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Posted: 27 January 2009 at 7:24am | IP Logged

Suri Armaan is walking through the corridor with flowers behind his back. Riddhima suddenly turns the corner and they bump into each other and fall to the floor.

Armaan: Kumari Guptaji, kripya humme maaf kardijiye, humara dhyaan kahi aur tha.

Riddhima: its ok Armaan, lekin tum kis bare mein soch rahe the…(she notices the flowers) aww, thank you Armaan…

Armaan: (confused) Riddhimaji shukriya kis baat ka?…

Riddhima: yeh flowers bahaut khoobsurat hain…tum mere liye laye ho na? (smiles)

Armaan:  (stutters) nahiji….yeh phool main kisi aur ke liye laya hoon….

Riddhima: (shocked) kya?! (she stands up angrily and stares at Armaan hurt) tum..tum kisi aur ke liye laye ho?...

Armaan: ji wo….

Riddhima: (grabs Armaan's arm and takes him to the fire escape) Armaan mujhe laga tha, ke yeh sab karke tum Papa ko impress kar rahe ho…mujhe paane ke liye kar rahe ho. Maine khabhi nahi socha tha ke tumhara dhyaan in baton se alag kisi aur baat pe chala jayega…aur aaj tum mujhe saaf bata rahe ho ke yeh flowers tum kisi aur ladki ke liye…

Armaan: Nahi Riddhimaji, aap humme ghalat samaj rahi hain…yeh phool hum aapke liye nahi, lekin kisi aur kanya ke liye bhi nahi laye hain…

Riddhima: (doesn't believe him) Kanya? Acha, to tum yeh kehne ki koshish kar rahe ho, ke yeh flowers kisi ladke ke liye hain?

Armaan: Ji…hum yeh phool humare patient, Major Khannaji ke liye laye hain..hum ahinsa mein vishwaas rakthe hain. Aur humare manna hai ke in phoolon ko dekh ke Major Khanna bhi khil uthenge aur apne ilaaj ke liye turaant raazi hojayenge…(smiles)

Riddhima: (embarrassed) oh…(looks at the ground)…lekin tum yeh sab kab thak karoge Armaan...kitni der ke liye apne aap ko badal kar rakhoge…

Armaan: Dekhiye Kumari Guptaji, sasurji ne jo bhi sharatein rakhi thi, un sab ko dhyaan mein rakh ke humne yeh roop apnaya..aur wo humare is roop se bauhaut prasand bhi hue…ab wo nishchit humare vivaah ke liye jaldi maan jayenge…

Riddhima: (sadly) nahi Armaan, abhi bhi tumne Papa ki sab shartein nahi maani hai….

Armaan: (confused) Riddhimaji? –

Riddhima: Unho ne yeh bhi kaha tha, ke wo ek aisa daamad chahte hai…jis ki izaat main karoon aur pyar bhi…lekin, main tumhari izaat nahi karti…aur naa hi tumse pyar karti hoon…

Armaan: (stares at Riddhima shocked)

Riddhima: Mujhe purana Armaan chahiye, apna Armaan…jo mujhse bahaut  pyar karta hai….din ke har ek pal mein mujhe yeh ehsaas dilate hai ke main uske liye kitni important hoon…mujhe MERA Armaan wapas chahiye …jiski main izaat bhi karti hoon aur pyar bhi..(cries) tumse nahi….

Armaan: Riddhima…

Riddhima: Papa ko impress karte karte tum apne aap ko bhool gaye ho Armaan….mujhe bhool gaye ho…humare pyar ko….maine in kapdon ke saath nahi pyar kiya tha….(puts her hand on his heart) is se kiya tha…tum-….aapne aap ko badlo mat Armaan…Papa ko dil se jeeto, saach se…Jis Armaan se main pyar karti hoon, usse Papa bhi pyar karenge…wo usse bhi apnayenge…. Please…..please Armaan..(she cries and quickly leaves through the doors)

Armaan: (stands still..shocked)

*now if the scene continued the way it should…our Cool Dude Armaan Malik would be back with a bang!-miss him sooo much this FF is dedicated to that Armaan!:D*

 

Comments are much appreciated sorry was done in a rush so apolgies for any mistakes! X x

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Posted: 27 January 2009 at 9:23am | IP Logged
heywow yaar it ws awesom yaar cnt wait i would lv 2 read more cont soooooooon aww ridz ws crying hope so he wll be back soooon with a bang........

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Posted: 27 January 2009 at 9:32am | IP Logged
its raelly gud cant wait to read more

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Posted: 27 January 2009 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Nice part! :)
 
But hun...All FFs should be posted in the FF section...Thistopic will be closed by the mods soon...So I suggest u shud reopen ur FF in the FF section where more people can read it! =D
 
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Posted: 27 January 2009 at 10:22am | IP Logged
lol...its amazing...

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Posted: 27 January 2009 at 10:49am | IP Logged
Aww my god that was awesome
Ridz crying.>So sweet
I  hope she does that in the show to hell change for sure

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Posted: 27 January 2009 at 11:04am | IP Logged
nice!

Craze_naina

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Posted: 27 January 2009 at 3:14pm | IP Logged

this is wonderful part.....very beautifully writtenThumbs Up

I thought its a continuation from 26 jan episode but it seems not really....since ridz know bout his plan to impress dr shashank in ur ff
 
u must continue writing this ff.....would luv to read more...

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