|~*~|pyaar karke pachtaya|~*~|(RM)

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Posted: 14 years ago
 
             !!...pyaar karke pachtaya...!!
 
 
well..guys..on the recent track of rahul n muskaan...and the great sangeet pal's entry...paromeeta and my self nimisha has thot of starting a combine FF...

this...FF is a comic 1 ..with RM as the central lead..!!

there is noo intro to this FF..this FF is just started for a fun tym>!!!..

readers hav the full authority..to comment..n shares there dislikes..!!

as we all know..that...muskaan..is trying rahul feel jealus...n she has got successs...but later on..she will get into a trouble..but our hero rahul wil, come..and safe her like ol hindi picture climax...rahul will come on a horse and then will take Muskaan and go and marry her........Muskaan's wish fulfille

                               PART.....1

 
- muskaan is now happy..that she is married..n now she gets to no..that..she is pregant,,,

mu- rahul..tu baap baane wala hai..

ra- kyaa...muskaan..matlab tu...omg..wooow..im soo happy muskaan i love..u...

...ra(thinking)-Ab Sangeet hamara kuch nahi bigar sakta.........ha ha ha

ra- uss kamine ka naam mat le use batene ki koi zarurat nahi hai..

mu- but rahull..usne humarai kitne hlp ki hai..

ra-..haa bahut hlp ki..hai..muskaan agar tune usko humare baare mai bataya to..mujhse bura koi nahi hoga.

mu-to theek hai,.,,tujhe jo karna hai kar..mai to usse bataungi..


...Ra(thinking)-Muski tu nahi janti mujhe .......i have a plan
Then while muskaan is busy looking for Sangeet's phone no: card........
Rahul takes muski's mobile and quietly takes out the sim cardhe leaves the room

muskaan enters the room..looks for her fone..

mu- huh..?? no sim card..ye rahul ka baccha...rahulllll....kaha hai tuu...

ra- yes jaan..

mu- rahul mera sim card kaha hai..

ra- mujhe nahi pata..

mu- theek hai tu nahi dega naa..mai kal uske office kakar use,,,bata dungi...

ra-muskaan tu samajhti kyu nahi hai..he is not a guud guy..agar tu waha gayi then..mai tujhse kabhi baat nahi karunga

Mu-to baat mat kar......
Ra(thinking)-Baata to diya ke main baat nahi karunga par aisa hoga kaise??
Ra-Pls......maat ja
Ra(thinking)-I will have to talk to Atul and Armaan immediately to stop Muskaan meeting Sangeet

rahul went to atul....n armaan..

ra- yaar armaan..muskaan sangeet pal ke paas gayi hai..

ar- kya kyu..??

ra- apne pregancy ki baat batane..

at- maadhuri.....muskaan maa banne wali hai..dak yaar...

ar- shut yup champ..dekh ek kaam..kar tu muskaan ke picha ja ..ki koi problem to nahi ho rahi hai..

ra- ohhhk..bye guys..

he went to sangeet/s office..he saw muskaan toking to him..but that stupid sangeet was trying to touch her,,,

rahul is boiling with angr

Rahul barges into the office......and stands between Sangeet and Muskaan thus stopping Sangeet from touching her.

Ra-Oye Sangeet .......Muskaan ko touch kiya to ma kasam tujhe upar janey se koi nahi rok sakta.😡😡....ab ja tere ghar se phone aya hai.......... mujhe patachala hai ke tere ghar ke channe ke khet mein insects ne infest kiya hai....isilye tujhe ghar bulaya hai

After saying this Rahul (thinks)- Sangeet ko pata bhi nahi chalega ke phone line pe Armaan hai aur woh Punjab chala jayega

Ra(thinking)-God..she is still angry.....will have to do something quick.

Ra-Nahi meri jaan......main to soch raha tha ke kyun na hum dono aj dinner keliye bahar jaye.....

.to celebrate the good news u know
ra- well..maine tereliye ek dinner plan kiya hai..yaha ke sabse bade hotel mai..but agar u dont want to come..then..

mu- rahul tune mereliye..hotel book kiya..

ra- yeaa..

mu- aaw rahull..i love u..

chal jaldi chal warna late ho jayenge..

ra-yaa lets goo(maan gayi!! thnk god..!


Scene shifts to Armaan......he is on phone talking to Sangeet
Sangeet-Haji mein abhi ja ra ha hoon ghar papaji....fikar not

Armaan feeling pleased keeps down the phone......but now he gets lost into deep thinkingthis is not done.......

or udhar rahul to baap bhi banne wala hai ab........this is not fair

Ab lag raha hai i will have to take some tips from Rahul........atleast for that mithai

 

noo no..rahul se tips nahi..wo to bolega..ki..us raat ki tarah ridhima ke saaath..

nahi nahi..ridhima to muujhe kabhi maaf nahi karega...

but ab kya karu..meri shaadi kab hogi..

ek to sal*...shaadi nahi hoo rahi....uper ye billy..!!!!!

by the way billy hai kaha..

billy billy..??? where r u..??

anaya..billy..dr.shashank ke paas gaye hai...tumhari engament ke baare mai baat karna..

ar- kyaaa...ohh no billy..1!!!!!!!

Ar-Uh oh........ab main to gaya kaam se.......mithai kya ab Riddhima mujhe degi pitai......

mujhe abhi isi waqt Dr.Shashank ke ghar jana hoga........

.isse pehle ke mera engagement ki baat hamesha ke liya band ho jaye because of Billy.......no mithai no shadi*sob* *sniff*......main to barbaad hogaya

Scene shifts to Atul
Atul was very impressed with Rahul........

so he plans that from next time he will take advice only from Rahul as to how to patao Anjali


atul calls up rahull...but rahul was in the mid of the dinner,,,!!!!

at- heyy rahull yaar mujhe teri hlp chahiye..

ra- abhii..?? yaar plzz baad mai..!!

at- plzz rahul ...yaar meri date ka sawal hai..

ra- tu armaan se kyu nahi puchta..???...wo to expert hai...!

at- nahi yaar..aajkal uski gadi panchar hai.,.plzz help karte meri..

muskaan was getting highly irritated...

ra-ohhk jaldi bol..

at- tu meri hlp karega..?? yaar tu hi meraa saccha bhai hai..!!!!!!

ra- haa haa..ab bol kya karna hai,...

at- mai kya pehnu,,>??

ra- kapde..!!

at- arey kapde mai..kyaa,...??

ra- uumm...ek kaam kar..black shirt..denim jeans...and ek jacket daal le..

at- per anjli ko to black nahi pasand..

ra- abey/...ladke black dress mai mard lagte hai mard..!!!!!!

saari ladkiya..fida hai black per..

muskaan cund bear...he was ssaying this..!!

at- thnx yaar..tu mera saccha dost hai...bye..

as soon as rahul keeps the fone..muskaan stands up..

n say..

ek kaam kar tuu...atul paas ja or uska...styler banja..mere pass ane ki koi jarurat nahi hai..

or haaa....

black pehn ke jana ..mard lagegaa..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

thnku for reading...

plzz take out few minutes for commenting..

awaited reply..

PAROMISHA

(paromeeta+nimisha)




 


 

 

Edited by nimiluvkaran - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
Awww...Nimmo...New FF...Huh...???
Rm...???😲😲😛
Awww...Ar ko kya ho gaya...???
Okiesss...i will read.....um currently busy now...You know why...???


*~Reserved~*

Posted: 14 years ago
omg rohit dada..u soo fast..i was about to reseve the 1st post..gosh..well ar ko kuch nahi huaa..actually..we both started this FF jokingly but evry 1 said to make it a proper FF..
thnku sooo much for reserving ur post..im xrtemely happy that u commented 1st
Posted: 14 years ago
great part!!!!!
do continue soon!!!!
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