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devilsheir Newbie
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Posted: 19 March 2009 at 4:16am | IP Logged
it was better than good Star
man your ff is so real and superbly wriitenClapClap
pls continue soon (will be waiting eagerly for the next part)
thanks for adding me to the pm list
rhea
 
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Posted: 19 March 2009 at 4:16am | IP Logged
fabulous update!!!!
loved it
thanks for the PM
continue soon
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Posted: 19 March 2009 at 4:19am | IP Logged
awesome yaar!!!!!!!!!!! its really nice!! and thanks for the pm!!
luv
hema
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Posted: 19 March 2009 at 4:27am | IP Logged
Hey there , just wanted to point out something that i felt ...

Its a little hard for me to imagine the scenes as i keep getting confused on who's who ..  like i forgot who neelam was .. or depaali wass

so i was thinkingg may be for a few first senteces u could write
deepli (Nupur)  so tat we are reminded of who we aer acutally raeding about

Besides that , awesomee.
 I can see how much effort u've put on this and it will pay off.

Ur style of writing is great ..

Keep it up . :)
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Posted: 19 March 2009 at 5:46am | IP Logged

Awesome, very well written..  It shows the effort you've put in writing it..Big smile

I agree with Sunita. I too got a little confused at times,Embarrassed
 
 
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Posted: 19 March 2009 at 7:32am | IP Logged
fab update just loved it.I must say  u r a great writer .when will u update next?
styleislife13 Goldie
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Posted: 19 March 2009 at 7:39am | IP Logged

reserved....

too long...bzy...will comment later...sorry
 
Hi yaar...
BTW ....whats ur name?...
Okay...awesum upodate...
Ireally like ur style of writing..its fab...
Every character is soo well-developed...
Its not the kind of FF...where u develope the character as the story goes forward..
I Luv Chicago...I hav lived there for 6 yrs..
Iam really surprised by ur knowledge ofAmerica....is there any cahance u live there?...
Gr8 story...
Luv the way u write....I thought i was reading a novel...
I luv details n u hv dive a lot...
The best thing abt stories to me is that the way the writers describe their surroundingz...it make me feel as if iam a part of their story...
U hav that quality..n iam really impressed...
Starting wid Aditya..such a sweet character....really deep..n interesting...sad thing happened to him...
Neelam to me is family oriented and too sweet....i think she has sum confidence n isnt shy?..am i right?...
Deepali seems to fun-filled...her sense of style n her hobbies r really unique...
I hav a question...so Deeps n Neelam are faternal twins...the twins which dont look alike?...am i right?..
Zaid ....actually its played by Ranbir...so i adore him...such a cute character...i think he is kinda shy...and really the modern version of a guy nowadays.....
Hina ...the most ...how do u say....academic character...soo involved in her studies...really ambitious....i like it...as u say she really has a ncak for impressing ppl....interesting character....i wonder what the future holds for her...
Younus seems really possesive abt his family...i like that nature in a person...really sweet...i really like Rajeev...lol..
Samira such a loveable character....too lighthearted and really impressive....such a sweetheart...really suits Amrita's character...
Rehaan seems like a heartbroken guy...i dont know why...he seems like if he is rediscovering life......too cute wen he talks....
Gr8 characters.....gr8 story......well thought...
Luv the writing style....
I luv that every character is important...its not that sum characters r getting more limelight then the others...
As u perviously said that we will not be interested in the Bolly characters...
Well i will give u sum relief...i luv both the telly n bolly characters...
Its really a unique story...
I wonder how the story will continue...
I see no major mistakes in the story or concept....actually none...
Congrats for that...
I reallly like giving big-hearty comments.....
I think that gr8 work shud be appreciated often....what say?...
 
I like all the characters...
I think i identify wid Deepali's fun-loving nature....Neelam's family fondness....Adityas sweet dialogues...Zaid's sweet heart n sleeping habits...lol.....Hina's ambitiousness...Younu's possesive nature...Rehaan's listening into convos...Samira replies....did i forget a character...
U may think that i am lying but seriously iam like this an more....lol
 
I think since u r gonna update after a long intervals...u may as continue wid long updates...
I am reading 10 FFz......n all r very specail to me....
Since i cant manage them all i wud luv the update pmz...thnx for pming me sweetie...
Really appreciate it...
Continue soon...
Keep it up....
Gud Luck wid the next Chapter...
Waiting for it...
 
R u satisfied wid the response?...
Take Care...
Luv Ayesha...
 


Edited by styleislife13 - 20 March 2009 at 4:22am
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Posted: 19 March 2009 at 7:45am | IP Logged
NOTE
 
I have read all your comments and will reply individually to them soon.  But first I wanted to let you know that due to Sunita182's request, I have posted all the actor's names in parentheses when they first make an appearance.  I hope that will make things a little less confusing.  Also, I have added two questions at the end of the chapter.  Please do answer them...They will help me improve the story.

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