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Posted: 02 February 2009 at 7:26am | IP Logged
nice part
but who r Samrath & Mayank in this play...
continue soon

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Posted: 02 February 2009 at 6:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by yamnovbloom

nice update so new surprises i lik it yaar , can't wait for next part
   
Thanks
 
Originally posted by Ridzigarima

Originally posted by Ridzigarima

hey di .. This was an awesome Part .. really Fab .. I'm dying to read the next part .. Can't wait .. So please continue soon ...and PM me ..
  
Thanks the next part is up. Please dont call me di, im only 15
 
 
Rocking part ! Ok fine will not call you di .. but I'm supposed to as I am just 14 !! Is that ok ?? Please Please do update soon ... I will waiting for that ... Good Luck for he semesters .. Gonna watch out for mine tooo ..
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Its okay if you call me di, I'll try to get the update by thursday, if not then by the weekend for sure
 
 
Originally posted by muzic_lyf

hey....m a new reader....ma name is payal...jus caught up wid ur stry.........its really good.....quite interesting....must say...
plz continue soon.....n ya 1 mre thng....can u plz pm me d nxt tme u update......plz.......
Thanks, i added you to my PM list
 
 
Originally posted by nehasfan

nice part....
  
Thanks
 
 
 
Originally posted by ~*shaili*~

hey luvly perts..lukin forward to more..esp. ka n ak scenes!
   Thanks
 
 
 
Originally posted by sujalangad_rock

nice part
but who r Samrath & Mayank in this play...
continue soon
   Thanks. Samrat and Mayank are brothers. they are very close to the Bajaj family
 
 
 
Javeria
 
 
 

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Posted: 03 February 2009 at 6:06pm | IP Logged
Really gud part but can u summarize the whole story to now becuz i have tottally forgotten it and im really busy.
Plz pm me when u upate again.
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Posted: 03 February 2009 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Angad-Kripa#1

Really gud part but can u summarize the whole story to now becuz i have tottally forgotten it and im really busy.
Plz pm me when u upate again.
Harji
Sure i'll summarize the whole thing. You dont need to ask me to PM you, i added you to the PM list

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Posted: 03 February 2009 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
Summary - For Harji
 
Anurag and Prerna want Kavya and Anjali married. Anjali's dad and mamas are thinking of getting her married. Kavya Anjali, Angad Kripa and Prem Mukti meet. Nikki is coming back to India with Mayank and Samrat (Very close friends) without anyone form her family knowing. Nikki and Mayank are going to go to Sanjeevani while Samrat will be working with Anjali, Kripa and Mukti.
 
Javeria

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Posted: 03 February 2009 at 11:11pm | IP Logged

Part 4b

 

Bajaj Enterprises

Anjali's cabin

Anjali: Kripa, Mukti I need you both to go to the company's flat and fix it up

Mukti: But why di?

Anjali: Mayank and Samrat are coming today

Kripa: Oh my god, really!

Mukti: But what about the meeting?

Anjali: Don't worry about that, I'm here and I also have Gunjun

Mukti: Okay di, but why are they staying in the company flat when they can stay with us.

Anjali: I don't know, Nikki called and asked me if they could stay at the flat and I agreed.

Kripa: I don't care what you say di, they are staying with us.

Anjali: Kripa, Nikki said she wanted them to stay at the flat, if you can convince them then they can stay with us.

Kripa: Okay

Anjali: Now get to the flat and fix it up.

Kripa and Mukti: Okay di (They leave after they say that)

 

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Conference Hall (Bajaj Enterprises)

 

Anjali: Gunjun is everything ready

Gunjun: Don't worry, everything is ready. I checked everything

Anjali looks at her watch and says: There's still time, I'm going to call up on Kripa and Mukti to see how there doing

Gunjun: You go call; I'll take care of them if they come

Anjali: Thanks doll

 

As Anjali goes to the corner of the room Kavya, Angad and Prem come in. They all then get seated.

Kavya: If I'm not mistaken weren't there suppose to be 4 people

Gunjun: Well the thing Kripa and Mukti had to leave for something important and Anjali di is over there. (She says pointing to Anjali, whose back is shown)

Kavya: umm, okay

Just then Anjali comes back and sits down without noticing Kavya, Angad and Prem. While Kavya, Angad and Prem are completely shocked seeing her.

Anjali: Gunjun you won't believe what they did!!! They almost destroyed the flat. Kripa let the gas on, if Mukti hadn't noticed the building would have been on fire. I shouldn't have let her go, she still a kid

Gunjun: Di, we can talk about this later. They're here. (She says pointing at Kavya, Angad and Prem)

When Anjali saw Kavya she was shocked.

Anjali: Sorry, I didn't notice you

Kavya: Its okay, can we start with the presentation

Anjali: Sure.

Anjali then gives the presentation. Angad and Prem were very impressed, while Kavya was to busy looking at Anjali to notice the presentation.

 

After the presentation

Angad: Bhabh..(Angad was about to say Bhabhi when he say Kavya giving him an evil look.)Miss. Bajaj we are very impressed with your work.

Anjali: Please don't call me Miss. Bajaj call me Anjali

Prem: Yes and we would be honored to do the contract with you.

Anjali: The honors is ours to have such a big company wanting to work with us

Prem: To sign the contract we would need you and your sister's signatures, and since there not here we'll come tomorrow.

Anjali: I'm sorry they were suppose to be here but I had to send them somewhere for important work.

Angad: No problem, we don't mind coming tomorrow. Right bhai?

Kavya who was too busy looking at Anjali didn't hear Angad

Angad: Right bhai? (In a higher tone)

Kavya finally came back to reality and said: What?

Angad: I said we don't mind coming tomorrow to sign the contract, right bhai?

Kavya: Of course, we'll come tomorrow at 10

Prem: We should be leaving. It was nice meeting you. Bye

Prem then shakes both Anjali and Gunjun's hand. While Angad does the same. Kavya shakes Gunjun's hand, when he get to Anjali he doesn't leave her hand

Anjali was then getting a little uncomfortable with Kavya's stares and now that he isn't leaving her hand.

Anjali: Well bye

Kavya: Bye

He still doesn't leave her hand. Angad and Prem try not to laugh but cant help it and start laughing. Then Gunjun also joins them. Kavya was confused seeing Angad, Prem and Gunjun laughing.

Kavya: Why are you all laughing?

Angad: Bhai (laugh) lets go (laugh)

Kavya: Okay lets go

Prem: (Laugh) will you (laugh) leave Anjali's hand

Kavya then realizes what he's doing and quickly takes his hand away.

Kavya: Sorry

Anjali: It's okay

Kavya: Bye (As he says that Kavya, Angad and Prem leave)

Gunjun then goes to Anjali

Gunjun: I think he likes you

Anjali: We just met

Gunjun: You saw the way he was looking at you and the way he held your hand

Anjali: Shut up Gunjun

 

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Company's flat

 

We see Mukti yelling at Kripa for almost burning the building down.

Mukti: What were you even doing in the kitchen? We could have died? You could have killed everyone in the building.

Kripa: Well if not my fault I don't know how to use kitchen stuff. I wanted to make something for Samrat and Mayank

Mukti: Kripa, we both know if you cooked food we would all end up in the hospital.

Kripa: I had a cook book.

Mukti: Kripa shut up and fix the rooms.

Kripa: Whatever (She then leaves)

 

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Evening in the Airport

 

We see Samrat, Mayank and Nikki coming out of the airport.

Nikki: We all know that Kripa would do anything to get you both to stay at home, but say no. Otherwise it will be hard to meet and they could find out

Mayank: Don't worry everything will be fine

Nikki: Okay, I should be going bye

Mayank and Samrat: Bye

She then hugs them both and calls a taxi. While Mayank and Samrat also leave.

Nikki: Taxi

Taxi Driver: Kahan jana hai?

Nikki gives him the address, puts her bags in the trunk and leaves

 

 

Javeria



Edited by 26javey26 - 03 February 2009 at 11:15pm

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Posted: 04 February 2009 at 1:27am | IP Logged
good part.....continue soon......

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Posted: 04 February 2009 at 6:51am | IP Logged
nice part
y nikki doesn't want samrat n mayank 2 stay in kripa's house???

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