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skeptical IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 22 February 2009 at 9:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aati1429

Amazing story!!!!!

The feel of cold was amazing. I got so empathetic.. u write really very nice!!!

raj and kranti and a babay after partition.. all was just too pleasant to read
 
Hello Aati,
 
I think we're meeting for the first time?  Thank you for yr kind words.  I'm glad it was worth your while....... Wink
Sri_Nidhi Senior Member
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Posted: 22 February 2009 at 9:47am | IP Logged
The baby is sooooooooooo cute. If the show is to end soon , I wish the ending should be this one. Skepti ur  story is brilliant. Thanks sami for ur idea.

Edited by Sri_Nidhi - 22 February 2009 at 9:48am
morningdew IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 22 February 2009 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Very nicely written Skep.. but I did not understand the context still (sorry, havent gone through any other post on this thread, so havent read if you have already answered).
 
If that is so, direct me to the relevant page no.
 
 
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Posted: 22 February 2009 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by morningdew

Very nicely written Skep.. but I did not understand the context still (sorry, havent gone through any other post on this thread, so havent read if you have already answered).
 
If that is so, direct me to the relevant page no.
 
 
 
Somewhere sometime, Sammy had written 3-4 lines about a wintry night.  She described herself looking out of the window.  She lives in cold cold Canada.  She told me how much she longed for her home here in India and all the memories she had as a young girl.
 
This was over a month ago.  I found a storyline for a story in her answer.  So I asked her if I could write a short story keeping her situation and thoughts in mind.  That is how a story emerged and I spun it around R-K.   So I have given her credit.                       
aati1429 Goldie
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Posted: 22 February 2009 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aati1429

Amazing story!!!!!

The feel of cold was amazing. I got so empathetic.. u write really very nice!!!

raj and kranti and a babay after partition.. all was just too pleasant to read

Hello Aati,

I think we're meeting for the first time? Thank you for yr kind words. I'm glad it was worth your while.......


Yes I am new to the forum.. I guess more then daily episodes.. I enjoy reading all the posts in this forum.. It is simply living with Raj and Kranti!!!
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Posted: 22 February 2009 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
Hi Skepy,

Sorry for being late to answer. I wasn't keeping well so ...

Coming back to the story, I think that it's fabulous. Loved the way you have brought Raj and Kranti's entire lives and their struggles into a cocoon of love, warmth and a blessed family heathen.

The baby is just too cute. Thanks a lot.

This is something that we are never going to see in the serial. SIgh!

Poet.
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Posted: 22 February 2009 at 8:50pm | IP Logged
Skepti,
It is wonderfull, as usual!
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Posted: 22 February 2009 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by poetic

Hi Skepy,

Sorry for being late to answer. I wasn't keeping well so ...

Coming back to the story, I think that it's fabulous. Loved the way you have brought Raj and Kranti's entire lives and their struggles into a cocoon of love, warmth and a blessed family heathen.

The baby is just too cute. Thanks a lot.

This is something that we are never going to see in the serial. SIgh!

Poet.
 
Hi Poet,
 
I didnt think that baby would become so important.  So I inserted it right at the end.  Yet, that baby seems to have stolen the show ...........
 
Hope you are feeling better now.  Take some hot chocolate ...... it may work.
 
Chocolates always do the trick for me. Wink

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