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FF:Tere liye...{LAST PART 20/PG 50}

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Posted: 05 February 2009 at 6:02am | IP Logged

hey everyone ...reading so many good FF's i too started one FF..as this is my first FF please cope with me and all the mistakes what i make...hope u all like it...






 

      ~*~part 1~*~

There is everywhere Love stories...

some stories have love but..they also have to wait...the wait goes to be...ETERNAL WAIT


A girl in her early twenties standing near window watching two kids playing..

Girl saying something to the boy..

The girl standing near the window goes back to flash back'

Two small childrens a girl and boy sitting near a farm..

Girl:tum mujhe kabhi nahi bhulogey na???

Boy:nahi heer main tumhe kabhi nahi bhulunga..aur tumhe pata hai main jab main bada ho jaunga aur hum London se wapas aa jayenge aur main tumse shaadi karunga..

Heer:pakka prem

Prem:haan heer main sirf tumse hi shaadi karunga'

Heer:agar tum nahi aaogey toh???

Prem:main aaonga..zaroor aaonga..par tum mera intezaar karogi na'.????

Heer:haan prem main tumhare intezaar karungi'par tum jaldi aana..

Prem:main jald hi aaonga'

Again back to present'

Heer(to herself)(eyes moist)main tumhare ab tak intezaar kar rahi hoon prem'tum kab aaoge???

Someone calling from behind:pari'pari'pariii

Heer(wipes her tears):haan mahi kaho'

Mahi:pari tum ro rahi thi???

Heer:nahi toh mahi'

Mahi:offo !!!ab tum mujhse bhi chupaogi???

Heer:aisi koi baat anhi mahi'

Mahi:kya main apni behan ko nahi janti'main tumse acha tumhe jaanti hoon'prem ki yaad aagaye na???

Heer:naahii'

Mahi:ab toh math chupa..teri aanso sab kehtey hai..

Heer:haan'.

Mahi:bas hheer tera intezaar ab khatam hi hoga tera prem tere liye wapas aayega..

Heer:bas usi din ka intezaar hai'

Mahi:haan'par ab college  chal warna mera phone bajtey bajtey mere kaan phatt jayenge'

Both share a laugh..

 

They both reach college'.

Mahi:pari Lagta hai dair hi gayi'par meet kahin dekhayii nahi de raha hai..

Guy from behind:itni late????

Mahi(bitting her tongue):who'pari ki wajah se..

Meet:pari ki???

Mahi:sorry'

They both hug'

Meet:tumhe pata main kabse tumhare intezaar kar raha hoon'

Mahi:haan tab se jab tumne mujhe call kiya tha..

Meet:aur main call kab kiya???

Mahi:2 ghantey pehle..par im sorry naa'

Heer:mahi ab hum class main chaley???

Mahi:haan pari chal chaltey hai..meet main tumse class ke baad cafeteria main milungi..

Meet:thik hai..par jaldi ana..

Heer nd mahi leaves for class'

 

Meet:arrey harry.,.p.j aur dheer kahan hai????

Harry:who dono toh class main hongey ab hum chaley???

Meet :haan chaltey hai'

 

After class'

Mahi,heer,maya,and two more girls are sitting in cafeteria..

Mahi:yeh meet mujhe keh raha tha..par ab dekho yeh hi late kar raha hai'

Heer:mahi abhi toh class chal rahi hogi..thoda wait karo..woh aajayega..

Just then the meet & dheer comes

Meet:koi mujhe bahut yaad kar raha tha????

Mahi:really???kaun????

Meet:hai koi '

Mahi:haan haan ussi ke paas jao na'

Meet:hmm'haan chala jaata hoon'

Goes and hugs mahi from behind'

Meet:meri mahii'

Mahi:par mera koi toh koi aur hai'

Maya:yeh harry dheer aur p.j akhan hai???

Meet:harry gaya hai apni girlfriend ke paas'aur p.j gaye hai library'

Maya:girl friend yeh kaun hai???

Mahi:maya yeh bas tumahri tang khinch raha hai'harry bhi library main hai..

Meet:yahan Canada main kitni ladkiyan hai..koi na koi tohg mill hi jayegi mujhe aur harry ko..

Mahi:haan ..waise tum bilkul thik keh rahey ho meet..yahn canad ladke bhi bahut hai'hiii eddy'

Meet:arrey eddy'yahan aao..yahan tumhare behan bula rahi hai'mahi..

Mahi:behan???

Meet:haan main bhi toh behan ki baat kar raha tha'yahan mujhe kitni behane milenge'

Mahi:ohh!!!!ab samajhi'dekha pari ..meet ne kitni jaldi baat palthi hai'abhi toh girl freeing dhoondne ki baat kar raha tah..aur abhi behan dhoondeygaa,,,

Meet:arrey..nahi pari maine aisa nahi kaha'

Mahi:jhoot'..tum kitna jhoot bolne lagey ho'

Meet:main aur jhoot'.nahi..haan bolta hoon par'bahut kam..

Mahi:bahut kam???yeh jhoot..

Meet:haan haan bahut kam sach kehta hoon..

They all laugh..

Just then p.j and harry comes

Harry:hii guys..

Everyone:hii..harrry..

p.j:hii everyone'

everyone:hi p.j

haary:yahn jokes chal rahey tahy kya???

Mahi:haan 'meet tumhare girlfriends ke naam keh raha tha..

Harry:mnahi meri koi girlfriends nahi hai'.

Maya:ohh yaa..harry????

Harry:haan maya..sach..

Maya:lisa kaun hai????

Harry:who toh bas meri clas mate hai..

Dheer:jo sirf harry ke saath hi baithi hai..

Maya:haary..???dheer kya keh raha hai????

Harry:areey nahi maya..yeh toh bas mazaak kar raha hai'..marwayega kya???

Mahi:ab bas karo..yeh sab'

They have a chat for some time..

Mahi:chal pari bahut dair ho rahi hai..

Mahi:bye everyone..

Mahi nd heer leaves'

 

At their hostel..

Mahi:pari..aaj maa bouji ka call aay tha kya???

Heer:nahi..

Mahi:thank god..

Heer:par tumne kyun poocha???

Mahi:kyunki aaj..mummy ji ka b'day hai'

Heer:arrey mahi main toh bhool hi gayi..

Mahi:koi baat nahi hum hi call kardenge..

Mahi&heer call their home'

Heer:hello sasriyakal chachaji..

Chchaji:arrey heer puttar..kaise hai meri bacchi???tum log thik toh hona???

Heer:hum bilkul thik hai,'bas humey chachiji se baat karni thi..

Chachiji:sasriyakal puttar..

Heer:sasriyakal

Mahi:arrey pari  speakers toh on kar..

Mahi&heer: happy b'day..

Chachiji:tum dono ko yaad tah???

Mahi:arrey mama agar humey nahi toh kissey yaad rahega???

Chachiji:tum dono thik toh ho na??

Mahi:haan hum thik hai..sab thikh ai..main waise hi zyada baat karti hoon aur pari baut zyada kam baat karti hai..aur weather main aapko e-mail kar dongi.,..aur kuch..???

Chachiji:tumhare final semester kab ahi???

Mahi:who sab aap pari se pooch lo..

Heer:chachiji humare final semester..next month hai..

Chachiji:accha beta acche se padayii karna'

Mahi:mamma humey maloom hai..yahn aap nahi hai toh kay??aapki parchayii toh hai..pari ke roop main..

Chachiji:accha beta hum baad main call karenge'

Mahi&heer:thik hai bye'

They hangs the phone..

 

While sleeping

Mahi:tujhe pata hai..pari

Heer:kya?

Mahi:mujhe na tujhse bhi zyada prem ka intezaar hai..pata hai kyun??

Heer:nahi'

Mahi:kyunki main apni pari ke aankho main aansoo aur intezaar nahi dekh sakti'

Heer:par mahi'

Mahi:aur tum janti ho..main tumhe pari kyun kehti hoon'

Heer:nahi'

Mahi:kyunki ur my angel..jo sabke problems kam kar deti hai'.sabke hooton pe hasi le aati hai..par khud dukhi rehti hai..

Heer:mahi main dukhi nahi hoon'

Mahi:haan tere intezaar main kitna dukh main jaanti hoon'

Heer:nahi mahi mere intezaar bas pyaar hai'

Mahi:haan haan main janti hoon'..woh pyaar meri pari ko kitna dukh deta hai har pal ke saath kitna dukh de jaata hai main jaanti hoon..

heer:yeh dukh hi mujhe prem ka ehsaas dilata hai..

mahi:main bhi na'dekh kitni raat ho gayi hai..ab so ja'warna kal dobara late hojayegi..

mahi goes to sleep..

heer thinking:har pal ke saath ek umeed bandh jaati meri dhadkano ke saath..har saanso mein tumhare hi intezaar hai..prem'ab aa bhi jao'



HOPE U ALL LIKE IT..


PLZZ DO COMMENT...



Edited by sweetshab - 22 October 2013 at 11:57pm

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Posted: 05 February 2009 at 6:28am | IP Logged
wow ...nice one ..do continue ..
nikki786 Senior Member
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Posted: 05 February 2009 at 8:05am | IP Logged
hiya that was reali good i lyked it
cont soon plz
Casssp Goldie
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Posted: 05 February 2009 at 9:25am | IP Logged

Part1 is very nice do continue soon. 

flowers4u IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 05 February 2009 at 10:55am | IP Logged
bravo great luved it plzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 05 February 2009 at 11:14am | IP Logged
hey
great start
part 1 nice
do cont soon...
angel.samee Senior Member
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Posted: 06 February 2009 at 2:51am | IP Logged

1 part is very nice plz cont soooon dear............

-Tannu- Goldie
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Posted: 06 February 2009 at 4:12am | IP Logged
nice FFTongue
PART 1 is too good...ClapClap
just seein forward to its further updates
"har pal ke saath ek umeed bandh jaati meri dhadkano ke saath..har saanso mein tumhare hi intezaar hai..prem'ab aa bhi jao"
this show heer's wait nd her love for prem

do continue soon...

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