GREAT PART!!
Originally posted by: Anjalika Khanna
yeeeeeee im d first to replay to such a long update.............wowwdis was a really nice updatethanx for d pm....................ππ
Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya
its a fabulous FF.......I love it as its got all my favs. I love mohit nd sanaya. I also love shahid , ranbir nd amrita and I like rati nd deepika......I love the names u kept it was a long prt though but I hp u make all prts this lenghty.........as its gud to read so much
Originally posted by: sajan_monaya
great yaar
well doneit was long but sweetand thanx for the pm
Originally posted by: devilsheir
it was better than good βοΈ
man your ff is so real and superbly wriitenππpls continue soon (will be waiting eagerly for the next part)thanks for adding me to the pm listrheaPS - i am new
Originally posted by: drishti_sajan
fabulous update!!!!
loved itthanks for the PMcontinue soon
Originally posted by: hemasharma36
awesome yaar!!!!!!!!!!! its really nice!! and thanks for the pm!!
luvhema
Originally posted by: Sunita182
Hey there , just wanted to point out something that i felt ...
Its a little hard for me to imagine the scenes as i keep getting confused on who's who .. like i forgot who neelam was .. or depaali wass
so i was thinkingg may be for a few first senteces u could write
deepli (Nupur) so tat we are reminded of who we aer acutally raeding about
Besides that , awesomee.
I can see how much effort u've put on this and it will pay off.
Ur style of writing is great ..
Keep it up . :)
Awesome, very well written.. It shows the effort you've put in writing it..π
I agree with Sunita. I too got a little confused at times,π³Tania
Originally posted by: cute-kanwal
fab update just loved it.I must say u r a great writer .when will u update next?
Originally posted by: styleislife13
reserved....
too long...bzy...will comment later...sorry
Originally posted by: pragya_luvsajan
hey amazing jus read the whole story
GREAT PART!!
TOO GOOD!!BUT SOMETIMES I FORGETS WHO ARE THE CHARACTERS!!!SORRY 4 THAT!!!CONT SOON!!! TAKE UR TIME!!!SEE YAA!!!
wowowow tht was cooll part plzz contuied soon
Thank you Shafoo! Will do for sure.
Originally posted by: trouble_maker
Hey Rabia!!
Ok so the part is superrrrrrrrrr long. But dat's fine with me as I like reading long updates. Hmmm so you're only gonna post once in 2 weeks =(. But it's ok....as this long of update def takes a long time to write =)
Ok so coming to update. I have no words seriously. I've never read any FF like this before. It's truly awesome. You should seriously consider being a writer...or are u already? The flow of the story was simply superb. Loved how everything connected.
Ok so starting with Rehan...sounds like totally cute character and similar to Shahid Kapoor himself hehe. And so does Samira. Very cute and simple yet relatable characters. Loved their instant connection...Really looking forward to their story. Um next Adi...another lovable character. I think he's gonna be my fav character esp. because his tragic past and no family. And ofcourse Neelam is gonna fill his empty life. Very simple and Gunjan-like character. Loved how Neelam already felt something diff with Adi around. And then Deepali, Zaid and Hina are all very sweet characters.
But most importantly love how the story isn't only about the love stories of a few couples but more about friendship of allllll the characters. Liked the interactions between the characters.
Here I tried to make a long detailed post =). Once the plot develops, I promise my posts are gonna be even longer. Hehe. So loving the story so far. Really looking forward to all of them meeting at the university.
And I don't really have any suggestion because I honestly think it was just perfect. There is seriously no need for improvment. Just keep writing like this.
- Binu =)
Originally posted by: CeruleanSky
Hi Rabia = )
I saw the note in your creations gallery and so jumped across to the MJHT forum to check the FF out : ) : )
Okay , so I have a lot to say about it so gear up for a considerably lengthy comment ! πππ
I simply loved the intro chapter !!! What I loved most of all was the way you linked each one of the seven main characters to each other , with the story moving from one to the other : - ) You know , it was like you plotted the points and then drew lines joining the characters to each other and at the end you got the complete figure =) I mean , the way it started off with Rehaan and Samira and came back to them in the end , completing a full circle : - )
Secondly , I dont have any problem now in figuring out who's who ....while I was reading the chapter I opened Pg 1 for a reference and so now I remember who's who = ) , and anyways its just a matter of relating the face to the characters : ) and also , something I wanted to tell you : I totally trust your judgement and after all , you're the writer so I dont mind Arjun/Mayank not being one of the seven main characters = ) You're the writer and so obviously you know the best for your story : )
And in answer to your second question , I like lengthy chapters !!! Because they're far more interesting to read and think over , and I know you're busy with your studies/gallery/DT duties and all , so I think lengthier chapters will be better , because they make the wait for the next update worth it : )
And about the characters....um , I identify with Hina more than the others = ) She's totally today's woman and is just the sort of person I'd like to be like = )
But if its a question of who I liked the best , then it'll be Samira I guess : ) She's too adorable and I loved her interactions with Rehaan/Aditya/her mom πππ And some of the most funny parts in the chapter are the parts where she's teased about her height πππ
Keep up the awesome work ! π€
Shreya = )
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