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Aww this was an amzing intro...
plzz cont. soon..
nd can  uplzz pm me if possible..
 
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Hi guys im updating another part ok enjoy.

recap- raj talks to ridz about the rishta from mumbai.
 
Some where in the ouskirts of mumbai lived a happy and rich family.
Rohan- MAMU APP KAHA HO.!!!!
Rohan Malik -chota sweet sa bacha apne mamu koh dundh raha hai.
A-hey champ kya baat hai kya hua.
Rohan- Mamu mujhe bahar khelna hai lekin mama naa bol rahi hai.
A-ohh yeh baat hai, tikh hai hum mumma se baat karte hai chalo.
 
On the other hand we see Sahil Malik talking on the phone, with a happy expression.
 S- ji acha hum chaar din bad madhupur aarahe hai. ji namaste.
 Just then Aditi (his wife) enters and sees him put the phone.
A-Sahil tum kise baat karahe te.
S- are Aditi acha hua tum mill gayyi, woh meine kaha tha na armaan kilye ek rishta aaya hai, bus rajendra ji se baat karaha tha . woh log chate hai ki hum chaar din baad madhupur jayye. Itne din mein Armaan se baat ho jayegi aur unki beti se bhi milenge.
A- yeh toh bohot achi baat hai.
S- acha suno tum plz Muskaan se baat karo aur use kaho ki Armaan ko raazi karde ladki koh dekhne kilye tikh hai.
A- ha yeh acha rahega, Armaan Muskaan ki baat koh kabhi nahi dalta.
S- lekin bache sab hai kaha.
A- armaan toh Rohan ke saath hai aur Rahul Office aur Muskaan ki aaj chuti thi hospital se toh woh abhi kitchen mein hai.
S- tikh hai mein bhi office kilye nikal tah hu, raat ko ake baat karte hai tikh hai.
Sahil leaves and Aditi resumes her work in the kitchen with Muskaan.
 
Aditi thinks that she should talk to Muskaan and get her to talk to Armaan.
A- muskaan beta mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni thi.
M- Ha mom boliye kya baat hai.
A- woh beta Armaan kilye  ek rishta aaya hai aur.....
muskaan cutting in between
M- aur aap chati hai ke mein Armaan se baat karu takhi woh ladki se miley haina.
A- ha beta kya tum use baat karogi tumhe toh pata hai woh tumhari baat kabhi nahi talega.
M- mom yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai. Armaan us ladki ko milne zaroor jayega.
with that muskaan and aditi hug. muskaan leaves to go and talk to armaan.
Aditi is in the kitchen praying that every thing goes well.
 
3 hours later...
Muskaan talks to armaan openly and tells him everything about the girl.
Armaan smiles alot while listening about this girl named ridhima gupta.
M-toh ammy ab toh tumhe ridhima ke bare mein sab kuch pata hai.
kya tum use milne jaoge Madhupur.
A- tikh hai bhabhi mein use milne kilye taaiyar hu.
M- sachi
A- muchi
Just then Rahul and Rohan come in Muskaan n Rahul's bedroom.
Ro-Mamu aap shaadi karoge?
A- pata nahi champ abhi toh mein us ladki se milunga phir shayad shaadi ho ya na ho. Jo rab di maarziLOL
Ra- abbey oye dialouge maarna band kar tikh hai. yeh bata tujhe ridhima ke bare sab pata haina abb.
A- ha bhai sab pata hai.
Ra- gud waise yeh sab information ki zaroorat padegi.
A- kyun mein koi uska exam nahi lene jaraha hu. kyun bhabhi
M- bilkul, woh bechari toh abhi se dargayi hogi ke tu use dekhne araha hai.
M- tujhe pata jab tera bhai mujhe dekhne aaya tha na toh ye ek lambi list leke aaya tha saawalon ke.
aur saawal yeh tha "ji ek glass pani milega" in a husky tone pehla bhi yahi aur akhri bhi yahi.
They all burst out laughing except Rahul who was kinda embarrased.
Ra- ha ha toh tikh haina atleast saawal toh pucha tune toh kuch bola bhi nahi.
M- oye tu na chup chap apna newspaper ko dekh hmph news paper ki chati aulad.angry yet teasing tone.
before rahul could react Armaan stepped in and said guys bohot hogaya ab mein aur champ packing karne jarahe hai. with that Armaan and Rohan leave.
 
Scene Shift-
Madhupur
Raj- rani choti jaldi se yeh saaman rakhdo beta.
Ridz-ji chacha ji.chal choti.
 The next day the malik family leaves to visit madhupur
 
Ridz- Choti mujhe bohot darr lagraha hai agar unhone naa kehdi toh.
Anji- di aisa kuch nahi hoga .
Anji then brings ridhima in front of the mirror
Anji- di bhala aise kubsoorat chere ko koi nah ke sakta hai. hmm bolo.
Ridz blushes and says nahi.
They here a honk out side.
Yeah thats right the Malik Family is here.
Guys don't know the rasam but yeah they welcome the family by doing puja.
 
Upstairs Anjali is getting Ridhima ready
This is what Ridhima is wearing:
Saree Blouse
imagine ridhima wearing this with the same hair and lite make up.
Anjali wearing this:
Salwar Kameez
imagine anjali with the same as ridhima.
Armaan wearing this:
these are his jeans
his shirt is
this shirt.
awwwwww!!!
Every one was seated in the Living room area.
Raj- toh Armaan beta kaise ho tum
A- ji mein tikh hu uncle app boliye.
Raj- mein toh bohot acha hu.
Sahil- toh kahiye Rajendra ji hum apki Ridhima se kab mill sakte hai.
Raj- ji abhi mein use bulata hu.
Raj goes upstaires and Anjali and Raj Bring Ridhima down.
Armaan looks up do see the most beautiful girl in the world.
THIS background music fits the scene perfectly :
    Ridhima is really shy and worried at the moment she looks up only to find Armaan staring at her.
She luks down blushing, but Ridhima couldn't help but notice his blue grey eyes.
They bring ridhima to were every one was sitting.
all were smiling and giggling as to how armaan was staring at ridz.
So to break the awkwardness muskaan speaks up
M- toh ridhima tum kaha tukh padhi ho.
Ri-ji mein woh meine abhi apni doctary ki degree hassil ki hai mein apni internship Sanjeevani mein karna chati hu.
M- wow mein Sanjeevani mein ek senior doctor hu kya baat hai.
M- i hope u get accepted.
Ri - thank u.smiling and a little more comfortable.
Sahil- Armaan beta tum ridhima se kuch puchna chate ho ya
A-umm uhh dad app sab hi puchlo making it obvious that he is really nervous.
Ro- aunty kya app meri nayi masi hai.
everyone laughed at rohan's comment
M- Rohan yeh apki tab masi bane gi jab mamu aur yeh ek saath baat karenge.
S-yeh baat toh hai raj ji agar app bura na mane to mujhe lagta hai ki ridhima aur armaan ko ek baar akele mein baat karni chahiye.
Raj- ji bilkul , Choti in dono go garden mein lejao
Ro- mein bhi jaonga
M- mein in logo ko chod ke aati hu
ammy, ridz, anjie. muski aur rohan sab garden mein jaate hain
M- anjali, in dono ko waqt lagega toh hum chale
A- ha bhabhi chaliye
M n A- good luck
ar- both embarrased.
A- umm dekhiye mujhe lagta hai ki hume ek dosre ke past mein jana zaroori hai toh pehle mein apne aap ke bare mein bata do.
A- school mein, main bohot hi acha raha hu, college abhi katam kiya aur dad ki factory mein ek trainee hu.
Business karna chata hu. ek ladki ki thi jise mein pasand karta tha lekin phir pata chala uski engagament ho chuki hai.
A- agar aap kuch aur puchna chahe toh puch sakti hai.
R- jo kuch puchna tha uska jawaab mujhe milgaya hai.
A- mujhe pata chala hai ki tumhe kitaabe padhni achi lagti hai
R- umm ha
A- saari sanskrit mein
R- sab nahi lekin kuch kuch achi lagti hai.
A- hmmmm
R- app ki hobbies kya hai
A- tennis, reading, aur painting
A- tum hari
R- track, reading, ghana aur painting.
A- cool umm tumhe painting aati hai
R- ha mere paas kuch umm paintings hai app dekhna pasand karenge.
A- ha kyun nahi
They stand and go to the ridz painting room
Armaan was shocked  at what he saw
The room was filled with pictures he was so lost in them that he didn't realize that ridhima had been calling him
R- ummm armaan , armaan
A- huh oh umm ha sry.
A- wow yeh toh bohot achi hai
A- agar mein tumse kuch pucho toh tum bura mano gi
R - nahi\
A- kya tum is shaddi kilye taayar ho
R- agar app ha kahe toh
A- meri toh ha hi hai
Hearing that Muskaan n Anjali run up and scream in joy
 thnx guys thats the end of part 1-4 not labled sry
 misha do tell if i should contine pm will be sent later.
 
 Pre-cap- Sahil- hum chate hai ki aaj hi saagayi aaj hi ho
Raj- ji yeh toh bohot achi baat hai
 
 misha Smile

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Awesome cont... soon

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Posted: 08 April 2009 at 7:13pm | IP Logged
Awww wonderful part hun..
YAY! AR r gonna get  married....
plzz cont. soon nd thnxxx for da pm!
 
Luv SAZ!

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loved the part do continue soon.

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plz continue soon it was awesome

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i just love this fanfic lol

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