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MrMonster Senior Member
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Posted: 26 March 2009 at 2:27pm | IP Logged


sorry about the long name LOL  u can call it supernatural dharam veerSmile

Okay no need to tell me that my Ffs are getting weirder by the minuet!

Intro:
"veer tumhe apne taaqaton ka galat istimaal nahi kar nahi chahiyeh " (dharam)
"dharam, maine akree baar galat istimaal kab kiya tha" (veer)
"ajj subah (folded his arms) LOL" (dharam )
"par dharam voh rajkumari sia buhut batameez voh bichari toh apna kaam karre thi aur voh sia ne" (veer)
(he remumbered what happend):
Veer was walking in the afternoon, hearing chirping birds the blooming flowers and the beautiful blue sea.. Then he heard a voice which blocked the beautiful melody of the birds ..it was coming from near the sea..
"TUM DEKH NAHI CHALTE, HUMARE RAASTE KE BEACH MAIN ANNEE KE KYA ZAROORAT?" (sia)
"ji rajkumari" (a shramik gal)
"CHUP HO JOA, TUM CHOTE LOGON HUMARE BADE LOGON KE SAAMNE ANE KE HIMMAT HE KAISE HOI? HUM VOH RAJKUMARI HAI… " (sia)
"jise zada batameez aur ghamndi ladki kisine nahi dekha hain " (gal)
"TUMHAARE ITNE HIMMAT…" (sia)
"ke tumhare jaise batameez aur ghamandi rajkumari ke saamne apni awaz uthai, isme himmat ke koi zaroorat nahi hai " (gal)
They went on and on..
"kitne batameez hai sia!?" (veer to himself)
But he lost his temper sia raised her hand.. He raised his hand as so the ocean raised, whatever he did with his hand the ocean copied.. He made a wave like as so the ocean which at end perfectly landed on sia..
Dharam came… he glanced at veer angrily.. Veer was giggling..
"rajkumari ji (ran to her) uthiye " he reached out hi hand.. (dharam)
The girl bowed her head..
"ji yuvraaj hum.. Hume shama kijiye.." (gal)
"tumhaare galte nahi hai jao kaam karo apna" (dharam)
As the girl was leaving veer… had an urge to know who she was, all he could see was her black silky hair..

Tongue Okay guys LOL na .. anyway veer controls  water you can see that… you'll se later what shera controls and what dharam..but still there are alot of twists and turns.. and i mean alot Tongue and yes the parts are reallly loooooooooooooooooooooong... LOL


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Posted: 26 March 2009 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
wowie...awesm girlie..
Hmm lemme tell ya tht em a water person..Love the prt of V controlin the waters n tht description..
Lolllzzz Sia ko chanta pada..awww..N Dharam helped her...
hmm Shera...Does she control Fire..Nop Air..Earth..wht does she controll....
jaldiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii batao...
N yes thnx for the Pm btw why r u closin tht FF..Eternal Love...Plzzzz dn't usmein VS r chooo damn chweeetttt..LOve tht FF...
Hmmm n abt getting wierd..Well U n me r sure wierd so our FF's need to be like tht na...
Buh tis is awesum huh...
 
Do cont asap....
Love ya loads hala dear.....t.ccccccc
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 26 March 2009 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
mazedaar dear
so gr8888888888

do continue
yaar veer nahin sudeherga

bye sumi
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Posted: 27 March 2009 at 3:46am | IP Logged
oh wow dear
plz cont
its gr8
Krishna_Sourav IF-Addictz
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Posted: 27 March 2009 at 4:52am | IP Logged
Wow Smilenice story. cont. soon
MrMonster Senior Member
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Posted: 27 March 2009 at 8:30am | IP Logged
thanxx alot i;;ll surely continue


Edited by 090909as - 27 March 2009 at 9:52am
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Posted: 27 March 2009 at 1:24pm | IP Logged
very cu8 plz cont soon
ashah030 Senior Member
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Posted: 27 March 2009 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
heyyy
verrryyy interesting intro... pls continueee
love ya
ashah

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