FF SV Ishq-E-Dil Part16/Pg29 September 1

Posted: 15 years ago

Namaste bmtdians

i have created a besharm ff and it will be really besharm when something happens

just to let you know some of it is untrue-- you'll see!


I'll give a simple intro and add little things along the way

Sagar

lives in Dubai with his family

works in his fathers manufacturing factory as CEO

has a BIG secret

Vidya

lives in Singapore

3rd year of college

Wants to become artist or whatever


Neira:

Smart

lives in Singapore

3rd year of college

best friends with Divya

Chapter's

Part 1...Pg 1

Part 2...Pg 3

Part 3...Pg 6

Part 4...Pg 8

Part 5...Pg 12

Part 6...Pg 14

Part 7... Pg 16

Part 8... Pg 17

*Promo*... Pg 18

Part 9... Pg 19

Part 10... Pg 19

Part 11... Pg 20

Part 12... Pg 22

Part 13... Pg 23

Part 14... Pg 24

Part 15... Pg 27

Part 15... Pg 29


First part

This part is dedicated to everyone, especially Gina


Boring at starting, besharam when---you'll see very soon

Sagar gets ready leaves for work

Sagar: Hey dad, why are you so worried

SD: There is some problem going on in our plant in Mississauga

Sagar: Whats the big problem?, I'll go

SD: You can't because your mom has fixed your wedding and you have to meet the bride!!!

Sagar: I seriously don't care, and we already talked about this, so either you give me the details (of his flight and the problem) or I'll get it myself

SD: *mumbles* I am so stupid I should of never told him

SD: Here son

Passes the details to Sagar

Vidu's College

Vidya: Sorry Neira, I got a bit late

Neira: LATE! What are you saying? Did you know the principal called us to the office!?

Vidya: Whatever, lets go

At the loser's office!!!!!!! I mean the principals office!!!

Principal: Please sit down girls

Vidya and Neira: Why are we here???

Principal: I just wanted to say that you have been transferred to Toronto for the gifted program

V&N: What and Why??

Principal: Because your academic skills are too high for this college, so if you go to the gifted program, you will continue to learn what you are currently learning, and earn money while you are there. Another reason is they have a better environment and curriculum

Vidya: Do we have to?

Principal: You don't have to but it will be better for your future

Neira: Ok we will think about it

Principal: Ok here's all the information and tickets, and if I were you I wouldn't waste such opportunity

Vidya and Neira say their byes, head off to their classes and finally go to their dorm

Neira: Do you think we should go??

Vidya: Sure afterall it will be better for our future

Neira: Yeah I guess so

Vidya: We will just go and if we don't like it, we will come back

Neira: Ok, lets check our flight details

Vidya: Omg! This principal is so cheap!

Neira: I know making the flight for tomarrow!

Vidya: Lets pack quickly

I'll end it here , sorry gina. I know it's short

Just tell me this should I just skip to; when they get to the hotel

I think the in between stuff is boring

There's just an important phone call on the flight

Sorry for making this short, when I wrote it, it was 2 full pages long *front and back*

I just decided to make a summary

Next time I will make it longer

In 8 pages besharmyness will start and they will first talk in'I mean soon very soon

Edited by kirancanada1 - 14 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
I love besharam FF...hahah.........
Posted: 15 years ago
ha ha
btw where did the thank you button go???
Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Kiran, yayyy finally I get to see your ff !

Great start hun, I love it already ! And thanks for the dedication dear 😊
Hmm besharam ff hehe, 😆 Looking forward to it !

Now write the way you want. If you don't want to be too detailed you could just write : After 5 hours they had reached toronto and to their hotel and unpacked their bags .. or something like that.

Great start, continue soon ! And I want some besharam scenes 😉
At first I thought Sagars mom had arranged his marriage with Vidya .. maybe it is ? or ?

anyways luv ya !
Posted: 15 years ago
Originally posted by theflyingdonkey


Hey Kiran, yayyy finally I get to see your ff ! yeah yeah

Great start hun, I love it already ! And thanks for the dedication dear 😊
Hmm besharam ff hehe, 😆 Looking forward to it ! don't worry by  8 pages i mean 8 pages i wrote and if this was two pages, then the besharm part might start in 4 more updates/uppys

Now write the way you want. If you don't want to be too detailed you could just write : After 5 hours they had reached toronto and to their hotel and unpacked their bags .. or something like that. okay i'll do it that way

Great start, continue soon ! And I want some besharam scenes 😉 yeah, the suhaag raat might be a little too, you get what i mean so i'll try to tone it down😉
At first I thought Sagars mom had arranged his marriage with Vidya .. maybe it is ? or ? we will see

anyways luv ya ! you too!




Posted: 15 years ago
Originally posted by hot chilly


awwwww it was good, continuee soon.


now everyone promise me
you will tell the truth!!!!
and i'm going to start a daily routine like gina
i'm going to update on fridays
and if i'm not busy i will do some extra updates
Posted: 15 years ago
hey Kiran its very good.continue soon
Posted: 15 years ago
thanks to all who commented
thank you titly
Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Kiran!
Hmmm... interesting start! Berry good! Continue soon!

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