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luv it...plz cont soon....

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Hey thanks for important summary n Stuff ... ! you know I was wandering that who Mayank was ?? Thanks for solving the mystery yaar !! Do continue soon !
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Originally posted by dancingdiva91

luv it...plz cont soon....
  
Thanks, next part will be up in a few mins
 
Originally posted by Ridzigarima

Hey thanks for important summary n Stuff ... ! you know I was wandering that who Mayank was ?? Thanks for solving the mystery yaar !! Do continue soon !
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Take care
Garima
   your welcome. if you have any confusion just ask.
 
 
 
 
Javeria

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Luved the charcater sketch!!
Itz getting really confusing but itll make sense when the story progresses.
Anywayz cont soon.
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Part 5

Basu House

We see a pull up taxi on the drive way. Then we see Nikki paying the taxi driver and taking her stuff inside. She rings the doorbell and Kumkum opens the door

Kumkum: Nikki (She then hugs her)

Nikki: Nameste Aunty. How are you?

Kumkum: I'm fine, how was your flight? Was there any problems?

Nikki: My flight was fine and there were no problems, expect for the food it was horrible.

Kumkum laughs and says: Come in, I'll get you something and then go and rest.

Nikki: Okay Aunty

Kumkum: Ramu kaka, (Ramu kaka comes and stands in front of Kumkum) yeh saman guest room mein rakdo

Ramu kaka: Theek hai (He then takes Nikki's language and takes it to the guest room)

Kumkum takes Nikki to the living room and sits and talks with her. Then Kumkum goes to the kitchen to make food for Nikki. The Prerna comes and sees Nikki.

Prerna: You must be Nikita, the girl Kumkum was talking about

Nikki: Nameste (She then takes her blessings), and yes I'm Nikita but you can call be Nikki if you want

Prerna was really impressed with her, despise living in London for a long time she didn't forget her values.

Prerna: Where's Kumkum?

Nikki: Aunty went to the kitchen to make me food, because the airplane food was horrible.

Nikki and Prerna talk more, Prerna likes Nikki. Just then Kumkum comes to Nikki with the food.

Nikki: Aunty, it's been so long since I had your food. (She then takes a bit and screams a little because it was hot)

Kumkum: Nikki, how many times do I have to tell you wait till it cools down a little?

Nikki then quickly finishes the food.

Nikki: Aunty it was very good. I'm going to sleep; I have to go early tomorrow

As Nikki is about to leave Summit and Anurag come and stop her

Summit: You're leaving without meeting me

She then turns around to find Summit there, and then she goes and hugs him. She then takes the blessing of both Summit and Anurag.

Nikki: Nameste

Summit and Anurag: Nameste

Summit: How are you?

Nikki: I'm good, how are you? Do you take your medicine on time?

Summit: I'm great, and having a doctor in the family I have to

Nikki: Who's the doctor?

Summit: My son

Nikki: Uncle, I'm tired I'm going to go to sleep

Summit: Good night beta

Nikki went to her room leaving Kumkum, Prerna, Summit and Anurag

Anurag: She's a nice girl

Prerna: How long did she stay in England?

Kumkum: About 3 years

Prerna: I'm impressed; she still didn't forget her tradition

Summit: She's Surya and Gayethri's daughter she can't forget her tradition

Prerna: Surya and Gayethri Bajaj, it's been such a long time since I met the

Anurag: We should go meet them

Kumkum: You meet Surya soon because he's Anjali's mama 

Prerna: What about Gayethri?

Kumkum: She died in a car accident wit Sonia (Rishab's wife) and Parvati when she was 10

Anurag: That's so sad

Just then Kavya, Angad and Prem come. Kavya straight way goes to his room leaving Anurag, Prerna, Summit and Kumkum confused

Prerna: What happened to him?

Prem: Well bhai met bhabhi

Anurag: Bhabhi…you mean Anjali? How?

Angad: The Company we're going to work with is owned by her and her sisters

Prem then tells them about the incident that happened in the office with Anjali. After hearing that they all start laughing

Then Abhimanyu comes in and sees everyone laughing which makes him confused.

Abhi: What happened? What are you all laughing?

Prem then tells Abhi what happened which causes him to laugh as well

Kumkum: Stop, go freshen up and get Kavya. I'll set the tables

 

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Meanwhile in Samrat and Mayank's apartment

We see Samrat and Kripa arguing, while Mayank and Mukti are covering there ears with pillows.

Samrat: Kripa try to understand. We can't come

Kripa: But Sammy I cant let you live here when you can live with us

Samrat and cups Kripa face and says: You know that Sanjeevani is close by, so bhai won't have any problems. I promise that we'll go to office togather

Kripa: Fine

Samrat: Now that likes my Kripa

Mayank: Finally, if you both fought more Mukti and I would have ran away

Kripa then whines: Bhai

Mayank: I'm sorry; I love you (He then pulls her into a hug)

Mukti: Now since all of this is over, let me tell you what Kripa did

Kripa: Mukti you won't say anything

Samrat: No Mukti tell us

Mukti then tells them about Kripa almost burning the building, which cause Mayank, Samrat and Mukti to laugh

Samrat: Kripa you're so stupid. Even I know the basics of the kitchen

Kripa then goes to Mayank and complains: Bhai see there making fun of me. All I wanted to do was make food. It's not my fault that I can make it

Mayank: Samrat, Mukti shut up. You made my Kripa upset

Mukti: Sorry

Kripa: It's okay

Samrat: Sorry babes, but I was funny

Kripa: No, don't talk to me

Samrat then goes to Kripa and pulls her into a hug and says: I'm sorry, you know I love

Kripa: You know I can't stay mad at you and I hate you

Samrat: What!

Kripa: I love you too

Mukti: Stop with the loving, lets go home Kripa. Di must be waiting

Kripa: Okay, let's go

Mukti and Kripa both go home

 

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Bajaj Residence

We see Rishab, Om, Surya and Anjali eating

Om: How was the meeting?

Anjali: It was good, we got the contract. They are coming tomorrow so we can sign the contract because Kripa and Mukti weren't here

Rishab: Where did they go?

Anjali: Samrat and Mayank came back today so I told them to fix up the company flat

Surya: Samrat and Mayank are back and there staying a flat

Om: Why don't they stay here with us?

Anjali: Nikki wanted them to stay there and I told Kripa that if she can convince them then they can stay here

Then we see Kripa and Mukti come

Rishab: Did you convince them?

Kripa: No (She said sadly)

Anjali: Well I have news that would make you happy

Mukti: You're getting married?

Anjali: Shut up Mukti. We got the contract

Kripa: Really! That great

Anjali: They are coming tomorrow so we sign it

Mukti: What time are they coming?

Anjali: At 10. I'm going early, so don't be late

Kripa: Don't worry, Sammy and I will be on time

Surya: What do you mean by "Sammy and I"?

Mukti: Samrat promised Kripa that they'll both go to office together since they cant live here with us

Surya: Okay, what about you Mukti?

Mukti: I'll be there, I have to go somewhere first but I'll make it

Anjali, Kripa and Mukti finished eating and went to there rooms

Surya: I don't know why but I think there's something between Kripa and Samrat

Rishab: I don't think so. There best friends that's it

Om: Rishab's right Kripa and Samrat have known each other since the were born there just best friends

Surya: Remember everyone use to say that Kripa and Samrat will get married on day

Rishab: Surya if there was something Kripa would have told us by now

Surya: I think your right

 

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Basu Residence

Everyone is eating at the dining table except for Nikki and Kavya. 5 minutes later Kavya comes and sits. When everyone sees him they start laughing, which made Kavya confused

Kavya: Why are you all laughing?

Abhi: Kavya you're not married yet you didn't let go of Anjali's hand. I wonder what will happen after marriage

Kavya: Who told?

Angad pointed at Prem while Prem pointed at Angad

Kavya: You both are idiots. Just wait till you fall in love or get married

Prem: We're not getting married

Abhi: Kavya, Prem's right. Who would want to marry those 2 idiots?

Angad: I thought you were on our side

Abhi: Sorry guys if I stayed at your side he would have said the same thing to me

Prerna: Stop arguing and eat

Summit: Kumkum, did Nikki eat?

Kumkum: Yeah, she ate before you came

Abhi: Who's Nikki?

Summit: Remember Surya uncle, his older daughter, Kripa's sister

Abhi: Why didn't I meet her?

Kumkum: When you came back from America, she was in England

Angad: Is she hot?

Prerna: Angad and Prem she's off limits

Kumkum: She is also Anjali's sister

Kavya: What a coincidence

Abhi: Why is she staying when she can stay at her house?

Kumkum: No one knows she's here. She wants to surprise them on Rishab bhai Saab's birthday

Abhi: Oh, I'm going. Good night

 

 

Javeria - Iknow this part was boring but please bear with me. The next part will be much better. All the couples are most likely to meet.

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Posted: 10 February 2009 at 5:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Angad-Kripa#1

Luved the charcater sketch!!
Itz getting really confusing but itll make sense when the story progresses.
Anywayz cont soon.
Harji
    Thanks. Let me know what's confusing you. I might be able to get rid of your confusion for some bits, but for the other you'll have to wait

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Posted: 10 February 2009 at 6:05pm | IP Logged
Just read the FF and it's amazing with so many character and all of them are my Fav character.
please continue soon and please PM me if you can!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 10 February 2009 at 6:08pm | IP Logged

NOOO! I was expecting the cuples to meet today Javeria!

Stop making us waiting for so long. LOL
Really gud part it was awesome and funny
Harji

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