humare beech koi nahi aaega I promise pls apni akhkehn kholo princess pls dekho tumare dada tumse kitna paayr karte hai

Ronak who was witnessing it

Ronak: karan sab thik hai usse kuch nahi hua don't worry use hosh aajega

Karan: is baar to nahi hua agar kuch ho jata to meri hi galti hai main maya ke chakar main yeh bhul gaya tha pricess meri zimmedari hai main usse door nahi reh sakta

Ronak: maya tujhe pricess se dur nahi karegi who to usse ek maa ek dost ka pyaar degi

Karan: nahi agar aaj who nahi hoti to yeh bhi nahi hota sab uski wajah se hua hai na hi main usse dekhta na hi shikha se mera dhayan hadta yeh sab

Ronak: now u are sounding stupid karan

Karan: tu nahi samjhega chod

He just went from there

Ronak: isse kya ho gaya

He checks the chart and everything again and left.



Karan and maya

Karan was really very depressed and frustrated of himself just went to the fire escape and was sitting on the last bench clasping his hands on his head maya silently came inside and just sit besides him

Maya:karan

Karan:not looking at her pls maya is waqt mujhe akela chod do mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni

Maya: kya hua karan use kuch nahi hoga

Karan: hosakta tha agar main sahi waqt pen a dekhta to

Maya:par hua to nahi

Karan: pls maya main is waqt baat karne ke mood main nahi hoon pls jaon yaha se

Maya: nahi

Karan: not shouting tum chati kya ho haan us waqt tumne hi to kaha tha mera peecha chod do aura b tum hi main eek baar kaha samjh main nahi aata

Maya was terrified she had not seen him so angry

Karan: I am sorry maya par is waqt

Maya: karan baat kya hai main janti hoon tum pareshan ho par tum mujhse

Karan: again angry shaking her main tumse haan yehi problem main tumse pyaar karta hoon do u get that meri life ki sabse badi problem tum ho yeh jante hue bhi kit um kissi aur ki hone wali ho main din raat sirf tumare khayalon main hi khoya rehta hoon hamesha har jagha tum dekhayi deti hoon yaha tak ki aaj bhi raat ko shikha ka dhayan rakhne ke wajhaye main tumare barrein main soh raha tha tabhi yeh sa hua got that uski accident ki wajah bhi tum ho aur kuch janna hai tumhe haan dekho maya main nahi janta aaj tak tum mere barrein main kya sochti thi par ab main jaan chukka hoon main pricess ke sivaye kissi ke karreb nahi ja sakta main jana bhi nahi chatha issliye behtar hoga tum mujhse door raho got that tum yehi chathi thin a ab main bhi yehi chata hoon

After saying that he just went away without looking hw hurt maya was

Armaan who was silently witnessing all this hide whens karan comes

 


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Karan

Thinking sorry maya main princess ke sivaye kissi aur ko apni zindagi main nahi lana chata sorry main janta hoon tumhe takleef hogi par hum dono kabhi nahi mil sakte yeh karna zaroori tha main princess ko tumpar thop nahi sakta yeh bhi ho sakta hai ki princess mujhe kissi ke saath share na karna chahe sorry I hope tum sharad ke saath khush raho par kya sharad anisha ko bhool paya hai karan again shaking main phirse uske barrein main soch raha hoon nahi mujhe sirf princess par focus karna hai aur carrer pls god help me.

 

Maya who was hurt like anything crying bitterly why always luck play with me kyun kyun sab mujhe chod ke chale jate hai kyun kya main khushi ki hakdaar nahi hoon pehle maa chali gayi phir papa ne yeh samjha ki maa ka accident meri wajah see hua hai iss liye who bhi mujhse door rehne lage phir shrad yeh jante hue bhi ki who mujhse pyar nahi karta main uske saath samjhaute ke liye tayar thi phir karan kyun aya kyun kyun aura b jab lagne laga use acha dost nahi mil sakta tab who bhi kyun god kyun

Just then armaan said bachaa

She just got up from stair and hug him tigghly crying badly almost wetting his shirt

Aap aur di mujhe chod ke nahi jayenge na pls jiju mat jana warna main jee nahi paungi

Armaan:bacha just soothing her back not stopping her from crying he want to take out all the pain from her after few minutes when she was relaxed hum kahi nahi jayegne bacha we are always there with u

Maya: promise

Armaan: yes promise

Meanwhile ronak who was witnessing this thing suddenly get a tab oh his back

Ridhima: yeh

Ronak: shhhhhh

Ridhima: slowing down kya hua

Ronak: maam aap bhi sunniye na

Armaan, maya

Armaan: bacha sab thik ho jayega

Maya: a kuch nahi ho sakta

Armaa: kyun

Maya: apne dekha na karan ne kya kaha who kisi aur ko apni zindagi main nahi lana chata

Armaan: iska matlab tum uski zindagi main ana chati hoon

Maya: mera who

Armaan:bacha ab jhoot mat bolna

Maya: I think I love him par sharad aur

Armaan: smiling dekha main janta tha maine ridhima se bhi kaha tha kit um aur karan

Maya: par karan to

Armaan:bacha abhi who pareshaan hai shikha thik hone ke baad

Maya: ab woh kaisi hai

Armaan: main use hi dekh ke aya tha use subah tak hosh aa juayega don't worry

Mujhe tumhe ek important baat karni hai

 

Maya: kya

Armaan then narrated everything what adhiraj told to him

Ronak now cant hide his happiness almost shouted yesssssssss

Which broke armaan and maya talk

Armaan: seeing him tum har jagha tang kyun arate ho

Ridhima: armaan

Armaan: tum bhi bad manners aise battein nahi sunte

Ronak: who jo bhi ho sir par aaj main bahut khush hoon finnaly anisha phirse dil kholke hansegi shayad maya aur karan bhi

Ridhima: aur  tum

Armaan was surprised bythis question of her bt avoided asking now ronak understand trying to avoid

Ronak:main to khush hi hoon mujhe kya hua hai maam mujhe abhi Aanisha se milna hai bye

And went

Ridhima thinking tumitni asanai se nahi bhaag sakte ronak tumhe aage badna hoga tum mere liye apni zindagi aise nahi rok sakte

Armaan: giving ridhima a look oye basket aapka humsafar yaha aapke samne khada hai aur aap kisse aur ke barrein main soch rahi hai not fair making puppy face

Ridhima: tum bhi na kuch to sharam karo tumara bacha yehi hai

 

Maya: hehehe di koi phayda nahi hai kuch log janam se hi behsram hote hai with that she also went

Armaan: kitne dino baad isse kush dekha hai hai na

Ridhima: haan thanks to u

Armaan: hmm hmm sirf thanks se kaam nahi chalega

Ridhima: armaaaaaaaaaaaaan tum phirse shuru ho gaye

Armaan: ab kya karu tum ho hi itni pyari ki raha hi nahi jata

Ridhima: acha baba bas bas main bahut thak chuki oon pls ghar chale 1 baj rahe hai

Armaan: haan chalo aage kyun nahi bataya tumthik ho na

Ridhima: are baba sief tiredness hai aur kuch nahi ab chalo waise bhi sarre interns yehi hai

Armaan: ok ek minute lifting  her up

Ridhima: kya kar rahe hoo yeh hospital hai armaan

Armaan: mujhe pata hai while walking aur yaha sabko pata hai tummeri patni ho aur tum pregnenet bhi ho aur thaki hui bhi ho isseliye

Ridhima understood no use telling him so gave up

Sasnk witnessing this was very happy to see her daughter so happy and seeing armaan taking care of her like this

Anisha and ronak

Ronak: main aaj bahut khush hoon tumhe pata hai shrad ab bhi

Anisha: mujhse pyar karta hai

Ronak: haan tumhe kaise pata

Anisha: uska phone aya tha performance ke baad

Ronak: what tumne bataya kyun nahi aur kua kya tha baat hui use

Anisha: nahi usne kuch nahi kaha

Ronak: phir tumhe kaise

Anisha: uski sanson se

Ronak: pir tum itni udha kyun ho ab to sab

Anisha: nahi main ab phirse uski zindagi main nahi jaungi

Ronak: par kyun

Anisha: jo ek baa raise ja sakta hai kya gurarente hai wapas nahi hoga

Ronak: are who to

Anisha: maine kaha na bas keh doiya leaving from there

Ronak: are ab isse kya hua  oh god yeh kya ho raha hai ek taraf karan aura b yeh yeh log apne hi paron main kuladi maar rahe hai ab mujhse hi kuch karna hoga

Meanwhile karan is always sitting besides his princess bed whole night this night clear many confusion for many people they realize what they want.

Next morning

Shika finaaly got conscious and was ok

Karan and shikha

Karan: princess aisa phirse mat karna aapne to dada ko dara hi diya

Shikha: chorry dada aage se nahi karungi aap rou mat aap rote hue ache nahi lagte wiping his tears

Karan:dard ho raha hai na

Shikha: no dada I am your brave princess

Karan: hmmmmmmmmmm having smile on his face


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Ronak coming:oh to a is brave princhess ko dawai aur breakfast bhi lena hoga

Shikha: breakfast haa dawai naa

Karan: par dawai ke begair aap thik kaise honge

Shikha: dada dawai naaaaaa kadwi hoti hai

Ronak:abhi to aapne kaha aap brave ho to phir brave bache dawai lete hai

Shikha: ok par aap phhir mujhe gana sunaoge

Ronak: hospital main

Shikha: haan mujhe aapke ganne aur aap bahut ache lagte hoon I lob u

Ronak: started laughing ok ok pehle aap kahun breakfast phir dawai phir gane ok

Shikha: yehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Karan making faces

Ronak: hmmmmmmsomeone is jelouse

Karan: what haan yeh tujhe kuch jada hi bhav deti hai jab dekho I lob ronak

Shika: hehehe I lob dada to

Finally they both hug her and made eat her breakfast and dawai

Armaan ridhima

Ridhima was sitting armaan was sleeping on her lap ridhima stroking his hair

Ridhima: aaj sanjevi nahi jana

Armaan: maan nahi kar raha waise bhi koi case nahi hai aur shikha bhi thik ai maya ka phone aya tha

Ridhima: hmmmmmmmmmmm

Armaan: pata hai adhiraaj uncle ne jab mujhe wo sab kaha main bahut khush tha par karan aise kyun

Ridhima: karan sahi hai uski tarah soch ke dekho armaan who pricess ko leke bahut insecure ho gaya hai us incident ke baad use lagta hai uski wajah se hua kyun ki uska dhayan maya par tha

Armaan: who to thik hai par who use aise kaise baat kar sakta hai

Ridhima: armaan jaha pyar hota hai wahi haq hota hai tum bhi to kabhi kabhi mujhse aise hi baat karte the aage yaad hai

Armaan: haan yaad hai

Ridhima: mujhe lagta hai humhe maya aur shikha ko close lana chaiye shayad phir karan bhi yeh sochna chod de ki shikha aur uske beech main maya aagayi what say

Armaan: yeh jaan this is fantastic ab dekho main kya karta hoon par pehle aapne meri mrning kiss nahi di abhi tak

Ridhima: tum ek din

Cut between as their lips met

Finally

Armaan:jab tak mujhe meri mithai na mile main kaise hospital ja sakta hoon acha chalo ab ready ho jaun

Ridhima: armaan mujhe tumhe kuch batana hai

Armaan: bolo

Ridhima: who jo ladki jisse ronak infatuated hai na jise who saare gane dedicate karta hai who

Armaan: kya hua who

Ridhima: who main hoon

Armaan: at once get from her lap kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa



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Note from mithila:


Guys I am going out for 15 days from 30 july to 15th aug so it will be

coming after that till then enjoy yourself tc


Love u karan

Karan ki dewani mithila




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GUYS PLS READ THIS
I AM MITHILA
I HAVE STOP WRITTING THISFF IN THE BLOG THE RESPONSE IS VERY LOW IF U GUYS WANT ME TO CONITINUE WRITING THEN TELL ME DONT WORRY IF U WILL WANT IT THEN I WILL MAIL THE PARTS TO RIDDS I KNOW I WILL COMPLETE THIS STORY BT WILL BE POSTING HERE OR NOT IS COMPLETELY UP TO U GUYS U WANT TO READ THOS OR NOT
BYE TC
 
waiting for answere guys


Edited by mithila2 - 29 July 2009 at 3:48am

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Great parts!!!!!!!!!

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hey
 
great prts.
 
Update soon.

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hey guys i am not writting any more sorry guys to left it in between bt i have just lost the inspiration to carry on thanks for your support till dt tc bye love u all

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Originally posted by mithila2

GUYS PLS READ THIS
I AM MITHILA
I HAVE STOP WRITTING THISFF IN THE BLOG THE RESPONSE IS VERY LOW IF U GUYS WANT ME TO CONITINUE WRITING THEN TELL ME DONT WORRY IF U WILL WANT IT THEN I WILL MAIL THE PARTS TO RIDDS I KNOW I WILL COMPLETE THIS STORY BT WILL BE POSTING HERE OR NOT IS COMPLETELY UP TO U GUYS U WANT TO READ THOS OR NOT
BYE TC
 
waiting for answere guys


Heya Mithila
That would be gr8 if you could continue it here..
Plz do that na..
I would love to know what has Armaan planned nd how will the pairs get to their perfect match nd what will Ronak do with his first Love thats already someone elses Life..
Nd how will Armaan react to it..?

PLEASE.. PLEASE..PLEASE..PLEASE..PLEASE..
cONTINUE IT..


luv
Rucha

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