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... A TwIsTeD SuMmEr LoVe StOrY ... (Page 2)

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Posted: 25 March 2009 at 9:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Girl_2007

nice story, do continue!
wondering if Regina has more things in mind than wat she says...
 
thanks yeh more chapters 2 cum ive been busy with school so i didnt post the next chapter Big smile
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Posted: 25 March 2009 at 9:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ~devi~

great updateClap
like the story you have going here
continue soon=)
 
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... A Twisted Summer Love Story ...

Regina started handing out invitations she asked me and the clones to help her out. One girl Ashley Ray was forbidden to come near the party just because she wore glasses. I was kind of scared the way Regina was acting. She pushed and shoved everyone who she didn't like. Every one had to scratch their invitation cards if it said yes that meant you were invited if it said no then you weren't even allowed near Regina. I and the clones were automatically invited and so were the other members from the 'popular' table. As the people from school started fading away from the park, I was asked to join Regina for shopping after we had tea at hers. We raced back to Regina and had coffee in her garden.

"So Esh' what are you going to were for my not-so-sweet-16-party?" Regina asked sipping her coffee.

"I don't know, I was thinking when we go shopping together I'll buy a dress in the new mall Stunners." I replied, staring at the coffee.

"Okay. But you can't buy anything that you choose. I will have to choose for you since you are the new bezzie of mine!" She looked at me, again there was something in her voice which made me unsure on whether I trusted her or not.

"Hey Regina. I just noticed that I have a strand of ginger hair in my coffee!" I said gloomily, in disgust.

"Oh my god! PEGGY!" Regina Shouted at the top of her voice.

Peggy the cook came rushing out with a frightened face.

"Yes Regina M'am?" Peggy asked nervously.

"Why is there a ginger strand in Esh's coffee? You're the only one here who has ginger hair! Answer me woman!!!" Regina had blown her mind.

I didn't really care if there was a strand because I was that thirsty but Regina got angry as soon as I told her.

"You're sacked from cooking job. You will no longer work in this house ever again!" Regina shouted and asked Peggy to leave the house forever.

After Regina was feeling cool I asked if we were still going shopping.

"Of course we are silly!" She smiled.

We went of to Stunners. We were trying on different lip glosses and outfits. I saw a magnificent sleeveless dress with the perfect heels.

"Regina! I'm going to pay for this dress I'll be there down in a minute!" I shouted from the top of the stairs.

"No! Okay then fine next time I'm choosing!" She yelled back, and walked of to the Blusher Boutique.

I payed for my dress and heels at the counter, and joined in with Regina. She had brought whatever she needed and I headed back home. I knocked on the door several times no one answered. I chose the wrong day to forget my keys. I seen a lady inside the house, she didn't look like mum. I shouted through the window. The door blew open. There was dad looking at me nervously.

"Dad! I've been knocking since ages. Why didn't you open the door?" I said angrily, I was staring at him; his shirt was fully open showing his vest and he was in his boxers. I looked around the house the lady I saw wasn't there maybe it was an imagination.

"Haha! Look at what your wearing dad! Ahhh!" I laughed so hard.

"Okay calm down Eshaye I was taking a nap in my shorts and work shirt ok?! Good now its past 3:00 am get to bed!" He laughed back.

I ran upstairs and threw myself on my bed and thought what if the lady was real? Oh my god, what if dad was lying to me? I've got to do something as soon as possible.

 

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Sorry to keep you all waiting. I haven't really had time to post chapter three (the one above lol) because of school an stuff. It's not that great but i tried, i have exams coming up soon so i might be inactive x
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Posted: 25 March 2009 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
gulp... now this is really a different thing from "simply perfect".... this doesnt seem perfect..
hop my suspects arent true...
nice way to writting this lol! =D
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Posted: 02 April 2009 at 8:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Girl_2007

gulp... now this is really a different thing from "simply perfect".... this doesnt seem perfect..
hop my suspects arent true...
nice way to writting this lol! =D
 
lol theres more stuff coming up.
 
sadly someone in school stole my memory stick where i had chapter four updated inCry so i'll have to start over since i dont have a clue/remember the draft i did OuchAngryDead
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Posted: 03 April 2009 at 9:49am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by Girl_2007

gulp... now this is really a different thing from "simply perfect".... this doesnt seem perfect..
hop my suspects arent true...
nice way to writting this lol! =D
 
lol theres more stuff coming up.
 
sadly someone in school stole my memory stick where i had chapter four updated inCry so i'll have to start over since i dont have a clue/remember the draft i did OuchAngryDead
 
ShockedShockedShocked... oh my goodness... are u ok? i mean were there many things?.. did u loose sumthing important?... gosh, im sorry for you... Ouch
take ur time to recover...
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Posted: 13 April 2009 at 7:05am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by BabyLove96

Originally posted by Girl_2007

gulp... now this is really a different thing from "simply perfect".... this doesnt seem perfect..
hop my suspects arent true...
nice way to writting this lol! =D
 
lol theres more stuff coming up.
 
sadly someone in school stole my memory stick where i had chapter four updated inCry so i'll have to start over since i dont have a clue/remember the draft i did OuchAngryDead
 
ShockedShockedShocked... oh my goodness... are u ok? i mean were there many things?.. did u loose sumthing important?... gosh, im sorry for you... Ouch
take ur time to recover...
 
its gonna take forever for me to recover cuz if i go bak 2 skwl aftah easter hlz am guna be ded frum hwkConfused
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Posted: 13 April 2009 at 9:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BabyLove96

Originally posted by Girl_2007

Originally posted by BabyLove96

Originally posted by Girl_2007

gulp... now this is really a different thing from "simply perfect".... this doesnt seem perfect..
hop my suspects arent true...
nice way to writting this lol! =D
 
lol theres more stuff coming up.
 
sadly someone in school stole my memory stick where i had chapter four updated inCry so i'll have to start over since i dont have a clue/remember the draft i did OuchAngryDead
 
ShockedShockedShocked... oh my goodness... are u ok? i mean were there many things?.. did u loose sumthing important?... gosh, im sorry for you... Ouch
take ur time to recover...
 
its gonna take forever for me to recover cuz if i go bak 2 skwl aftah easter hlz am guna be ded frum hwkConfused
 
gosh... then... take it easy and relax.. its all what i can say, write and update in holidays and weekends whenever its possible for you Smile

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