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Posted: 15 April 2009 at 4:52am | IP Logged
She was walking on the weary street all alone...
 
The whole world around her seemed a blur, she could barely see through her tears...
 
She couldnt get that horrifyign image away from her mind
 
...The little girl crying out for her mother, the old man staring blankly into space...
 
The girl's crying seemed to echo in her mind
 
The pain in the girl's eyes was haunting . So much pain. Such a little girl.
 
Equally disheartening was the old man's blank stare that reflected his hopelessness.
 
The day turned to night, and night turned to dawn. She decided to help.
 
The first rays of the sun brought a hint of golden hope.
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Posted: 15 April 2009 at 3:54pm | IP Logged
She was walking on the weary street all alone...
 
The whole world around her seemed a blur, she could barely see through her tears...
 
She couldnt get that horrifyign image away from her mind
 
...The little girl crying out for her mother, the old man staring blankly into space...
 
The girl's crying seemed to echo in her mind
 
The pain in the girl's eyes was haunting . So much pain. Such a little girl.
 
Equally disheartening was the old man's blank stare that reflected his hopelessness.
 
The day turned to night, and night turned to dawn. She decided to help.
 
The first rays of the sun brought a hint of golden hope.
 
She retraced her path and took small steps to wear she had witnessed the scene.
 
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Posted: 19 April 2009 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
She was walking on the weary street all alone...
 
The whole world around her seemed a blur, she could barely see through her tears...
 
She couldnt get that horrifyign image away from her mind
 
...The little girl crying out for her mother, the old man staring blankly into space...
 
The girl's crying seemed to echo in her mind
 
The pain in the girl's eyes was haunting . So much pain. Such a little girl.
 
Equally disheartening was the old man's blank stare that reflected his hopelessness.
 
The day turned to night, and night turned to dawn. She decided to help.
 
The first rays of the sun brought a hint of golden hope.
 
She retraced her path and took small steps to wear she had witnessed the scene.
 
She could hear her heart pouding faster and louder as she got near the scene.
 
 
Guys this is turning out really well!!Big smile
 

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Posted: 07 May 2009 at 3:12pm | IP Logged
She was walking on the weary street all alone...
 
The whole world around her seemed a blur, she could barely see through her tears...
 
She couldnt get that horrifyign image away from her mind
 
...The little girl crying out for her mother, the old man staring blankly into space...
 
The girl's crying seemed to echo in her mind
 
The pain in the girl's eyes was haunting . So much pain. Such a little girl.
 
Equally disheartening was the old man's blank stare that reflected his hopelessness.
 
The day turned to night, and night turned to dawn. She decided to help.
 
The first rays of the sun brought a hint of golden hope.
 
She retraced her path and took small steps to wear she had witnessed the scene.
 
She could hear her heart pouding faster and louder as she got near the scene.
 
And then it hit her. The solution to everything. Her mind whirled with apprehension, yet a feeling of new found excitement.
 
Yea, it is Nishi! Smile
 
NaughtySon Senior Member
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Posted: 10 June 2009 at 4:43am | IP Logged
She was walking on the weary street all alone...
 
The whole world around her seemed a blur, she could barely see through her tears...
 
She couldnt get that horrifyign image away from her mind
 
...The little girl crying out for her mother, the old man staring blankly into space...
 
The girl's crying seemed to echo in her mind
 
The pain in the girl's eyes was haunting . So much pain. Such a little girl.
 
Equally disheartening was the old man's blank stare that reflected his hopelessness.
 
The day turned to night, and night turned to dawn. She decided to help.
 
The first rays of the sun brought a hint of golden hope.
 
She retraced her path and took small steps to wear she had witnessed the scene.
 
She could hear her heart pouding faster and louder as she got near the scene.
 
And then it hit her. The solution to everything. Her mind whirled with apprehension, yet a feeling of new found excitement.
 
She clenched her fist, closed her eyes and her midn raced back to the days when she was much younger clinging to her father's arm and walking by the side of the road when she saw a donkey being hit by a car!
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Posted: 23 June 2009 at 8:43am | IP Logged
and it was then that she had realised hw important a life was when she saw her father running for help..
 
hi m new here!
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Posted: 29 July 2009 at 5:59am | IP Logged
She did'nt know her father even cared for animal's lifes,but why not his then?
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Posted: 04 August 2009 at 8:02pm | IP Logged
it sounds great~~

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