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Dare to Love#2(DMG) Special Request on Page 100 (Page 12)

cool_pisces IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 April 2009 at 11:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sea_nyx


I wrote a long comment and then the stupid net crashed and I got the *msg not posted* error and now I have to type it out all over again and I'm not sure I can remember exactly what I said the first time *sigh* anyway, I'll try my best. Here goes:

Well, Angie and Atul stole the show for me this time. Angie especially was wonderful, the way she comforted ridz and gently pointed out the places where she was at fault herself without in anyway giving her anything less than 100% support and last but not the least by preventing Atul from beating up Armaan'lol. Atul too was wonderful, trying to soothe Ridz the best he can while taking care of Sumit in such an efficient way. I loved that part where Ridz leans her head on his shoulder, the trust and love that conveys is just amazing.

Rahul and Muskaan too really stood out with their maturity and sense of perspective. The way they didn't descend to the level of blaming each other or their partners' friends for hurting their own friends shows a level of maturity and sensitivity that is wonderful. Kudos to all four and their creator!

As for Armaan and Ridz themselves, well no one can call you an Ekta this time, you dealt with their reasonings and egos and all-too-human foibles beautifully. In fact the whole break up and post-break up mess had a sense of veracity about it. No hysteria or excess emotional outbursts a la Kekta but still the pain was all too evident. All in all a brilliant update.

Last but definitely not the least, CONGRATS for your new thread and may this be the start of a lot more. Thanx too for taking the time to send the pm.

Luv ya!

Aww too bad Arati, i hate when tht happens Angry
It has happened to me a few times, and i get so frustrate tht i sign off and post a comment later when i have cooled off LOL
Thanks for writing again Hug
I wanted Atul and Anjali to be an integral part in this update coz they r the closest to Riddhima and their reactions were very necessary, also Anjali is the only one who knows abt Sumit
Hahaha i cud not let Armaan be beaten up no matter how big a jerk he is Wink
There is a gr8 bond between Riddhima and Atul, i have tried to potray it frm the very first part, glad u enjoyed it
Rahul and Muskaan had to be sensible, i have realized tht even in the show they r not actually stupid coz when the situations demands they can be very helpful
Thanks a lot Arati, u made my day with ur awesome comment
Keep reading
Love Mini Big smile

cool_pisces IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 April 2009 at 11:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kashishk

Hey Mini,
First of all, congrats for the second threat, I hope u'll achieve more. Till now u have done a brilliant job and I know u will keep doing it.


I love you, You are just too good.
I completely loved the part.

U know what I was crying reading it, It was so emotional they both want to talk with each other but their ego come in between. I so hope they talk sort out the mess. I think they both should forget their ego and talk. I know Ammi is at fault but unknowingly. So ridzi should talk to him and tell him everything so that armaan felt his mistake.

Rahul and Muskaan were just amazing, I mean they support their partner's best friend. And really muskaan's logic made me giggle too. I agree there, Rahul should made Armaan understand relaxly but again ammi was ignoring the talk so rahul found this way better and i think Armaan understood if not a lot then a bit.

Atul and Angie are just too good. I so loved their bond with each other and especially the way they are with ridzi. Angie support her sister a lot, she is sister that every girl would like to have and atul is such a cute jiju rather brother, I mean he is so understanding, he can't see ridzi crying. I so loved it when he said that he would have beat Armaan if angie shouldn't have stopped him. Atul is so lovely.

I hope Atul get soon sumit suspended from the school and i think that will too made armaan realize that ridzi wasn't at fault.

I so loved it this part, every bit was awesome and you aren't Ekta at all. You describe every emotion brilliantly.

Continue soon and thnx for the PM.

Love you<333
Hey Kashish
Thanks a lot for the lovely wishes Big smile
I owe it all to u guys, never did i thought tht i wud get so much of love
Aww i am so sorry for making u cry, i want ppl to laugh and smile while reading my fanfic, will try to make the next part a bit more humorable
Ya well ppl who have seen DMG know abt AR and their ego, its like another person in their relationship LOL
Rahul and Muskaan r my greatest supports, i ease out the tension through them, writing their parts is always fun
Haha any brother wud have done tht and Atul is no different, he and Anjali love Riddhima a lot and cant see her getting hurt
Thanks for the awesome comment dear, i am flattered Tongue
Updating on Thursday
Love Mini
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Posted: 21 April 2009 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by prety_cool93

hey...congratulations 4 ur 2nd thread...btw...d part awesome n a bit depressing 2...ay...keep updating...n yeah thnx 4 d pm....plzzzz continue soon...
Thanks a lot for ur comment Tongue
Originally posted by ~sumedha~

part was fab as usual Mini,
but it ended soon......i want more!!!!!!!
was waiting for armaan and ridz's patch up sooooooo badly.......not you've started giving us suspense endings like ekta yaar!
love you loads

Hey Sumedha
Thanks for the lovely comment
Will update on Thursday dear
Busy with some projects
Love Mini Big smile
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Posted: 21 April 2009 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Robin_M

hey mini firstly congrats on the new thread! your ff is definitely worth it!
and secondly, awesome part! it was sad and frustrating at the same time! seeing poor ridhima in that state amd armaan also was very sad :(
but boy do they have egos! to be honest, i dont blame ridz, he broke up with her without listening to her, why should she call him?! loved how rahul is supporting ridz, he even fought with armaan! i really love atuls character! glad hes supporting ridz also! hope he gets that sicko sumit busted and expelled! maybe then armaan will find out the truth! looking forward to the next part, ar face to face! please continue soon mini :)
Hey Robin
Thanks a lot for the wishes
Hehehe both AR acted a bit stupidly in this part
But dont blame me, blame their ego LOL LOL
Both r somewhat rite, Riddhima thinks she is rite and Armaan thinks he is rite
None of them r ready to bend although they r missing each other a lot
Rahul is very sensible, he can see where there is wrong and he wants Armaan's happiness thts why he is scoldin him
Armaan will find out the truth soon
Updating Part 24 on Thursday
Mini Big smile
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Posted: 21 April 2009 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lilsunshine_rav

heyya di....Hug... ok i was like nagging u yesterday that i wanted an update and now that u did... u must be wondering that where ahve i disappeared to... hehe... reasons enclosed in PM..... WinkWink... ok... rav beli angli with juuu... *kiddish language*.... hehe translates as i am very angry with you!!!! LOL.....  mini di... how cruel!!!!!!!!!!! waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...... mummy... aunty 's very mean!!! ok i seem to be on high today with kids and kiddish acts... apologies!!! LOLLOL... yh sooo i can't believe you had such a twist in mind.... waaaaaa!!!!! Tongue.... ok so please cont soon and love ya tons....... *hugs* me.......xxxx

P:S congooooooooooooooo on second thread!!!!!! 
P:P:S wow... lucky me.. green colur combinations... hehe LOL
Hey Rav
LOL dont worry thts why i send u my side of a nagging PM LOL
Glad to see u have followed my orders Charlie and edited ur comment LOL
Otherwise me welly angry with u *pouts* (LOL me in baby mood too Wink)
Thank God the twist was a surprise, thts how i had intended it
Hehehe *evil laugh* Man yes i succeded LOL
Ok now dont go complain to aunty dear, will fix things soon, infact already started Mission AR Milao LOLz
Thanks for the flowers but no champagne darling, me a teetotaler
Will update on Thursday
A bit busy at the moment
Love Mini Big smile
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Posted: 21 April 2009 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Riddss

heyy dear,
nice part
continue soon
thanks for PM.
Thanks a lot Tongue
Originally posted by swapdmg

congrats on ur new thread :) keep continuing...gr8 chapter...loved it!
Thanks for the wishes
Will update on Thursday
Mini Tongue
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Posted: 22 April 2009 at 12:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DMG4EVER

Aww he misses her like no mans business .!!! Rahul Goodd boy
Hey Misha
Thanks a lot for ur comment
Mini Tongue
Originally posted by afreen_syed

congo ...4 de 2nd thread
amazin part...lovd everyones reaction 2 de break up....
thnx 4 pm n contd soon
Hi Afreen
Thank u soooo much Smile
Will update tom
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Posted: 22 April 2009 at 12:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maliha_princess

Hey Hi MINI Smile

first of all congrats on new thread Clap
oww poor ridz n armaan CryCryCry
n there stupid ego AngryTongue
anywayz i dont kwn why its quit weird but this part made me cry ConfusedCry
plz update super soon Big smile
thx a lottttt 4 da PM Embarrassed
Hey Maliha
Thanks a lot for the lovely wishes
Aww am so sorry for making u cry
Will try to make the next part more light, i dont like making ppl cry dear
I want all of u to smile and laugh at my updates
No probs abt the PM, my pleasure
Will update tom
Mini Big smile

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