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The Beginning of Something.. (Update pg29[short]) (Page 7)

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Posted: 26 April 2009 at 6:07am | IP Logged
reserved LOL... lol! i knew it was a dream!!
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hehe x this is getting really good plz do continue
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Posted: 27 April 2009 at 6:47am | IP Logged
wow nice story
jai is sooooooooo nice

da dream was very cute

update soon
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thanx!! is a pleasure to know the opinion on ones comments... Tongue 
lol, never mind.. i too had and still have got that habit..., im always late! LOLSleepy yeeh, i think when writting that comment, lucky boy was my favourite song.. Tongue perfect for meera in her current situation also.. Tongue
 
latest part comment:
first of all, i absolutely agree wid her friend LOLBig smile, if he gave her his number, it was for some reason na.. WinkEmbarrassedLOL... if he asks rudely or teasingly why she called, she has got the argument of why did he give her his number. Big smile ok enough of my sensless talking... LOL
guys are confusing?? dont tell me! LOL... better just get used to it! coz in this story... there are gonna be loads of chapters more, and u are going to use some twists etc to add in right? TongueLOL
woooow! how lucky she is...! Big smile she gets all her replies so soon about him na... EmbarrassedTongue thats a good thing Big smile
well, i knew it was a dream coz when he got to her home, he noticed her uncomfort wid his presence.. and he just decided to go.. means he is a decent, moderately going boy... Smile so, he wont come to her home at night widout a previous notice, just take her to a romantic place, and then put his hands around her waist like anything... na?
and then boom! enough, not more than that now... wake up! LOLLOLBig smile typical!
thanks for another great part Big smile
update soon plz!
 
 
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The story is getting really interesting. Dreams can be so beautiful and you've made it exactly just that. Well done. What made you decide of the name Jai for the character?

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