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bernard shaw
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I never thought I would get to a 2nd thread on this FF!
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bernard shaw
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Hi there! Good to see you back...hope what ever was preoccupying you is resolved! I am so glad that you like dthe parts!
bernard shaw
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23, isn't that how young you are child? Indeed a coincidence and a fortuitous one and am so glad that the one line made you pick up the phone and sort things with your brother!
You would be surprised how similar you are even though you maybe very different'not making sense, am I? I have a younger bro, about 5 years younger to me'we are like chalk and cheese, I am talkative he's reticent, I am all over the place, he is very precise, I am an extrovert while he's an introvert and bulk of our fights are over why he does not go out more often, why is he quiet etc'
And then it takes just a small little thing to make you realise that underneath all those differences we are so similar! And no matter how much we agree to disagree (and we do that almost al the time) we are two sides to the same coin!
Am so glad that you liked the part and the convo. Yup I thought it was high time that Ridhima got curious about Armaan and his family unlike the Ridhima of DMG who is happy assuming that he fell out of the sky!
cheers hun,
keep leaving u essays all the time!(read: ignore conveniently!)
nj
LOve the essays, so keep 'em comming! I know what you mean about the sibling relationship! You sound amazing like us! The only sport that we both did together was swimming! We are both parcticaly water babaies, spening our evening in the pool with friends till the coach parctically threw us out os it was closing time! And we used to play badminton, perversely so, cos he is younger and would end up loosing to me and would sulk! While Iw oul strut around the place cos I had won! 
Quite the terrible sister i was! Other than that we share a great love of music which we have inherited from our mom - she is a trained classical singer! Other than that we are chalk and cheese!
Sujata77
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bernard shaw
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i jus cant express in words how much i loved ths part..obviously m not as gifted with words as u..it amazes me to c such gud talents in ths forumm..i love indiaforums for ths reason..the Bandra trip gave me an insight as to the place actually is since i have personally never been there..i waited a long time yesterday nite jus so i cud read ur ff,but cudnt make it..m reviewing now..jus feel like goin on n on..but i knoe thr has to b a limit set to my words..i jus want to say, MHON means a lot to me..keep writing n i also need to appreciate u for updating so soon..thanks a bunch honey..will wait for the nxt part eagerly!!
shriya
Shriya, am so glad that you enjoyed the part and that you thought I did justice to the date. More than that I am thrilled that you think I ma gifted with words ? I don't think I am, but the words made my day! I have to show this to my other half who is the really articulate and witty one between the two of us!
Am so glad you enjoyed the reference to Tantalus and Armaan (as in the French family name)! The latter was a co-incidence as I was reading something on His Red Eminence and the dots just connected!
I am sorry for not being able to post the update earlier but I am still juggling work, and now house guests?the beginning of the year is always hectic as one tries to crack as much of your targets as you can so that you are not under pressure end of the year! I think that's obvious in the pace of my updates, lol! They were much faster in dec last year when I started than now, lol!
Shall post the next part soon!
hey sam..no problem post ur parts whneva u r free..however it was a surprise knowing u r married..didnt knoe abt ths thpough...and blv me it was a pleasant one!..keep writing..will wait for the update...
Well, have been married for a little over a year, though have been going aroun for 5 years or a little bit more!
bernard shaw
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Hey there, Sam!!!
Ok,completely bust my ass for having pulled off that houdeni act like that....i dunno why, suddenly the zest to comment left me...and i owe u an apology for it,along with nj too, cuz you guys totally rocked me over with the parts u updated..iu dunno wat happened along the way...it was like one of those days when you suddenly start feeling meaningless and useless and you start thinking over n over again whether you really do matter as much as you think? You know..!! ANd then, there was this whole big mess with friends and what not...and then day before yesterday, it tore my lungs out at a friend for being the selfish person that she was being to me and my other friends, aand WoAaaHH!!! i was suddenly feeling better and light...!! Hehehe, dont think an evil sadistic who takes out her temper on friends, but thaty girl deserved it...
Anyways...coming back to the part....umm, i guess i never came back for the reserve on part 22....so i will give my small comment on that, cuz i have forgotten a bit of it...Truly, that part was one which left me thinking more about Riddhima's insightfulness or what you could call insecurities...i mean, i remember frowning in the part when she resfuses to go with Armaan...i could SO relate to him, its like being so happy about having made a plan together an dthen pooosssh, something happens and you are like, deflated hehehe...BUT you left me smiling with the end, it was so cutely written..i guess its one of those moments between a girl and a guy which give a tinge of something more than a friendship....
Part 23...ummm..what ccan i say...being a romantic myself, i felt a bit of lack of ti, but i totally get it...the kind of relationship they share, they couldnt exactly get all lovey-dovey there...i think no one could havae written it more platonically yet so suggestively better tan you...hats off...sorry, didnt do ANY justsice to Atul and his thoughts, i was so engrossed in AR date that i totally crossed him over while reading hehehehe..anyways...i think Riddhima should have told Armaan about te whole thing, that was what i felt tickling m a bit, i think it could have helped make their bond stronger, but i guess u may have somthing better planned in ur head...
Anyways...153 has definitely been a number for all of us in some way or the other....the othe day, i updated Green-Blue Hues on page 153, NJ updated Unleashing on 135 (quite the reverse) and then u on 153 too...hehehe...dun worry, um not psyched out on numericals, as much as i hate them....numerology is not quite my belief, just giving a weird explanation of the connection, which um sure was a conincidence hehehe...anyways...how have u been? everything gong well with u? hey, wats ur zodiac sign...? dont believe in it too, but anyways...!!
So thats abt it...promise wont be this late enxt time...
Loads of love
Kiran
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bernard shaw
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Young Suvarna, I hope you enjoyed DMG yesterday?after along time yesterday, I thought the episode made sense?.the father being upset at not knowing and at the ignominy of having daughter caught romancing in the park by a cop and having to bail her out?anger with the daughter but natural, feeling of being let down by Armaan having given him shelter, Atul's anger at being made a scapegoat though I must admit DMG's characters are wonderfully self centered with no depth considering the fact that every time Armaan gets into trouble they happily abandon him and join hands in pointing fingers at him!
Looking forward to read your update post DMG ... now thats gonna be a treat 
As for Ridhima, the less said the better! I can understand her reluctance to push her father but to just cry and not defend her man in front of her friends is terrible! Nikki deserves him far more! At least she has the courage to stand up for the guy whom she loves!
bernard shaw
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Posts: 1376
Thanks for the PM! :)
That was really good! I like how you incorporated Armaan's name, and the whole Greek god part. I enjoying reading this ff the most because of all the literally elements and references you make. I think that's one of the things that set's this fanfic apart from so many others. Your writing style is very unique. We're you ever a thinking of being an english major or an author? I appericate the extra research you do for the small things like Arzoo and Amraan, the orgin of Armaan's name. Overall you're doing a marvelous, stunning and masterful job.
You're doing an excellent job, I can't wait for Atul and Anjali's little confrontation, i was a little sad cause i didn't see too much of Raul or Muskaan. I didn't mind, Armaan and Ridimaa's building relationship was nice to observe.
Well, continue soon. I'll be waiting for the next part and PM. :)
By the way, I know I have asked this before, but can I get a link to see the painting in Ridimaa's Study? I have been wanting to see the painting. Thanks.
Ishu
Hi Ishu, first of all apologies for the delayed response. Blame my other half for it, lo!
You are welcome for the PM…thank you for the wonderful words! Nope, was never an English major but am very fond of reading…would love to write but its so far has been limited to memo/ case studies / papers and a few fun things for friends etc… even one fic is beginning to take its toll of my creativity, I would have made one lousy author!
I am so glad you liked the Tantalus and House of Arman reference! Have posted the next part, do read and tell me if you liked the Atul-Anji convo.
I am so sorry, did I not give the link to Guernica in my last response. I am enclosing the link here.
http://www.pbs.org/treasuresoftheworld/a_nav/guernica_nav/main_guerfrm.html
My apologies for the oversight.
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