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hey amreen thnxs alot but wana know is that a drama aur ur story if it's a story then damn good

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it's written by a very perfectionist Amreen, Eman.

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Jab wo apne ghar mei dhakhil huyi to dekha ke Mehvish aata goond rahi thi, wo bhi kitchen ki taraf chali aayi. "Kya baat hai, bohat khush nazar aarahi ho, Savera ko dekh kar Mehvi ne tanz kia." "Haan zaalim ne batoon ke teer se dil ko zakhmi kardiya", Savera ne hansi mei Mehvi ke gusse ko taalna chaha. "Kya zarorat thi wahan jaane ki?" "Mein thora apne se aur thora phopo ke bulane par chali gayi thi," Savera ne mou banakar kaha. "Inkaar kardeti," "tumhe to pata hai na ke mujhe nahi aata," Savera bebasi se kehne lagi.
dont get this part at all.
well Amreen when r u goin to post next part????

Edited by scorpion134 - 23 October 2005 at 2:35am

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Very good going, Amreen .... waiting for the second part... Smile

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Sorry Aji, they are talking mostly in indirect form may be thats y u got confused... lemme explain, Mehvish is angry on Savera that she went to phopo's house and they made fun of her while Savera is telling that she cant say no to anyone (shows that she is very kind).

Jab wo apne ghar mei dhakhil huyi to dekha ke Mehvish aata goond rahi thi, wo bhi kitchen ki taraf chali aayi.

Mehvish: "Kya baat hai, bohat khush nazar aarahi ho", Savera ko dekh kar Mehvi ne tanz kia.

Savera:"Haan zaalim ne batoon ke teer se dil ko zakhmi kardiya", Savera ne hansi mei Mehvi ke gusse ko taalna chaha.

Mahevish:"Kya zarorat thi wahan jaane ki?"

Savera: "Mein thora apne se aur thora phopo ke bulane par chali gayi thi," Savera ne mou banakar kaha.

Mehvish: "Inkaar kardeti,"

Savera: "tumhe to pata hai na ke mujhe nahi aata," Savera bebasi se kehne lagi.


hope that helps Smile

Thank U Emmi n Maha for liking it :)

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hey amreen damn good man. Clap
y dont u send ur stories to akhbar-e-jehan or any magazine.i m sure they gonna print them as soon as they get them.
can't wait to read the next part
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ASH! U r back!!

So glad to see u :) thx... but I m just a beginner for the magazines Embarrassed

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nonono ur really gud

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