Writers Corner: Books, Stories & Poems

India-Forums

   
Writers Corner: Books, Stories & Poems
Writers Corner: Books, Stories & Poems

Somedays - updated page 41 (Page 3)

*Nishi* IF-Sizzlerz
*Nishi*
*Nishi*

Joined: 26 January 2008
Posts: 14008

Posted: 17 April 2009 at 5:41pm | IP Logged

double post



Edited by *Nishi* - 17 April 2009 at 6:17pm

muffins2waffles IF-Sizzlerz
muffins2waffles
muffins2waffles

Joined: 11 September 2008
Posts: 12894

Posted: 17 April 2009 at 7:59pm | IP Logged
Hi Nishi! I really liked it!
 
The part with Oliver was ultra cute, I do the same with me diary, haha!
There are a few grammar mistakes, but nothing big at all thats unfixable. I'd like to learn more about Nadia's home life. She's a really interesting character.
 
Again, I loved it...so please update quickly!
*Nishi* IF-Sizzlerz
*Nishi*
*Nishi*

Joined: 26 January 2008
Posts: 14008

Posted: 17 April 2009 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MusicalAiswarya

Hi Nishi! I really liked it! thank u thank u thank thank uHug
 
The part with Oliver was ultra cute, I do the same with me diary, haha! yeahh..Embarrassed
There are a few grammar mistakes, but nothing big at all thats unfixable. Yeah I was writing in a hurryLOL I can fix it later I'd like to learn more about Nadia's home life. She's a really interesting character. 
 
Again, I loved it...so please update quickly!
 
wow thank u so much yaarHug 
thank you so much for reading and commenting
i'll try to updat as soon as I canBig smile
Girl_2007 IF-Rockerz
Girl_2007
Girl_2007

Joined: 25 November 2007
Posts: 5733

Posted: 18 April 2009 at 9:48am | IP Logged

Nadia... she is a nice girl Smile, she has got her first detention in the first chap.. what a beginning! LOL.. j/king...  Smile

cant remember who are the other characters nor how many they are... Confused glad of that in the first chap, there were less characters Big smile thanku!
Oliver... is it a small ball? Tongue oh btw, i too think that the oliver part was cute... Smilehow old is Nadia? yep, she sounds childish talking to a ball, and immature saying things about balls... she reminds me of someone, who writes wierd things about balls LOL...
ouch... is her sis younger or older?? that makes me guess better wich kind of torture Nadia bears... LOLConfused no really... Smile, we older sis are different and comprensive u know.. SmileLOL ok enough!
yes, its good to express ur feelings to something physical, our faith, isnt alway strong enough... and sometimes even if that physical thing doesnt reply u, atleast u know that its hearing u, coz is there... and u dont always need a reply back... right? Smile
muffins2waffles IF-Sizzlerz
muffins2waffles
muffins2waffles

Joined: 11 September 2008
Posts: 12894

Posted: 18 April 2009 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
Your welcome Nishi! Great job again!
*Nishi* IF-Sizzlerz
*Nishi*
*Nishi*

Joined: 26 January 2008
Posts: 14008

Posted: 18 April 2009 at 4:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by NIDIZ

Good work!!
thanksBig smile
*Nishi* IF-Sizzlerz
*Nishi*
*Nishi*

Joined: 26 January 2008
Posts: 14008

Posted: 18 April 2009 at 4:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Girl_2007

Nadia... she is a nice girl Smile, she has got her first detention in the first chap.. what a beginning! LOL.. j/king...  Smile

cant remember who are the other characters nor how many they are... Confused glad of that in the first chap, there were less characters Big smile thanku! i made it easy for u dearLOL
Oliver... is it a small ball? Tongue oh btw, i too think that the oliver part was cute... Smilehow old is Nadia? 14 yaar 14AngryLOL yep, she sounds childish talking to a ball, and immature saying things about balls... she reminds me of someone, who writes wierd things about balls LOL...  ya i wonder who this person is...LOL
ouch... is her sis younger or older??  youngerWinkthat makes me guess better wich kind of torture Nadia bears... LOLConfused no really... Smile, we older sis are different and comprensive u know.. SmileLOL ok enough! u said it ClapClapClapwe are so mature yaarLOL
yes, its good to express ur feelings to something physical, our faith, isnt alway strong enough... and sometimes even if that physical thing doesnt reply u, atleast u know that its hearing u, coz is there... and u dont always need a reply back... right? Smile yes ouf courseBig smile 
thank u so much archanaHug
*Nishi* IF-Sizzlerz
*Nishi*
*Nishi*

Joined: 26 January 2008
Posts: 14008

Posted: 18 April 2009 at 4:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MusicalAiswarya

Your welcome Nishi! Great job again!
 
aww thanksEmbarrassed
 
wow u really like it...
i'll see if i can post the next part tonightSmile

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Nothing like before|Page 18

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 19 20

Author: WildestDreams   Replies: 152   Views: 15093

WildestDreams 152 15093 29 August 2010 at 8:04am by WildestDreams
Idiots ka Jalwa - page 87

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 84 85

Author: *Nishi*   Replies: 678   Views: 27589

*Nishi* 678 27589 30 July 2010 at 9:24am by Girl_2007
Just Another Story| Intros page 1

2

Author: iwantitall   Replies: 10   Views: 1456

iwantitall 10 1456 10 April 2010 at 8:45am by *Nishi*
Kya Yahi Pyar Hai: Episode 57 on page 20

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 19 20

Author: .:Misty:.   Replies: 158   Views: 20237

.:Misty:. 158 20237 01 March 2010 at 8:19pm by .:Misty:.
Trespassers. Proluge Page 1

Author: MrMonster   Replies: 7   Views: 883

MrMonster 7 883 23 February 2010 at 12:08pm by meggs

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Writers Corner: Books, Stories & Poems Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index