Tose Naina Laage(RN)..Part 6 @ Page 17 24/02/10 - Page 2

welcome back Di,

hi anu,
how r u...
well the prologue seems interesting.... ud it soon and other ur fics also.....

The first part will be posted on 1st April..2009..

 

 

 

 

 

welcome back dear............

always njoy ur fics......

dis one too sounds interesting.....

waiting for it to begin

awesome Anu yaar 👏 👏 👏, jaldi se aage continue karo. 😃 😃 😃 Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

hey that's sounds interesting...m waiting for it's update

Indian Millitary Academy ki sthaapna ki gayi..Dehradun me..British Goverment ko zyada se zyada kaabil Officers chahie..apna dabdaba banaye rakhne k lia..haalaat bigad rahe hain.. First world war toh jeet lia par ab India me Freedon movements zyada badh gaye hain.. Frontier regions me zyada sipahi chahie...isi lia Indians ko hi Army ka hissa banana hai..isi wajah se banai gayi Indian Millitary Academy.

Raees ghar k ladke..khaas kar rajwado k khandan se ladke aane lage..Army me Officer banne k lia..Naujwaanon k lia Army ka Officer hona..bahut gaurav ki baat thi..jo ladke naye naye Officer ban kar nikalte the..unko yaa toh Afganistan k border par bheja jaata tha..yaa fir Burma border par..koi Indian Officer kitni bhi bahaduri dikha le..Millitary cross jaisa Honour humesha British Officers ko hi milta tha.Par fir bhi..rajwade khandan se hona, upar se Army ka Officer..bahut badi baat hua karti thi Royal Family k logo k lia..

1938..

 

Rajput hai..Rajputane k Rajwade khandan se hai..bahut hi kaabil Cadet hai..Commanding Officers bahut impressed hue Cadet Shekhawat ko dekh kar..This chap will go so far.

Rajveer ko apni manzeel mil gayi thi..uske khandan se woh pehla ladka hai..jo Army ka Officer banne jaa raha hai.

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1940..

Girivar Mahel,Rajputana.

Rana Sooraj Singh Shekhawat yehi rahte hain.Unki Patni ka naam hai Rani Jayanti Devi.Is khandan k do bete hain..Randheer Singh Shekhawat aur Rajveer Singh Shekhawat. Randheer ki shaadi ho chuki hai..uski Patni ka naam hai Roop.Randheer apne Pitah k jaaidad ki dekhbhaal karta hai..apne Chhote Bhai ki tarha nahi sochta Randheer..usko isi aisho aram ki zindagi pasand hai.Rajveer aa raha hai..Officer ban kar aa raha hai ghar. Mahel me kaafi shorgol.Chhote Kunwar k swaagat k lia sab taiyyar khade hain..

Rajveer aaya..Army Officer ban kar, uniform me tha..Jayanti Devi ne usko tilak lagaya.. Rajveer andar aaya..sab us par phool barsa rahe hain..

Rajveer ne sab ka ashirwad lia.

Sooraj--Jeete raho..apne khandan ka naam roshan karo..

Rajveer sirf muskuraya...Randheer 24 saal ka hai..Rajveer 21 saal ka naujawaan hai.

Jayanti--Shaam ko jashan hai..tum abhi aram karo.

Shaam k jashan me Rajveer Rajwado k saath mulakat karne laga..sab Rajveer ko dekh kar bahut khush hue.

Roop--Dewarsaa..aap ki shaadi ki baat chal rahi hai..ab toh aap Officer ban gaye hain.. Maasaa ..baat chala rahi hai..ab toh aapke rishtey k lia bahut se log aayenge..

Rajveer--Bhabhisaa...humne is baare me nahi socha kabhi..

Roop--Ab soch lijiye..

Rajveer--Theek hai..

Roop ne kuchh ghalat nahi kaha tha..Rajputane k bahut se Rajwade Shekhawat khandan me apni Beti dena chaahte the..

Jayanti--Raj..aapke rishtey ki baat chal rahi hai..Photo dekhna chaahenge aap?

Raj--Maasaa..humari posting ho gayi hai..North East Border me..filhaal hum isi me khush hain..

Jayanti--Par Shaadi toh karni hai na aapko?

Raj--Maasaa..ladhai shuru ho gayi hai..aise me pata nahi kyaa ho..hum itni jaldi shaadi nahi kar sakte..humen do din k andar apni duty join karni hai..

Jayanti--Par aapne toh kuchh bataya nahi..

Raj--Aap ko dukh pahoochta ..World War hai Maasaa..duty se hum door nahi bhaag sakte..aise waqt me..kisi se shaadi kar k..unki zindagi hum mushkil me nahi daal sakte..

Jayanti--Yehi baat aap khud Ranajee se kahenge..

Raj--Jee zaroor..

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World War II shuru ho chuka tha...Border area me zyada se zyada sipahi chahie..Raj ne jhoot nahi kaha tha..uski Posting Indi-Burma Border par hui hai...usko do din baad hi Manipur jaana pada.Lt. Rajveer Singh Shekhawat ne Commanding Officer Col. Grimith Jones ko report kia..

Jones--Ohh..Shekhawat..I heard about you..take your seat..

Raj--Thank you Sir..

Jones--Are you OK?

Raj--Yes Sir..

Jones--This area is sensitive Officer..you have to be alert in every step..

Raj--I understand Sir..

Jones--Bhhaaki khaa khaam thumko Captain Chaudhury samjha dhega..you relax..now.. and first you accomodate yourself.Shhaam kho Officer's mess me aa jhaana..

Raj--Sir.

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Captain Prabhat Kumar Chaudhury se Lt. Rajveer Singh Shekhawat mile..

Chaudhury--Welcome Shekhawat..come ..meet your fellow Officers..he is Lt.Sodhi,Captain Khanna,Captain Rathore and Major Banerjee.

Raj sab se Hello bolne laga...

Chaudhury--Officers..Shekhawat is from a Royal family..as Captain Rathore..

Khanna--Yaar..Mahelon k aishon aram chhod kar..kaha chale aaye..you people are high maintanence..

Raj--Nahi..actually..I was very interested to join the Royal Army.

Sodhi--Waise..aish ki bat jaha tak hai..woh toh yeha bhi ho sakta hai..Shekhawat..don't worry..here you can get world class whisky..and..mujra sunne ka shaukh hai..toh woh bhi hai..3 kilometre door hai..woh jagah..don't get sad..my dear..

Raj--Mujhe aisi koi aadat nahi..mujre hote hain..humare palace me...par humen koi shaukh nahi hai in sab ka..

Khanna--Woh toh..tumne abhi Nazar Jaan ki ghazal nahi suni..

Raj--Not interested..

Banerjee--Arre..she is not the singer..she writes songs..and ghazals..and poetry..aur baaki woh gaa kar sunati hai..Nazar Jaan khud mujra nahi karti..naachti nahi..naa hi gaati hai.. sirf likhti hai..

Khanna--Sir..sahi kaha aapne..jo itna achha likhti hai..agar apni awaz ka jaadoo chala de..pata nahi ..kaun si kayamath aayegi..

Raj--Mirza Ghalib ..interesting..

Sodhi--Nahi yaar..mazak nahi..maine kai baar dekha hai us Nazar Jaan ko..yeha k Raja ne Banaras se bulaya hai..Gaohar Jaan ko..Gaohar Jaan k kothe me hi thi yeh Nazar Jaan.. suna hai Banaras me bhi bahut log..Nazar Jaan k shaayeri k kaayal hua karte the..

Chaudhury--Tum logo ko asli baat hi nahi pata..Nazar Jaan..ka asli naam ..pata hai kisiko?

Sodhi--Aap ko pata hai?

Chaudhury--Haan..is ka asli naam Naina hai..usi se toh naam bana..Nazar Jaan..baaki ki tabayaf log gaati hai usiki ghazal..naachti bhi hai..par Nazar Jaan sirf geet likhti hain..pata nahi..Gaohar Jaan ne aaj tak usko gaane kyon nahi dia..?

Raj--Raja ne unko yehan rakha hai?

Khanna--Haan..ek saal se Gaohar Jaan hain yehan..Banaras me uska kotha hai..par bahut se Raja aur Nawab usko apna mehmaan banana chaahte hain..Gaohar Jaan bhi Manipur k Raja ki khaas mehmaan hai..

Raj--Hmm..aap log bhi kaafi kaayal hai un..kyaa naam bataya..haan Nazar Jaan..mujhe nahi jaana aise mehfil me..

Khanna--Oye..Shekhawat..tune dekha nahi Nazar Jaan ko..uparwaale ne bahut foorsat se banaya hai usko..balaa ki khubsurat hai..log is mehfil me jaate hain ..sirf usko ek jhalak dekhne..

Raj--Fir toh nahi jaana humen..balaa se jitni door reh sake..utna hi achha..

Chaudhury--Chalo..kal raat Gaohar Jaan ki mehfil sajegi..Raja Saab ne Regiment k Officers ko bhi invite kia hai..chalo..aisa mauka nahi aayega..

Raj--Nahi..humen..naa sharab ki lat hai..naa kisi kothewaali ki aadat hai..in do balaaon se hum humesha door hi rehna chaahenge..aap log jaaiye..humen nahi jaana..

Sodhi--Shekhawat..tum kis mitti k bane ho yaar..?Tumne dekha nahi usko..naa hi uski ghazal suni hai..kyaa kahe..itne kum umar me yeh soch..itni gehrai!!

Raj--Kitni umar hai unki?

Khanna--17..sirf 17 ki hai..isi lia kehta hoon..kal chalo humare saath...

Raj--Hum sochenge..agar so nahi gaye..toh chalenge...kuchh keh nahi sakte..hum wada nahi kar rahe hain..

Mess se Rajveer nikal gaya..dinner kar k...ajeeb hai sab..17 saal ki ladki k lia..itni deewane ban gaye..?Aur naa jaane kyaa hogi..uske lia..aur aate hi Raj ko apne jhoond me shaamil karne lage..

Agar yehi karna tha..toh Girivar Mahel me in sab baaton ki kumee nahi thi..Raj ne apni Maasaa ko dekha hai..kai kai raat bina neend k kaat chuki hain woh..Ranajee ki aiyashion k lia..Bhabhisaa bhi raaton ko jagi rehti hain..Bhaisaa k intezar me..aur naachnewalion k pairon me khandan ki izzat aur daulat lootate hain,kahte hain Rajwado ki shaan hai.. yeh.. par isme Raj ko koi izzat ki baat nahi dikhti..haan..naachna gana..sanskriti ka hissa zaroor hai..par tavayafon k peechhe is tarha apni zindagi barbad karna..apni Patni k aankhon me ansoon lana..kaha ki mardaangi hai?Bachpan se hi Raj ne yeh maahol dekha hai..apne parivaar me.. ..Raj ne bahut si kahaniyan suni hai..apne Poorvajon k aiyaashi ki..uske Pitah ki ek Dadi ne Chaku se apna gala kaat lia tha..apne Pati ko ek naachnewali ki baahon me dekh kar..isi lia..kotha..aur kothewali..dono se sakht nafrat hai Raj ko.Par koi ladki apni marzi se kothe par nahi baithti..yeh baat Raj jaanta hai..par ek kothewali k lia apni Bihata patni ko dukh dena..yeh baat Raj bardasht nahi kar pata..

Aur yeh Officers..haan..theek hai..ghar se door..kabhi bhi maut se aamna saamna ho sakta hai inka..apna manoranjan karte hain...thoda sa naach gana dekh kar..harj nahi hai is baat me..par Raj ko yeh sab aadat nahi daalni.

Raj ko nahi jaana..us kothe me..naa hi us kothewali Nazar Jaan se milna hai..

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Agle din subha Raj gaya area ka survey karne..Major Banerjee le gaye the usko..Moirong k paas se guzarte hue..ek lake dikha Raj ko..

Raj--Sir..main zara dekh loon..is jagah ko?

Banerjee--Yes..sure..don't be late..

Raj gaya..waha par ek ladki ko dekha usne..ek neele rang ki shawl odh kar rakhi thi usne apne upar..kuchh likh rahi thi..

Achanak se ek kaagaz udh kar Raj k pairon k paas aaya..Raj ne woh panna utha lia..usme kuchh likha tha..shaayad ladki k dhyaan me nahi hai k yeh panna udha kar aaya hai is taraf..Raj khud ko woh panna padhne se rok nahi paaya..usme likha tha..

Tere mere darmiyaan yeh doorie..naa jaane kyaa baat ho gayi..

Jis saher ki tamanna ki thi.woh khwab hi ban k reh gayi..

Mushkil se yeh shaam beeta rahe the hum..ab toh itni lambi raat ho gayi..naa jaane  kyaa baat ho gayi..

Ladki likh rahi thi..Raj ne zara gala saaf kia..khaans kar..

Ladki ne dekha uski taraf moodh kar..Raj ne pehli baar ladki ko dekha..ladki ne saree pehni thi..aasmani rang ki saree thi..aur neele rang ki shawl thi..is tarha odha tha us shawl ko..taa k sirf uska chehra dikhe..aur uske haathon ka adha hissa..

Raj--Aap ka yeh panna..idhar chala aaya tha..

Ladki ne Raj ki taraf dekha..Raj k haath se woh panna lia..aur haath jodh kar Namaste kar k chali gayi..ladki ne kuchh nahi kaha..chali gayi..

Raj wahi khada raha..uska dhyaan toota..Major Banerjee k bulane par..

Banerjee--Shekhawat..come on..

Raj--Yes Sir..

Raj waapas aaya...par akela nahi lauta..jheel k kinare jisko dekha..uski tasveer apni aankho me le kar lauta..

Tere mere darmiyaan yeh doorie..naa jaane kyaa baat ho gayi..

Jis saher ki tamanna ki thi.woh khwab hi ban k reh gayi..

Mushkil se yeh shaam beeta rahe the um..ab toh itni lambi raat ho gayi..naa jaane  kyaa baat ho gayi..

Kitni gehrai hai in baaton me..aur kitni gehrai thi un aankho me..us ladki ki aankho me....

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edited by yakkudimag - 15 years ago

simply mind blowing...... thanx for new rn fic....
part 1 is very interesting.... shayri was also nice...
ud soon the next part...

the update was marvellous......really good, the couplet too was good...naina as "nazar  "is quite interesting.....but raj is from a high profile family.....how is their love gonna be possible in this lifetime?????
but love ha s no bundaries and it conquers all.....

Anu tum ne ek aur fic start kar di, vow yaar i am happy to find an another one from u.