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HEYYYyyyyyyyyyyy NJ!!!! , hru SWEETY?
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The sheer joy of reading all your parts in one is unbelievably beyond ___________[seriously can't think of a proper word right now lol
Sigh, such heart warming of re-union u have written! Sigh like da thump! [aka heart beat lol]
The desperation, the need, the fulfillment of each other presence, and the simple pure essence, you had gotten everything in the airport scene , that I feel like I'm reading a Karan Johar script here woman!! Beautiful! And the passionate embrace.....it was worth every word you wrote Nj.
she could not get her mind rid of the fantasy of wanting to snuggle into him; the tan, half a shade darker as she had realized in the video chat was visibly so she concluded and it felt like the final touch to his undeniably great looks, the male touch. Hehe, control Riddhima, Nj even u made me break a sweat here too! >.<
Yes the end of part 19 was completely touching, definitely in love for sure
Yes congrads for making this FF come to a second thread, as u deserved every post
Yes Yes.....I do love Fish n Chips as well......
I loved the connection you have written between Anji and Atul, very mature yet still loving at the same time, and yes Anji's concern about Armaan's previous marriage is completely natural
about her being the only one in his life whom he gave the Shaka Pola, released her from the grip of his past for good. He had told her it was only her she loved, he had explained how his wedding in the real sense had never been one, but the fact that he had saved his family heirloom through all those years for her or no one else gave her the deepest sense of inner happiness. She felt special about herself, and proud of having him in her life. Like wow.....it like every girl's dreamI so mesmerised in this particular scene Nj, had literally left me breathless!
Man i just love the relationship between Gappu nad his Massi! Its so cheeky and refreshing, but still heart warming, and totally laughed my head off when Gappu Booked Armaan being in Ridz room, as he wanted the whole floor to himself !! Classic!
Literally jaw dropping part 21 was!!!
@#$&^*#^% Vivek is a damn curse I tell you woman!!! @#$%@#% Made everything upside down that bastered!!!!!!1 Arugh, I feel like murder!! X_X [and i mean it ] Poor Muski! Every things was goin perfect, till that Vivek bastred ruin everything! Damit damit! Literally everything! It was a really heart-breaking part, it had soo much things going on! ....Hmmm He's a drug addict?......And the trauma you had placed Armaan under, of failing her sister, as Riddhima was still stubborn for waiting for him...yet i was shocked at Atul's calm reaction of Armaan's return, as Angi's rational behaviour is completely reasonable, as a sister and a mother....And no doubt Gappu was a true sport! It was written perfectly!
Wow....chirag should've been the detective here, and the connection he's gotten to reach this creep! Damn that character!
"I think I'll go talk so he can get some sleep before his early morning shift." Armaan said finally.
"How do you know the time for his shift?"
Gappu coughed from behind, with a violence that startled them both and as Anjali turned to thump his back a couple of times he glared at Armaan who looked away kicking himself mentally for the unintentional slip.
"I should go," he mumbled making his escape before something else came up. Man I was laughing like a riot!! This was seriously a good one!
Sigh...."I love you" how do you do it woman, RM scene was utterly magical! Rahul's regret, fear, and love he had for Muski, eventho he is brave to confront her about her miscarriage, still thinking about her depression relapse earlier and all the confrontation and comfort you had written was Breathlessly taken as a reader Nj!
The scene that touched me the most, was Angi and Gappu's mother-son bonding, lol it funny...thinkin prob had figured put Guppu actually had found a certain someone! Hehe
Alas the final part! Vivek dead?......serves him right i guess and yes it is another beautiful happy ending you have written. I loved the convo you have written, as it place your whole piece of ir FF to this one scene.
Must say I had the joy n tears reading this beautiful FF, and know you will make another one soon, which I wonder what kind of area you'll be doing on.
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