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"Get up lazy" she said to her sister who was trying to cover her ears up with the pillows and the sheets. "I said get up" 
"But why do you neeeed?" she said cutely. "Mish it is 5am. Why this happened? WHy are you setting your alarm clock so early and just letting it ring off the hook HUH???" Nadia yelled. Nadia's mom came into the room. "What are you guys doing up so early... what's going on??" she said rubbing her eyes. "And Nadia why are you YELLING? That's it I've had it with your yelling for no reason. You're staying home today." "
You need to stop this bad habit. And until you stop you aren't going anywhere. I don't care if it will take you the rest of my lifeeee I will NOT let this go on do you hear meh" 
" 
) Nadia turned on the shower and began getting ready for it... Once she got in, she start crying "God what is it that I've done? I didn't do anything to her and yet she is hurting me so badly. I already lost Rhina I don't need this Pleaseeeeee Jesus Tell me what I should do. I don't want to get hurt like this always. Please God, show me a way to escape this. In Jesus's name, Amen." 
" "You're very welcome honey. Good work should always be recognized good job 
"" then she went on finnishing her chores. It was almost 7am and she was almost done. Right on schedule. If she finnished by 7:30, she would still have time to get dressed, eat something and watch her favorite show at 8. Her plans are canceled and she's grounded. Now, Nadia can't explore the city and get a chance to see what this new place is like... But on the other side, she has the whole house to herslef for pratically the whole day. So it wasn't going to be that bad. The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:
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And you don't have to thank me for reading, I read it because I want to and I like it, not out of force. :) This really does look like a promising story!
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And you don't have to thank me for reading, I read it because I want to and I like it, not out of force. :) This really does look like a promising story! this is soo nice yaar 
Its slow right now of course but soon... big things happening
u know like a storyteller is reading it. i'll find out what its called but yeah.. everything is flowing fine u know..? like i dont have any trouble figuring out what they are going to say. or their actions.. but the only part is i cant figure out how to write this so i can tell the story and still explain people's feelings.. and actions and scenery.. oh well.. more practice
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*Nishi*
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Mrs.MuffinSobti
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And you don't have to thank me for reading, I read it because I want to and I like it, not out of force. :) This really does look like a promising story! this is soo nice yaar Its slow right now of course but soon... big things happening u know like a storyteller is reading it. i'll find out what its called but yeah.. everything is flowing fine u know..? like i dont have any trouble figuring out what they are going to say. or their actions.. but the only part is i cant figure out how to write this so i can tell the story and still explain people's feelings.. and actions and scenery.. oh well.. more practice I know, sometimes I feel the same way...I have so many ideas that I just end up rushing everything to get to the part I want. lol
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phew... dont feel like commenting, love ur new avi and siggie text
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