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Jst read it.  Really nice ff and i luv all the chracters.
Can u like PM me wen u update plz?
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@ sugalangad_rock.=Thanks. Glad you liked it.

@ nehasfan.=No problem. Thank you.
@ bradford3.= I will. Thanks for reading.
@ *angadkripa*.= Thank you. I will ASAP!
@ 26javey26.= I will ASAP! Thanks alot.
@Angad-Kripa#1.= Thank you. Glad u like the characters. Sure I'll PM you when I update.
Thanks alot everyone for reading and commenting! Please continue doing so, reading and commenting , that is. (it's a request!)
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Part 4:-
A new opinion!

  Kripa and Anjali were helping Armaan and Kavya out in the party. Kripa and Anjali were busy in the kitchen while Armaan and Kavya, were checking the decorations, lights and the making sure there was parking space for everyone. Where as Riddhima and Kt were busy bossing little kids around.

 By the time everyone was done with their tasks, the Gupta's huge hall, was filled with guest. Everyone was being introduced to the Khanna's and vice versa. Armaan and Kavya were bored, sitting on the stairs that led to the rooms. Soon Anjali passed, without noticing them, looking angrily towards her self phone which was held up in the air by one of her hands.
 Anjali: Stupid, dumb cell pone!!
Armaan and Kavya chuckled. Anjali looked at them frowned, wrinkled her nose and then straightening her face, walked upto them.
 Anjali: Are you guys going to help or just sit their taking wierd noises out of your throats??
She handed her cell phone to Kavya.
 Kavya: Probably a signal problem.
 Anjali: Oh! So ??
 Armaan: Go outside!?!
 Anjali was about to say something when Kt, Riddhima, and Kripa came upto them.
 Kt: Ssup people??
 Kavya: Anjali's cell phone isnt working.
 Kt: Let me see that.
 She snatched Anjali's beautiful cell phone from Kavya's hand.
 She inspected it from every angle. "Hmmm" Then she started holding it high in the air in search for a signal.
 Armaan: Is this their family pose??
 Kavya: I have no idea! But it would be fun if I saw Mihir uncle waving his cell phone in the air like crazy.
 Kripa: Hey! That was rude.
 Armaan and Kavya apologized.
 Armaan: It's just that we are bored.
 Kt: So you go around talking rudely.
 Anjali: Ok! They said they were sorry.
 Kt sighs and sits on a step below Kavya.
 Kt: Sorry! It's just that I'm bored too.
 Kavya: I thought you were bossing kids around!
 Kt: Boring! These kids actually do as I say!
 Armaan: Where's the fun in that right?(Armaan rolls his eyes)
 Kt: Absolutley!
 Meanwhile, Naina had found both Angad and Laksh flirting with girls. In Mumbai her efforst to dicsipline them had failed but she wouldn't  let them flirt in Shimla! Oh, no! So she took Laksh and Angad to the gang, and told her sons to be nice and stick with these "mannered" kids!
 Riddhima giggled. Laksh imitated her while Angad rolled his eyes.
 In no time, Anjali and Kripa were chattering away, Riddhima was bugging Angad, Laksh and Kavya were talking, while Armaan and Kt were playing cricket together on Armaan's cell phone.

Soon enough time passed and food was served. Everyone started eating. The gang, Laksh and Angad were  sitting on the stairs, eating the delicious food. Armaan, Kripa and Anjali were sitting on the step above Kt, Kavya and Angad. Laksh and Riddhima were sitting on the step below Kt, Kavya and Angad.

Armaan was taking the advantage of sitting with Anjali and Kripa. He would take huge pieces of chicken in his mouth, and eat loudly with his mouth open! Anjali, who was in the middle was trying to poke her fork through his face, but was invain as Kripa was holding her tightly. What annoyed her the most was even while she was trying to harm him, he ate like she wasn't even there!! Finally, giving up, Anjali put her fork down, and turned to Kripa.
 Anjali: You just have to prove that your brother is more important than your friend??
 Kripa: I just have to save you from Princi's schemes to get you into trouble.
Armaan sat up straight and looked around.
 Armaan: Principle Arjun?? Who invited him??
 Kavya: Mom.
 Kt: He's coming here.
 Princi:Hello there!
 Gang: Hello sir!
 Princi: I see we'll have new students the next year. Glad you are already getting along.
 Kavya: Yes sir!
 Princi: I see your party is going well.
 Kavya: Thank you!
 Princi: Well, I'm in a hurry! I have to go! Please do me a favour and tell your dad, it was an emergency. And that I said good bye.
 Kavya: Yes, of course, Sir!
 Princi: Thank you! Ok kids! See you in a month or so!!
 Gang: Bye!
 Princi: Bye kids!
As Principle walked away, the gang gave a sigh of relief.

Kavya carried the yummy vanilla cake, towards the huge table, with other desserts on it. He thought he heard Anjali call him, so he turned to and saw that Anjali had fallen on the ground. In an efforst to go and help her stand before anyone noticed her, he let go of the cake, and ran towards her. When he helped her get up , it was then that he noticed his sister covered in white vanilla cream, giving him a muderous look!

Riddhima was really mad! This was the most embarrassing moment of her life! She could feel eyes watching her! She heard laughter. She turned around to see Armaan laughing his head off! She walked upto him and gave him a sarcastically sweet smile.
Riddhima: What is it that you find so funny?
Armaan: The fact that you look like a strawberry sundae!
Riddhima wiped a little piece of cream from her face and stroked it on Armaan's nose!
Riddhima: Your dress NOW suits your personality, CLOWN!!
Armaan got angry and stepped forward.
Armaan: You will so pay!!
With that he walked away, as Riddhima walked way in the opposite direction to clean herself. She was so angry at Armaan. What an idiot! She thought.
Ok! A new part! Hope you like it and please do comment!!
Don't mind the short update and the mistakes. Thanks!

Edited by lalala10 - 18 March 2009 at 8:55am

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