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jia.. IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 24 February 2009 at 9:43am | IP Logged
Beautiful Nij, just amazing!! Loved the way u rhymed the words!! a great one for all the boarders!! Love ur way words Nij!! I specially loved these lines!!

Walk to the boards, take deep breaths, shut your eyes
pray to your god, think of your parents and smile
let the words flow, let your hands work for a while

hinz Viewbie
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Posted: 24 February 2009 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
nij ,u know the first word that comes to my my head when i read your writing is 'CUTE'
and the u say tum ko to sab cute lagta hai hinz
but its true
some of them do make me cry and some make me smile
but they all are cute somwhere
The latest one of course is just so apt and perfect for Kratzie,Aru and many approaching their boards

Wishing everyone luck and hope u guys all come out with flying colours

Cheers nij
sorry my earlier caused more stress than it was meant to
315 nutter

edit*
just saw your siggy,u inactive huh?
and me never hungry yar, isnt that u?
i can be any of those but the hungry one lolz
is there a one thats says
'always ready to cry? '



Edited by hinanaziri - 24 February 2009 at 2:37pm
madhsar Groupbie
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Posted: 26 February 2009 at 4:47am | IP Logged
hey nijal....i m reading these verses for d first time n i must say dey r extremely gud...luved d ones abt all d characters specially d one abt tacos...u r really an amazing poet... wuold love to read more...
 
cheers
 
madhurima
 


Edited by madhsar - 26 February 2009 at 4:49am
nidha1983 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 26 February 2009 at 5:36am | IP Logged
woah its really an awesome one and i wish them best of luck for their exam they get Gud marks and get what they want

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Edited by kvn1983 - 26 February 2009 at 7:30am
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Posted: 26 February 2009 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
ladies!!!!...missed the nuts tons n tons...still am...should be back soon though...n i don't know what to feel...want the trip to never end....n don't want to miss you lot no more....why should choices be so hard and mandatory to be made urgh!...

oh well...the board struck folks....here's a cute lil something, i remember from high school retreat...i've remembered it through the years....it works everytime i say it out loud :)

"this is my quest to reach that star...

no matter how hopeless no matter how far..."

if i be honest its way over the board for the silly billy boards..trust me, and a i bet many will vouch by this for me, they are way more hype than they are ever wroth n you will all sail through like into the pacific lull expecting the atlantic storms!

so smile, work, smile again....n go on with a striking stride....bravehearts win!

ps: nij....u nut....that siggy....hahaha there's only one there il love u for forever...u shud know which one n u shud also know WHY!...by the way um surprised why um not also the one alwaz getting hurt (ask the gang i made a record breaking all my past acheievements at the applachian! they are planning to instanll my stud as a martyr rememberence LOL)

um also wondering why missy ziz is not the grumpy one....why sam is the GOOD CHURCH GIRL hahahahah i'm certain she was in splits over that!...why there aren't any takers for the SHY GIRL!!!....kiran the gangster...kratz the jock...hahahah....befitting...well crowned...n hinz....lazy...nah...we need to make a new one for her...ur certain there wasn't any for worry??!!!

oki um done..I phone isn't fun to type on...later...be back soon....n u know what i don't say often enough n you never do....same again...muah!

nj


spln IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 27 February 2009 at 6:37pm | IP Logged
*ahem* waiting for an update on the AR poetic tale in red page 1 missy....get the rusted machines of ur 8 bone locked skull cum head cum brainless matter lubricated and moving...and soon...be back home in 2 hours... i need a warm welcome Wink
pickytg Goldie
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Posted: 27 February 2009 at 10:35pm | IP Logged

@hinz...no worried ma lady..it was needed..in d most :D

@madhurima....dtz very sweet of u ....thx gurl...will surely rite more if i hve ppl lke yah encouragin me :D


@NJ...yaaraa which 1 is dt....d emoticon u abs luv? me n hinz hit d walls n cracks knees bt still cudnt cum up wit d rite pick!!


Edited by missypatel - 28 February 2009 at 1:42am
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Posted: 27 February 2009 at 10:36pm | IP Logged
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