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hinnaaaa

i said give me some good reasons😲😆

am still thinking about it yaar

but i need some new people here... but if u give some good reasons i might add u

hahha😆

no i dont think soo..

this one i made up my myself

you guys might be suprised how this story turns out

Sounds like a good and cute story at the same time!

Love the cake part...please continue!

 

A-d--o-r-e-d the way you put the plot together.

Nadia threw the ball again and instead of swishing threw the net it banged off the wall and hit her on the head😆 "Ughhhhh" she yelled. "Why do the balls always have to hit me😡 Eww.. that souded a little weird..." Now that she started talking again she thought she might as well just tell about her whole day to this little ball.

 

"Do you know what happened today ball? Wait, calling you ball sounds a little weird. I need to name you. Now let's see if there are any special marks on you so I can tell the diffrence between you and other balls." Nadia looked all around the ball and found that it had small dark lines that none of the other balls had. "Hmmm" she thought. "I think I'll name you Oliver! Yeah that's right. So as I was saying... Oliver😳 Today I did something very bad. I was in line and I was talking to this other girl about our music teacher. I was making all these funny jokes and laughing when I heard that same teacher call me from behind😲 She said... Nadia... what is this I hear. Now I have detention after school tomorrow. I've never really had detention before... I wonder what it's like. Nadia threw the ball against the wall now. "OOoooh that has to hurt. Sorry Oliver it must feel horrible to be thrown against the wall😆 It looks like you're a new ball though... it's ok you'll get used to it😉 Je promise. 

 

She tossed the ball a few more times and decided it was time to head home. She sighed. Home.

 

Life was hard living with a crazy family. With a sister whose every moment was spent trying to hurt you. And not that kind of hurting. The hurting that makes you feels so bad... and terrible. Like you can't do anything right. And then having no one to talk to about your pain. It's like burning yourslef on the inside But Nadia's learned to deal with it. And to never trust someone with your heart. She was just about to leave when she had one more thing to say to Oliver.

 

"Oliver, I have to go now but I promise to come back and visit more often. And if it's ok, maybe I can talk to you like this more often?😳 You see, I don't have anyone to talk to right now except for God of course. But it always helps to talk to someone physical too. Even if it's just a ball. Something that can't even talk back. But you're a special ball. And don't eve let anyone tell you that you aren't!!😃 Good bye Oliver..."  She set him back on the shelf and sped off on her bike into the woods.

 

 

 

 

 

 

The part with Oliver was ultra cute, I do the same with me diary, haha!

There are a few grammar mistakes, but nothing big at all thats unfixable. I'd like to learn more about Nadia's home life. She's a really interesting character.

 

Again, I loved it...so please update quickly!

 

wow thank u so much yaar🤗 

thank you so much for reading and commenting

i'll try to updat as soon as I can😃

cant remember who are the other characters nor how many they are... 😕 glad of that in the first chap, there were less characters 😃 thanku!

Oliver... is it a small ball? 😛 oh btw, i too think that the oliver part was cute... 😊how old is Nadia? yep, she sounds childish talking to a ball, and immature saying things about balls... she reminds me of someone, who writes wierd things about balls 😆...

ouch... is her sis younger or older?? that makes me guess better wich kind of torture Nadia bears... 😆😕 no really... 😊, we older sis are different and comprensive u know.. 😊😆 ok enough!

yes, its good to express ur feelings to something physical, our faith, isnt alway strong enough... and sometimes even if that physical thing doesnt reply u, atleast u know that its hearing u, coz is there... and u dont always need a reply back... right? 😊

thanks😃