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hope u continue write all the time beacuse ur really gud plz cont iue soon

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Posted: 12 March 2009 at 11:34am | IP Logged
nice part...
it is surely a funny play....
a guy as a prince... will love to see its outcome...
continue soon

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Posted: 12 March 2009 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
nice part!!

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Posted: 12 March 2009 at 3:40pm | IP Logged
Great part
Kavya will make a great princess
Armaan and Kavya's jodi will rock
Cont soon
Javeria

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Posted: 13 March 2009 at 10:01pm | IP Logged
Part 3.
Efforts.
 The rehearsals begin.
 Armaan: The first scene is where, the King and Queen are seated on their throne, and they command the maid to call the Princess. Soon the Princess will enter, with the royal Assistant behind her (who will repeat the King and Queen, when,everytime the Princess greets them) , and the Princess greets the royal Couple 5 times. The royal couple reply and greet the Princess. After a little chit chat , they tell the Princess, about a young Prince, who has asked for her hand -
 
 Kavya: What!?!?! Her hand? Why does he want her hand?
 Armaan: Her hand as in ask her for marraige! Any ways, so the Princess agrees to meet this Prince. Their marraige is actually meant to be a compromise between the two Kingdoms.. In scene 2, she will hear the loyal servant singing a love song, making her realise, that she cannot marry without love but first lets do the first scene's rehearsals! Cool?
 All: Cool!

 Laksh(King) and Tulsi(Queen) are seated in two chairs with a small table in between with a bowl of Apples placed in the center. The stage is not set but the rehearsals take place on it. Soon, Tulsi(Queen) commands Kt(royal maid/servant) to call Kavya(Princess). Kavya, enters the stage in his usual fast and manly strides, leaving Kripa(royal assistance) behind. He greets the royal Couple once and walks towards the Apples.
 
Armaan(who at the moment was directing the play):Cut! Dude! Walk slowly , like a girl, gently. And greet the Couple 5 times. And stop eyeing those Apples, you monster!
 He grabs Kavya hair , and friendly kicks him towards the stage.
 
Again, the play starts and again Kavya, enters in the same way, greets the Couple 3 times and then forgets his lines.
 Kavya: Long live the Royal Couple.
 Kripa: The Royal Couple.
 Kavya: Long live the Royal Couple.
 Kripa: The Royal Couple.
 Kavya: Long live the Royal Couple.
 Kripa: The Royal Couple.
 Kavya: Long li.... (he eyes the Apples and forgets his lines).

 Armaan: Cut!!!!!!!!!! Dude! For the last time stop-
 Kavya: Ok! Sorry! One last try.
 
 The scene goes perfectly fine except Kavya's pace and his manly walk. The girls decide, that he should wear heals, thereby creating a chaos in the costume wardboard and boxes. None of the sizes fit him. Finally they manage to find him a pair with heals. Now the girls are  teaching him to walk. Riddhima holds the right hand, Kt the left hand , Kripa is behind him and Anjali in front. Kavya unstabley takes an unbalanced step and steps on Anjali's toe. Anjali shrieks, and unconciously moves forward,and holds Kavya's shoulders as she falls over him, Kavya trips and falls on top of Riddhima, Kripa and Kt. Anjali is shouting of because of the pain where as Kavya is staring at her, for the first time noticing the her ocean deep eyes. As the boys push him off of  the other girls, reality strikes back to him and he gets up and helps Anjali get up too.

Kripa: I think, that even this huge pair is a bit tight for you.
Kavya blushes."A little." He replies.
Kt: To the mall!!!!
Kt stands up.
Armaan throws himself on the sofa.
Armaan: No!!
Anjali: Got a better idea Romeo??
Riddhima: I got one! Why dont I-
Kavya: No! You guys dont start again!
Riddhima: Looks like Kavya likes being Juliet!
Kavya rolls his eyes.
Kavya: If you think that ur little jokes will get you that role... you are wrong!!

On the way to the mall, Kavya is driving and Kt is in the front passenger seat, and Anjali is sitting on the back seat, but her head is sticking out in the front and is in between, Kt and Kavya. Both the girls are deciding on which shop to go on , making Kavya take numberless turns.

While at the back, there is an awkward silence. Kripa, being the quiet girl she is,was busy looking outisde the window. Riddhima, suddenly, feels a little uncomfortable in front of Armaan. Laksh is busy text messaging his friends in Mumbai.While, Angad and Armaan are talking.

Angad: Are they always like this??
Armaan: Well, Kt is like that, but not Kripa and Anjali, probably excited since Riddhima is here.
Angad: Ahan! I always thought girls in Shimla, were the quiet, shalwar kameez type but these girls are quite, wild.. I guess.
Armaan: O. Ok!
Armaan didnt like that comment.
Armaan got annoyed and returned back to his reserved mode. He had, five minutes ago,thought of Angad to be a mannered guy.But it turns out that he was as a matter of fact, kinda, like a flirt. Armaan found that out when he asked Angad what Angad liked about Mumbai and he replied "girls!" .
 To be true, Armaan was annoying, irritating and talked alot with his close ones and people he thought he could open up to but what he was not was a flirt and he always respected women. He hated flirts! His dad, had caused him to respect women due to his actions and his rude behaviour towards Prerna, and it was one of the only things, he actually thanked his dad for.

 So he decided to not let these "Mumbai Boys", get friendly with the girls of his gang. Ok, maybe the girls were wild but he knew that they were also innocent.

Kripa: Armaan!?!?
Armaan came looked up at Kripa, who was out of the car, like everybody else.
Kripa: Kya hua??
Armaan: Kuch nahi! Lets go!
Kripa: Ok "Romoe"!! (She imitates Anjali).
Armaan looks at Kripa. He gives her hair little pull and rans away. Kripa rans three steps after him but then decides not to and starts walking. Riddhima joins her.
Riddhima: Why in a hurry.
Kripa: Nope! Just messing around with Armaan.
She and Riddhima look at Armaan, who was sticking his tongue out in Kripa's direction.
Riddhima: Did he just?
Kripa: Yes! He does that alot!
Riddhima laughs, and Kripa laughs alittle too. But Riddhima laughed a little too much thinking about his weird action. But Riddhima stopped when she saw, Kripa giving wierd looks to her and to Armaan.
Riddhima: Yeah rite!
Kripa purposely didnt stop.
Riddhima: Stop that!!
Kripa: OK!!
She said as if she didnt care.
Riddhima was glad that Armaan hadn't noticed any of this. But she still explianed to Kripa, why she was laughing, again and again untill Kripa finally told her that she (Kripa) was joking.
Riddhima: I knew that!
She pretends to laugh knowingly and cover up.
The girls enter the shop to see that Kavya was no where insight.
 They looked back and saw him behind Armaan. The girls ran upto him.
Kt: Come on ! Watchya waiting for??
Kavya: I am not going to go inside that shop.
Riddhima: Oh come on!
Kavya: No!!
Kripa: We'll cover you up.
Armaan: And I'll go with you.

So it was decided. Inside the shop, Anjali and Kt, went to find heals for Kavya, where as the guys and Riddhima and Kripa covered him when he tried each shoe. He could hear, the boys chuckling and the girls giggling but he ignored them because he really wanted to help Prerna.

By the time, they were done, it was time to get ready for the feast the Gupta's were giving.

By 7'O' clock, the males and the mothers were ready. Shanshank was wearing a black suit with a white shirt and a black tie. Mihir was wearing a blue shirt underneath a black siut with a black tie. Padma was wearing a beautiful white sari, while Tulsi was wearing a gorgeous blue one. Dilip was wearing a black suit with a peach shirt underneath and similarily Naina was clad in a peach sari. Prerna was wearing a pretty lime green sari. By 8pm, the neighbours and the peoiple invited had started to arrive.

Armaan and Kavya were helping the servants. Armaan, wearing a red shirt on dark blue jeans and Kavya, wearing a black shirt on dark blue jeans, along with Laksh, who was wearing a dark brown shirt underneath a black suit and Angad who was wearing an orange shirt, had all managed to grab the attention of young girls.

The girls soon enter, commenting on each others dresses.
Riddhima comes out wearing a red churidar pajama and a beautifully embroidedd red kameez.
Anjali is clad in a gorgeous black  Paityala shalwar and a black kameez with thin golden embroidery on it.
Kt flashes out wearing a long brown kameez with thin white and golden embroidery and a brown coloured capri.
Kripa enters wearing an orange coloured shalwaar, and a bright orange kameez with simple golden work on it. (All the girls have their specified coloured duppata's )
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Please do comment! I hope you guys like it. I know things are going fast but as soon as I reach the thrird scene, they'll be on track.

Edited by lalala10 - 25 March 2009 at 7:31am

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Posted: 13 March 2009 at 10:36pm | IP Logged
@bradford3= Thanks alot. I did. Hope you like it.

@sugalangad_rock= Thanks. Hope you like the new update.

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@26javey26 = Thanks alot.

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Posted: 13 March 2009 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
nice part....
loved it....
guy wearinf heels... a sure sight to see...
continue soon

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Posted: 14 March 2009 at 4:09am | IP Logged
both d parts wer very gud....
thanx 4 d pm n cont soon....

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