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                             PYAAR AUR NAFRAT KA KHEL

   

Main Characters:

SAMRAT

GUNJAN AND NUPUR BHUSHAN

UDAY AND DIYA BHUSHAN

RANNVIJAY THAKUR

MAYANK SHARMA

BENJI

 

 

In the basketball court

 

Gunjan is on her way to class. She seems to be in deep thought. Samrat was sitting with benji.

 

Samrat: hey chasmish! Ek "hi" bhi nahi kahogi kya???

 

Gunjan: Sorry samrat. Vo kya hai na, subah se di kuch khoyi khoyi si lag rahi hai. Unhone mujhse baat hi nahin ki. Mujhe ab tension ho raha hain. Unko kabhi itna naaraaz nahi dekha'

 

 

Samrat: to kya hua, jahaa tak main nupur ko jaanta hoon, voh bas thodi der ke liye upset rahegi. Baad me dekhna, pehele jaisi ho jaayegi. Tum

fikar mat karo. Samrat hai na!!!

 

Gunjan gives Samrat a sweet smile.

 

Suddenly, the principal comes in with a new student. He looks quite cool.

 

Princi: Attention students, yeh hain hamare college ke naye student, Rannvijay Thakur.

 

(Remember guyz, acc. To the episodes, samrat has already met RJ(Rannvijay) at the icecream stall)

Princi: inke pichle college me inhe best student ka award mila tha. Which means Samrat ka competitor aaya hai(looking at samrat).

 

Samrat: (with a disgusted look) Achha, to isliye bada attitude jhaad raha tha us din. After all Excel college mein admission pana, its not easy. Anyways, yeh aa  hi gaya hai, to isse sabak sikhana hi padega.

Benji: Dude! Yeh to vahi lafanga hai, vo biker!

Samrat: Jaanta hoon, par tu itna kyun ghabra raha hai? Pura college jaanta hai, ki samrat se takkar lene ka kya anjaam hai'.

 

Princi goes away.

 

RJ(looking at gunjan): Vaise to maine suna tha ke excel college me Mumbai ke sabse cool aur smart students padhte hai, but yeh nahi suna ki gaav ki choriyaa bhi hai.(Then gives a wicked smile)

 

Samrat: Vaise to is college mein gunde mavaali bhi nai padhte the, but tumne record tod diya hai. Congrats! (gives the same wicked smile back)

 

(Gunjan looks away. She is clearly feeling awkward.)

   

  Samrat: Chalo chashmish, varna class ke liye der ho jaayegi.

(Sam and gunjan leave. RJ stares at them as they leave.)

 

(Meanwhile, diya introduces herself to RJ and he checks her out, just like in the episode)

 

 

In Mayank and Nupur's class:

 

 

As you all know, Mayank has started realizing that he is falling in love with Nupur. As always, he's talking to himself.

 

Mayank: Meri to studies me concentration hi nahi lag raha! Yeh tujhe kya ho gaya hai mayank!!!! Soch, maa ne itni mehenat karke tujhe itne acche college ne admission diya hai, aur tu? Uska value hi nahi kar raha. Ab bahut hua, me pehele waala mayank hi ban jaaunga. Simple and studious. That's it!! Nahi to itne saalo se jo good boy ka image rakha hai, us sab pe paani fer jaayega.

 

(CJ and nupur enter the class. Nupur is upset about something. CJ notices both nupur and mayank behaving strangely)

 

CJ (going to mayank's desk. Nupur also follows): Look guys, you are really freakin' me out. Mayank, jo chupchap reheta tha, ab apne aap se hi baate kar raha hain, aur nupur, jiski radio mirchi 24x7 sunne ko milti hai, uska mooh subah se nahi khula hai.. Mujhe 3 possibilities dikhayee de rahi hai. Ya toh tum logo ki qualities ek dusre ke saath rehene ke kaaran exchange ho gaye hai, ya to tum logo ki aatma exchange ho gayi hai, aur lastly, yaa to me paagal hoon! Ab kaho inme se yah kya ho gaya hai?

 

Mayank: CJ please, mere paas is bakwaas ke liye time nahi hain. Vaise bhi, class ab shuru hi hone vaali hai.

 

CJ: Yeh mat samaj ki tu bach gaya, bas class khatam hone de.

(She and nupur take their seats. Nupur still seems upset.)

 

Mayank looks at nupur and thinks: Yeh nupur ko kya ho gaya hai. Kahi mere vajah se to upset nahi hai?? Kahi maine gusse mein usse kuch galat to nahi kaha???       

 

Mayank really feels like asking nupur about her problem. But at the same time he doesn't want to get too close to her.

 

What does mayank do? Does he ask nupur why she is so upset? And why is nupur upset? What is the reason? Will there be a cold war b/w  RJ and Sam? To know, read the next update.

 

 

Plz do let me know about how dis update was. I know it may not be really good, as dis is my first fanfic, but plz let me know about ur suggestions, so dat I can include dem in my next update. Im really sorry dis first one is a little short, I hav to think about the story ahead! Thanx!!!!

 

Luv,

oorminair  

PYAAR AUR NAFRAT KA KHEL (UPDATE)

 

Hey guyz, thanx a lot 4 reading my first fanfic, and thanx a lot for the encouragement and do keep sending your opinions about all the updates. Thanx once again. So here goes the story'..

 

 

IN MAYANK AND NUPUR'S CLASS:

 

As soon as the bell rings, nupur gets up from her seat and proceeds towards gunjan's class. Mayank really thinks something is wrong. He is feeling the strong urge to ask her what is wrong, but she goes before he can confront her.

Manyank tells himself: Lagta hai ki sach mein kuch gadbad hai. Agar koi choti si problem hoti, to nupur pure din itni udaas nahi reheti. I just hope vo jaldi se theek ho jaaye'''''. Ek second''''. Mayank, tujhe uske feelings se kya matlab hai??? Usse khushi ho ya gussa, tujhe usse kya karna hai? Tu bas apne business ko mind kar!!!

 

 

OUTSIDE GUNJAN'S CLASS

 

Nupur sees gunjan engrossed in talks with Samrat. She waits for sometime, and then thinks that maybe samrat will drop gunjan home. Then she leaves.

 

Gunjan( after nupur leaves): Theek hai samrat, ab bahut der ho rahi hai. Mujhe chalna chaahiye.

 

Samrat: Par me tumhe drop kar doonga na chashmish?

 

Gunjan: Nahi samrat. Me aaj di ke saath jaaungi. Vaise bhi, kuch to unhe pareshaan kar raha hai. Aaj mujhe unke saath hi rehena chaahiye.

 

Samrat: Me bhi chaloo kya, nupur ko manaane?

 

Nupur: I think ki agar tum bhi aaoge, to voh mujhse apna problem share nahi karengi.

 

Samrat: Theek hai. Kal milte hai. Aur, koi problem ho to mujhe phone zaroor karna. Bye!!

 

Gunjan: bye.

 

IN THE CANTEEN:

 

Diya is sitting with RJ.

 

RJ: Tumhe pata hai, tumhe dekhte hi mujhe pata chal gaya tha, ki we are made for each other.

 

Diya:Par tum mujhe ek bade flirt lagte ho!(smiles)

 

RJ: You should consider yourself lucky, kyonki Rannvijay har ladki ke saath flirt nahi karta!

 

Diya blushes.

Samrat comes in and he sees diya and RJ.

 

Samrat: hey candy!!

Diya: Oh, hi samrat!!

RJ: CANDY?!?! To yeh hai tumhara pet name? Very sweet. Vaise to tum candy jaisi hi ho!

 

Samrat, as usual, is very frusterated over RJ. He is about to leave, when diya calls him:

 

Diya: sammy, itni jaldi me kyon ho?

 

Samrat: kuch nahi, kissi se milna hai, isliye. See you.

 

RJ:Lagta hai kisi ki bahut jal rahi hai!!

 

Samrat turns back. He feels like going up to him, and punching him on the face, but beji stops him.

 

Benji: Chill dude, ise baad me deekh lenge!!   

 

 

 

IN THE COLLEGE CAMPUS:

 

Gunjan waits in the college campus for a long time, but does not see nupur. Then she goes near the gate, when she spots nupur crossing the road. Nupur is lost in her own world of sorrow, and does not pay attention to where she is walking.

Suddenly,

Gunjan shouts from behind: Di, sambhaal ke!!!!!!

 

Nupur turns behind all of a sudden, and she collides with a car. She lies on the road bleeding profusely.

 

Gunjan: DI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

A lot of people crowd around her, and she is rushed to the hospital.

 

IN THE HOSPITAL:

 

 

Gunjan calls her friends and lets them know.

Doctor comes.

 

Gunjan(with tears in her eyes): Doctor, di ab kaisi hai?

 

Doctor: arre, tum itni kyon ghabra rahi ho? She's perfectly fine. Haath thoda chil gaya hai, aur minor internal bleeding hai. But, its all okay now. Tum usse jaakar ab mil sakte ho.

 

Gunjan: thank you doctor!

Gunjan rushes to nupur's room. There she sees nupur lying on the bed.

 

Gunjan: di!! Thank god youre fine.

 

She goes and hugs nupur.

 

Nupur: are are, itni rone ki kya zaroorat hai? Mein bilkul theek hoon!!

 

Gunjan: Phir bhi'. Aur aap mere liye kyun nahi ruki?? Mein aa jaati na?? Aur yeh subah se aap ko kya pareshaan kar raha hai??

 

Nupur: Kuch nahi, mujhe lagaa ki tu samrat ke saath aane vaali thi.

 

Gunjan: Mujhe pata hai ki kuch to hai, isliye apka accident hua. Par aap ab baat mat keejiye. Aap ko aaraam ki zaroorat hai.

 

Nupur: arre gunjan, tu ne papa ko to nahi bataaya na??

 

Gunjan: bas abhi bataane hi vaali hoon. Aur samrat, uday bhaiyya, diya, CJ, sab aa rahe hain.

 

Nupur(holds Gunjan's hand): Sun, tu ab papa ko phone mat kar.

 

Gunjan: Par papa ko to bataana hi hai na di?

 

Nupur: nahi!

 

Gunjan: par kyun?

 

Nupur(in a low voice): kyonki papa ki haalat bahut kharaab hai  

 

Gunjan: Kya??

 

Nupur: Subah ko morena se vinod ka phone aaya tha.( Vinod is just an imaginary character and will have no refereance in future).Unhe dengue hua hai.Thoda khatarnaak vaala hai, islye me pareshaan hoon.Vaise to papa ne mana kar diya tha, hame bataane se, kyonki unhe pata tha ki hum padhaai chod kar yu hi aa jaate. Kehene lage ki hamaari padhaai miss ho jaayegi.

 

Gunjan(now crying even more badly): Par hame jaana to chaahiye na di?

 

Nupur: Agar hum jaayene, to unki haalat aur bhi kharaab ho jaayegi. Aur agar tujhe bataati to tab bhi rone lagti, jaise abhi ro rahi hai, isiliye mujhe pata nahi tha, ki kya karoo!!! Mujhe pata hai ki  tum papa ke kitni kareeb ho. To ab tu hi bataa, mein kya karti??(a tear drop came from her eyes)

 

Gunjan: Aap yeh sab mat sochiye. Aaraam keejiye. Friends aa jaayene na, to aapko khushi hogi.

 

Nupur: Gunjan, tu theek to hai na??

 

Gunjan: Ha di.

 

Nupur: aur'.. mayank aa raha hai kya??

 

Gunjan: maine uska no. try kiya, par busy aa raha tha. Ab ek aur baar try..

 

Nupur: Nahi, rehene de. Aur mujhe promise kar, ki tu papa ko nahi bataaegi. Varna vo toot jaaenge.

 

Gunjan: promise!!! Par unse milne ki bahut ichha ho rahi hai.

 

Nupur(crying): Jaanti hoon, par himmat rakh. Sab theek ho jaayega.

 

They hug each other again, but for a longer time.

Gunjan sits beside nupur, holding her hands.

 

 

That's it guyz, next update, next time. Let me know bout ur views regarding this update.  

 

 

 

Luv,

oorminairTongueTongue

PYAAR AUR NAFRAT KA KHEL(UPDATE 2)

 

 

IN THE HOSPITAL:

 

 

Samrat, diya, uday, CJ are all at the hospital. They are near nupur's bed. Gunjan is also standing nearby.

 

Samrat: Nupur, next time tum akele mat jaana, gunjan tumhare saath rahegi, toh hi acha hoga.

 

Nupur: Bas ek baar gir gayi toh itna issue mat create kar. Mein bilkul theekh hoon. Doctor nehi kahaa, ki mein kal discharge ho sakti hoon.

 

CJ: Nupur, tujhe maine kabhi itna chupchaap nahi dekha, aakhir baat kya hai??

 

Immidiately, gunjan says: baate toh baad me bhi ho sakti hai naa. Agar mr saxena ko pata chala ki  tumlog aise hi college chod kar aaye ho, toh sabko dat padegi.

 

Diya: right, sammy…..chale?

 

Samrat: mein aa raha hoon. Tum log jaao.

 

Everyone leaves.

Samrat grabs gunjan's hand, and takes her out of the room.

 

Samrat: Nupur ne tumse kaha na, ki voh upset kyun thi?

 

Gunjan: na..na…nahi. abhi tak toh nahi. Unse poochna padega, par ab nahi, unhye aaram karne –

 

Samrat(interrupts): Mujhse jhooth kaqhogi chashmish?

 

Gunjan: par –

 

Samrat: Agar voh tujhe nahi bataati, to tumhare aakhon me aasoo nahi hote.

 

Gunjan breaks down.

 

Gunjan: Papa bimaar hai! Isliye……..

Gunjan unknowingly hugs Samrat

 

Samrat comforts her.

 

Samrat: Don't worry, voh jald hi theekh ho jaayenge. Promise!

He couldn't think of anything else. He just wanted Gunjan to stop crying.

 

Gunjan: Aur…. Samrat, yeh kisi se mat kehena, benji se bhi nahi.

 

Samrat: Don't worry, tum mujhpe trust kar sakti ho.

 

 

Gunjan: Aur… mein kuch dino ke liye college nahi aaongi. Di ka kyaal rakhna hai.

 

Samrat: Mein har din  ghar aa jaaonga, koi madat ki zaroorat ho toh bas phone kar dena.

 

Gunjan: Thanks Samrat!

 

Samrat: No thanks. Nupur tumhari behen hai, toh vih meri bhi behen hai. By the way, Mayank pehele hi mil ke gaya hai kya nupur ko?

 

Gunjan: Nahi, di ne bulaane se manaa kar diya.

 

Samrat:Toh phir mein ab hospital teher jaaoo?

 

Gunjan: Nahi, tum college jaao. Mein sambhaal loongi. Bye.

 

Samrat: ok, bye. Par yaad hai na?, problem toh mujhe…

 

Gunjan: Haan, phone karoongi.

 

Samrat goes. Gunjan thinks about how much Samrat cares for her. She is deeply touched by his understanding nature.

 

In the meanwhile, when samrat is on his way back to college, he thinks: Toh mayank ko nahi pata, ki nupur hospital me hai. Isiliye, sab ke aane ke baavjoot nupur ka chehera isliye nahi khila tha kyoki, mayank nahi tha. Nupur ko vaapas khush dekhne ke liye, mayank ko to bataana hi padega.

 

 

IN THE COLLEGE CAMPUS:

 

Samrat sees mayank near the notice board. Benji is standing next to him. He goes to benji.

 

Benji: Dude!!! Kahaa tha  tu???

 

 

Samrat: Hospital(in a sad tone)

 

Benji(mayank was also listening): Nupur ka accident ho gaya hai, isliye.

 

Mayank(totally absolutely shocked): KYA?!?!

 

Samrat: College ke baahar uska accident hua tha.

 

Mayank: Kaunsa hospital?

 

Samrat: Lilavati hospital.

 

Samrat gives mayank the room no.

Mayank goes to the telephone booth. Calls his mom.

 

Mayank(on the phone): Maa, me thode der se aaonga. Hospital jaa raha hoon. Nupur ka accident hua.

 

Mayank's mom: KYA? Ruk jaa, me bhi aati hoon. Saat me jaate hain.

 

Mayank: Theekh hai maa. College a jaana, vahaa se saath me jaayenge.

 

Keeps the phone.

 

For the first time, Mayank does not bother about the fact that he is bunking all the lectures of the day. Actually, he doesent even care.

He's waiting for his mom.

 

Mom comes. Both of them leave for the hospital. They reach.

 

IN THE HOSPITAL:

 

Both of them go to naupur's room, where they see her with gunjan.

 

Mayank's mom(MM): Nupur beta! Kya hua?????

 

Nupur sees mayank and MM blasting into the room. She just keeps looking at mayank. Mayank is also looking at her. His eyes were moist(i.e. he had tears in his eyes, which he controlled)

 

Nupur feels so happy when she sees that concern in mayank's eyes. Suddenly, switching back to reality, she responds to MM.

 

Nupur: Zyaada kuch nahi aunty. Bas thodi chot lagi hai. By god aunty, aap bhi naa. Subah se sab yahi keh rahe hai.Par mein Nupur Bhushan hoon. Chaahe chot jitni bhi lage, dard mujhe utna nahi hota!(gives a smile)

 

MM hugs her.

 

Mayank: Kaisi ho?

 

Nupur: of ho, aunty, ab aap hi is sadu ko samjhaayiye, kab se keh rahi hoon, ki theekh hoon! Phir bhi, peheli baar isne itni polite baat ki hai.

 

Mayank gives a slight smile. He still thinks nupur was upset becoz of his rude behaviour.

 

MM: Zyaada baat mat kar beta. Tere dekh baal ki zimmedaari meri.

 

Gunjan: Aunty, aap itni kyun mehenat kar rahi hai, mein hoon na.

 

Nupur: Vahi toh aunty, gunjan mere saath hai na.

 

MM: Bechari ka college miss ho jaayega na? Aur tu meri beti jaisi hai. Aur ek maa hi toh apne bacho ki dekh rekh karti hai.

 

Nupur hugs MM.

 

Nupur: Voh sab toh theek hai aunty, par is sadu ko jealous feel toh nahi hoga naa??

 

MM: Toh kya? Usse vaise bhi bahut pyaar har din jholi mein bhar ke deti hoon.

 

Mayank smiles.

 

Mayank: Theek hai, mein chalta hoon. Get well soon nupur…….. aur haa, tumhari notes mein banaa doonga.

 

Nupur(smiles): Thanks mayank!

 

Mayank doesent want to go, but he still leaves the room. He is very concerned about nupur's condition. He now completely knows that he LOVES nupur, and he is accepting it. Infact, he is considering himself lucky, that he has found a girl like nupur.

 

IN EXCELCOLLEGE:

 

Diya, annie, and chako are sitting in tha canteen.

RV(Rannvijay) sees them.

 

RV:Hey beautiful!(looking at diya) Thode der ke liye kaha gayab ho gayi thi? I was really missing you.

 

Diya: Its none of your business!

 

RV: Ab agar mein tumhaara future boyfriend hoon, toh it is my business.

 

Diya: tum bohot bol rahe ho. Thank your stars ki samrat yahaa nahi hai, nahi toh voh…. Forget it. Tumse toh baat karma hi bekaar hai.

 

Diya gets up and goes along with annie and chako.

 

RV:Samrat, samrat. Samrat…….. tu hamesha mere raaste me kyu aata hai???? Not a problem, tera kya karma hai, yeh to mein achi tarah jaanta hoon.(he's talking to himself)

 

 

OK guyz. Hope you liked it. Let me know how it waz. Ill try and update soon, but im goin 2 shimla 4 a week. JAI MJHT!!!(Ill miss MJHT in that 1 week!!!!!)CryCry

 

Luv,

oorminairSmileTongueWink

PYAAR AUR NAFRAT KA KHEL(UPDATE 3)

 

 

IN THE HOSPITAL:

 

Nupur: Gunjan, ab jaakar kuch khaa le. Kab se bhooki padi hai!

 

MM: Ha beta, jaakar kuch khaa lo, mein yahi nupur ke saath rahoongi.

 

Gunjan: Nahi aunty, mujhe bhook nahi hai. Its ok.

 

Mayank is on his way back to college. He's really worried for nupur.

 

Mayank(to himself): Maine hi kuch keh diya hoga! Isliye, nahi toh yeh sab hota hi nahi. Hamesha usse rudely baat ki, usse door rehene ke liye, aur ab isi ke vajah se voh hospital mein! Yeh tujhe kya ho gaya hai mayank?? Ek baar bhi nahi socha, ki nupur ko kaisa lagega, tere baat karneki tarike se??

 

He reaches the college gate. Pays for the auto, and quietly walks in. In front of him, he finds Mr.Saxena.

 

Mr.Saxena(in a very angry tone):Koi mela laga hai kya aaj, ki college ke sab students ek ek kar ke baahar jaake vaapas aa rahe hai??!! Aur koi mela ho, toh bhi tum jaisa ek smart student ko bhi aisi harkat karte dakhte hue mujhe sharam aa rahi hai!!!!!!!

 

 

Mayank: Sir, mein ek vajah se gaya tha. Nupur hospital mein admit ho gayi hai. Usse dekhne gaya tha.

 

 

Mr.Saxena: Mein jaanta hoon Mayank, lekin college khatam hone ke baad bhi toh jaa sakte the tum?? Itne lectures bunk karkar jaane ki kya zaroorat thi? Aur bhale hi dusre students aise kare, maine tumse yeh expect nahi kiya tha!

 

Mayank: Sir, nupur meri bohot achi dost hai. Lekin aisa dubaara nahi hoga.

 

Mr.Saxena: Tum peheli baa aise kar rahe ho, isliye tumhe sirf warning de raha hoon, Samjhe?

 

Mayank: Yes sir, Sorry sir.

 

Mr.Saxena walks away. Mayank goes to class.

 

IN MAYANK'S CLASS

 

Mayank is not able to concentrate at all. His mind is stll revolving around nupur and how she lay in the hospital.

 

Soon after the class is over, Mayank goes to the telephone booth and calls his mom.

 

Mayank on the phone: Maa, sab theek toh hai?

 

MM(Realizing that Mayank is really concerned): Haa beta, sab theek hai, ab ghar pe jaa ke aaraam kar. Mein ghar nahi aa rahi, Nupur ke saath hospital mein rahoongi, Theek hai?

 

Mayank: Ji,,aur………..Nupur ab kaisi hai?

 

MM: Theek hai, so rahi hai, chal, ab phone rak. Bye!

 

Mayank: Bye.

 

IN THE BASKETBALL COURT(IN EXCEL):

 

Diya is sitting on the bench. RV comes.

 

RV: Maine suna hai ki voh Gunjan tumhari cousin hai?

 

Diya(angrily): haa, hai, toh?!?!

 

RV: Yeh bhi suna hai ki tumhara "Sammy" uske saath bohot time bitata hai, right?

 

Diya: Tumhe in sabse kya karma hai!

 

RV walks away. In his mind, he thinks.

 

RV:Toh voh behenji diya ki cousin hai, aur samrat ki best friend bhi! Great!! Ek nishaane pe do panchi!!

 

 

After college. Samrat goes to the hospital.

 

IN THE HOSPITAL:

 

Samrat(to gunjan): Chashmish, mein aaj hospital mein  tumhaare saath rahoo kya?

 

Gunjan: Nahi, its ok. Mayank ki mom hai mere saath.

 

Samrat:Toh phir kal college aa rahi ho?

 

Gunjan: Maine kaha na samrat, mein di ke saath rahoongi.

 

Samrat: Fine.   

 

Samrat goes.

 

THE NEXT DAY:

 

MM wakes gunjan, who had layed her head on the bed, next to Nupur.

 

MM: Gunjan, uth jaa beta, ghar pe jaake fresh ho jaa.

 

Gunjan wakes up.

 

Gunjan: Aunty, aap ghar jaayiye. Mayank aapka intezaar kar raha hoga.

 

MM: Ek kaam karte hai, hum dono hi ruk jaate hai. Vaise bhi, discharge papers lekar doctor abhi aate hi honge.

 

Gunjan: Theek kai aunty.

 

Doc comes with the discharge papers. Nupur is discharged.  MM and Gunjan take Nupur home.

 

AT GUNJAN AND NUPUR'S HOUSE:

 

Dia and Uday are getting ready for college.

 

Uday: Hey nupur!!!! Kaisi ho??

 

Nupur(with enthusiasm): theek hoo uday bhaiyaa!

 

Diya doesn't pay much attention. She simply leabes for college.

 

Diya: Dodo!!!! Jaldi aao!

 

Uday: Yeh deeds bhi naa! College ke baad milte hai nupur! Aur gunjan, tu toh ghar pe hi rahegi na?

 

Gunjan: Haan uday bhaiyaa.

 

Nupur: Voh kyun?? Gunjan, tu aaj college jaayegi, bas. Mein bilkul theek hoon.

 

Gunjan: Nahi di, voh………

 

Nupur: Kuch mat bol, tu jaa rahi hai! Bas!

 

MM: Nupur theek keh rahi hai beta. Tum college jaao.

 

Nupur: Aur aunty, aap bhi ghar pe jaakar aaram keejiye. Raatbhar aap bhi jagti rahi na?

 

MM: Aur tujhe yahaan akele chod du? Bilkul nahi!

 

Gunjan: Vahi toh mein keh rahi hoon aunty. Mein aaj di ke saath reheti hoon.

 

MM: Gunjan, tu tayaar ho jaa, mein yahaa hi hoon.

 

Gunjan cannot say no coz MM is adement over staying with Nupur.

 

She goes in to get refreshed. Then. Samrat's no. flashes on her cellphone.

 

Gunjan: Hello

 

Samrat: Nupur discharge ho gayi kya?

 

Gunjan: Haan. Sab theek hai……. Aur.. mein college aa rahi hoon.

 

Samrat: Par tum toh keh rahi thi………….

 

Gunjan: Pata hai. Lekin Mayank ki mom ne mujhe force kar diya, aur di neb hi.

 

Samrat: Akele aa rahi ho?

 

Gunjan: Uday bhaiyaa aur Diya ke saath.

 

Samrat: Theek hai. College mein milte hai.

 

Gunjan: Bye.

 

IN COLLEGE CAMPUS:

 

Gunjan walks into the college.

 

RV sees her.

 

RV: Gunjan, right?

 

Gunjan nods her head. She is not quite comfortable speaking to her.

 

RV: Im sorry. Voh, jab mein peheli baar aaya tha, toh maine tumse vo sab kaha. By mistake hua tha.

 

Gunjan was surprised. She didn't know that RV was so nice.

 

RV: Also, tumhari behen ab kaisi hai?

 

Gunjan: Ab theek hai.

 

RV: Friends?(extends his hand to her)

 

Gunjan was astounded. But she was also happy that RV was a real good guy.

 

Gunjan: Ok(shakes her hand with him)

 

RV: Toh phir chalo, saath mein class jaate hai.

 

IN CLASS:

 

Samrat is sitting with Benji.

 

RV and Gunjan walk in, talking .

 

Samrat cannot believe his eyes! Somewhere inside, he's burning with anger!

Diya is shocked as well.

Samrat is staring at them(u know, like how a guy wud do if sum other guy stole his GF, like dat)   


   

IN GUNJAN AND NUPUR'S HOUSE:

 

 

The phone rings.

 

MM picks it up.

 

MM: Nupur, tumhare liye phone hai.

 

Nupur: Aunty, zara cordless par transfer kar do na.

 

MM: Ha beta.

 

Nupur answers the cordless.

 

Nupur: Hello

 

Vinod: Hello, nupur didi! Mein vinod baat kar raha hoon. Aapke papa ka bukhaar thoda saa uthar gaya hai.

 

Nupur: Kya baat kar raha hai?!!!! Sach?

 

Vinod: Haa, aur doctor ne kaha hi, ki kuch hi dino mein voh theek ho jaayenge.

 

Nupur: Khabar sunaane ke liye thanx.

 

Nupur keeps the phone.

 

MM: Kya hua beta?

 

Nupur tells MM everything.

 

MM: Toh yeh baat thi?

 

Nupur: haa aunty. Par ab aap dekho, Gunjan ko mein yeh khabar doongi, toh voh kitni khush ho jaayegi! Finally, sab theek ho raha hai!!!

 

 

So that's it guyz, everythings becum ok, But the story has not ended yet. There's still a lot. So keep reading. And let me know how you liked dis update!!

 

Luv,

oorminairSmileTongueWink

 



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Its a really good start....
u have really put a solution to what RV might do when he sees Gunjan
You write really well.....Don't worry and do continue soon I want to know why is Nupur upset........And what's gonna happen later
Do continue soon loved it...
Love
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hey!
really good start there!!i like it!do update soon:]

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oh its really nice i want to read more pls do cont soon i will be waiting

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I'd love to read more! Please continue...!
I really want to know what's up with Nupur...

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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue im really looking forward to this  ff its really nice do continue soon
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Originally posted by TINAMALHONTRA


Its a really good start....
u have really put a solution to what RV might do when he sees Gunjan
You write really well.....Don't worry and do continue soon I want to know why is Nupur upset........And what's gonna happen later
Do continue soon loved it...
Love
Tina
 
I agree!
I simply loved the beginning! I'm dying to read the next part! Please update soon!

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heyy
i loved the beginning part!!!
it was wonderful!!
it was also very realistic.....
u write extermely well.....
i really want to read more......
plzzz continue soon
and do PM me when u update next.....
 

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