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Posted: 30 March 2009 at 6:04am | IP Logged
first of all thanks for the PM,dear!!!!!really loved the concept and read all the parts in a go......wonderfully written.....very realistic and practical.....just a request if u could post the index on would be helpful for new members to read.......and ya i dont know ur name, let me know abt that.......and plzz do PM me whenever u update.........!!!!!!!

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Posted: 30 March 2009 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Really nice part!!!!!




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wow gr8 part thanks 4 the pm cont soon


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Posted: 31 March 2009 at 5:55am | IP Logged
it was an awesome one!!!
Now what will our Muski do!!!!
Her heart is completely broken!!!
 great going!!!!!!!
continue soon!!




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Posted: 01 April 2009 at 8:47pm | IP Logged

Part 5:-

Muskii runs to her room & she is in all tears..........

M- Woh mujhse pyaar nahi karta....RAidz...woh mujhse pyaar nahi karta...

Ri(feels bad 4 her friend bt tries to comfort her)-Muskaan... dear...plzz roo mat yaar... roone se kya hoga...

M- Woh mujhse pyaar nahi karta....RAidz...woh mujhse pyaar nahi....

Ri- Muskaan .... baar baar wahi baat kehnese baat badal toh nahi jayegi... woh tumse pyaar nahi karta yeh ek fact hai aur tum usko accept karlo... it will be gud 4 u....

M- Ridzz.... main kaise??? Woh kyun mujse pyaar nahi karta???

Ri- Woh kyun pyaar karega tumse?? Huh?? Look at urself...

Brings her in front of the mirror.....

Ri- Muskaan... tera dil bahut aacha hai... tu saqbki chinta karti hai.. sab ka aacha sochti hai Rahul komteri yeh baat pasand hai isliye tum dost ho... par jab girlfriend ki baat aati hai toh woh boys ke liye prestige issue hota hai... they want beautiful gals as thier gfs... tu samaj rahi hai na???

M- Main mooti hu isliye???

Ri- Dekh MUskaan tu bura mat maan bt.... shayd yehi baat ho....

M- Par Rdz... tune dekha nahi last time sab mujhe chida rahe the tab usne hi kaha....

Ri- MUskaan... tu bhul ja na sab kuch... Rahul ke baare me soch ke tujhe kya mila?? 82%??? Muskaan tujhe medical me admission chahiye jo halwa nahi hai.. i hope u know... Tera  Mumbai University se MBBS karne ka sapna... uska kya??? Sab kharab ho gaya na....

M- haan Ridz tu sahi keh rahi hai.. maine sab kharab kar diya.. i have lost everything...(cries harder)

Ri(to herself)- O God!!! kya karu iss kudi ka??? RAhul se dhyan hatane ke liye yeh sab kaha toh aur roone lag gayi....(turns to Muskii)- Nahi Muskaan...ek khel haar ne se koi baazi nahi haar jata aur (mischevious smile) Haar kar jeetne wle ko Baazigar kehte hai...

M(laughs)- Aee mere SRK ki line mat bol....

Ri(relived as Muskii laughed)- Chal Muskaan... niche chalte hai.. Hume saare teachers ko milke thanks bhi kehna hai...

M- Nahi.. Ridz tu ja.. main nahi aa sakti...

Ri- Kyun???

M- Ridz wahan Rahul hoga.. woh mujhse puchega main kahan thi aur kya hua toh main kya.... main usko face nahi kar paungi...

Ri- Muskaan tere liye kya imp hai humare teachers jinho ne itne saal hunara khayal rakha ya Rahul??? Woh Rahul jisne tujhe hurt kiya??

M(shaky voice)- Teachers...

They go down to meet thier teachers thank them 4 alays being there 4 them, take blessings & are abt to leave when the SPOT LIGHT game starts......

Spot light game:
 Its dark & there are 2 spot will move in the whole room & those two ppl who have spot light on them have 2 dance 2gether.....

First the spot lights fall on Ridz & Vivek........
They dance...

Then it falls on Rahul & Soniya...........
Actually the spot light was 2 fall on Muskaan bt Soniya pushed her & made her fall & so the spot light was on Soniya.....
Unfortunately they were given a slow number & Soniya took 100% ADVANTAGE OF THE SITUATON
 she made him put his arms around her waist...she put hers around his neck....& they danced....
Rahul wasnt aware of Soniya making Muskii fall & so he thought the spot light fell on Soniya co-incidentally....
So he danced with her...she was whispering sumthing in his ears & they laughed.....

Muskii couldnt take it she & Ridz went to Amritsar without telling or meeting RAhul......

Rahu's diary same nite:
Pata nahi Muskii kahan chali gayi?? She went without telling me...ME.... RAhul... uska best friend.. How could she... I was dancing with Soniya... O God...that girl is mad... ek mauka nahi chodti mujhse flrit karne ka.... i just dont like her being around...main toh uske saath dance bhi nahi karna chata tha bt socha last day hai...phir kahan milnewale hai Muskii .....main bahut naraaz hu usse.. bina bataye koi jata hai aise...Maine papaji ko marks bole...bahut khush hai woh...thanx god..thank u... I wonder Muskii ko itne kam kaise mile?? Woh toh mujse bhi jyada intelligent thi... koi baat nahi... kal Amritsar jaake achi class lunga Muskii ki... bina bataye kase chali gayi??? Kinne plan banaye the..sab gang bahar jayenge... mazaa karenge 4 the last ab sab cancel...Muskii ke bina mazza kaise aayega??? Stupid......


hope u like comment...............

Edited by RM+PS - 01 April 2009 at 8:55pm

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Posted: 01 April 2009 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
Nice part!!!!!!!
i hope rahul finds muski in amritsar.

Edited by Radhika Shah - 01 April 2009 at 9:33pm




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Posted: 01 April 2009 at 9:52pm | IP Logged
awww i feel reallt bad for muski!!!! i hope rahul finds her in amritsar and and also finds out about her feelings for herr!!!!!!! thank u for the pm!!! it was a great partTongue


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Posted: 02 April 2009 at 2:08am | IP Logged
greattttttttt hope rahul finds muski
nd pm me

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