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No matter how annoying technology gets, I still love it. LOL 

Wow! He is her new manager but why doesn't he recognise her and where does she work? Smile
 
By the way, I love your new Bidaai siggy and avi. Embarrassed
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Aww! Your most welcome. Brilliance will always be appreciated, no matter what.
 
Hmmm....maybe you can add a conversation between the both OR a rain sequence after work where he drops her home.
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You could also add someone trying to misbehave with her and he comes to her rescue in the rain. Their eyes meet again and he decides to drop her home for her safety. Embarrassed

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lets see what happened.....Embarrassed
brilliantly written ClapClapClap
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Welcome to thread suchi. Do leave your suggestions for the story. Big smile

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I was thinking wow, he didn't even notice her? what a mean loser he is or maybe he has ghajini moments...LOL
 
but then I saw ur post saying he was mad at the way she left him. Oh okay so he has a reason now. Good


Edited by Terenaina - 06 March 2009 at 11:32pm

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