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... A TwIsTeD SuMmEr LoVe StOrY ... (Page 5)

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Posted: 27 May 2009 at 2:27pm | IP Logged
wow selena this updat was awesome yaarShocked i got a lil scared when the upstairs part cameLOLLOL oh wow.. they making and eating pizzas this lateLOL  pls update soonBig smile 

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Posted: 28 May 2009 at 11:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by *Nishi*

wow selena this updat was awesome yaarShocked i got a lil scared when the upstairs part cameLOLLOL oh wow.. they making and eating pizzas this lateLOL  pls update soonBig smile 
 
haha yeah i dno how to make pizza myself EmbarrassedLOL so i just wrote anything
really u got scared? so was i LOL
 
update cumin soon hahaha x u make me laff Tongue
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Posted: 28 May 2009 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by *Nishi*

wow selena this updat was awesome yaarShocked i got a lil scared when the upstairs part cameLOLLOL oh wow.. they making and eating pizzas this lateLOL  pls update soonBig smile 
 
haha yeah i dno how to make pizza myself EmbarrassedLOL so i just wrote anything
really u got scared? so was i LOL
 
update cumin soon hahaha x u make me laff Tongue
hahahah LOL 
ok yes ver soonLOL 
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Posted: 03 June 2009 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by *Nishi*

Originally posted by BabyLove96

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wow selena this updat was awesome yaarShocked i got a lil scared when the upstairs part cameLOLLOL oh wow.. they making and eating pizzas this lateLOL  pls update soonBig smile 
 
haha yeah i dno how to make pizza myself EmbarrassedLOL so i just wrote anything
really u got scared? so was i LOL
 
update cumin soon hahaha x u make me laff Tongue
hahahah LOL 
ok yes ver soonLOL 
 
lmfaoooo LOL
 
update cumin soon
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Posted: 08 June 2009 at 7:38pm | IP Logged
wow
i want to hear moreee..........
 
i want pizza now THANKSS =[
LOL really good hun!!
 
hope u wrte soon
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Originally posted by bebe19

wow
i want to hear moreee..........
 
i want pizza now THANKSS =[
LOL really good hun!!
 
hope u wrte soon
 
 
u want moreee???? i wil giv u more lol
 
whoa i just ate pizza wer i liv in bham iz 9 0 clock ( perfect time for pizza) lmao x
yummy (am i maykin u hungry rofl)
 
update soon
 
 
um bebe19 weneva i try to read bebe19 creations disscussion my pc jams up, please dont take this in a mean way but do you have a virus on ur computer>? bcuz wen i clicked ur disscussion i've been getting dirty pop-ups (sorry im not being mean but i just wanted to let you know) x
 
 
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... A Twisted Summer Love Story ...
 
DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!
 
I stretched and yawned. I answered the call from mum.
 
Me: Hi mum.
 
Mum: Hello Esh, have you just woken up? It's 1:00pm dear, what did i say about this kind of behaviour?! (Yelling on the phone).
 
Me: Well mum, i had a late night because of you, bad dreams mum; one of me flying in the sky and then BANG i shoot down and me in your arms, i was dead???LOL (i lied on the phone).
 
Mum: Aww, this is all my fault. Forget your dreams. So tell me has Regina come down lately? Her mum is worried about her, you better go down and visit Regina.
 
Esh: Ariite Mummy, Esh to the rescue. Dah Dah DAAAAH.
 
I hung up and threw myself in the bath. It was cold water; what a good thing to start the day with a cold, freezing bath which is making me shiver at the momment. I dryed myself and put some scented fragrance on. I changed my clothes into a dark blue denim skirt with a navy blue sleevless top. I ran out hte house; remember without even eating breakfast! just to save Regina. I was running across the street, i could hear shouting and crying sounds coming from her house.
 
"Regina?!" I echoed at the doorstep.
 
No one answered; there was still crying sounds in the background. I tiptoed slowly through her living room and saw regina sitting on her staircase; her face covered in scars, bruises and dark circles under her eyes. I put my arm around her.
 
"Regina, what's wrong?" I asked, feel stupid.
 
"Eshaye." She squeed my arm; she was breathing rapidly. "Ozzy, he ... he ... he!" She screamed.
 
"Ozzy did what?!"
 
"He doesn't love me, Esh!" She screamed in my ear which made me shiver.
 


Edited by SeliinaBaybee12 - 09 September 2009 at 11:58am
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Sorry it's really short, i actually did it on purpose because theres not much people who read this, i just wanted to check something out about my story lol x more coming soon.

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