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Part 4a

 

Airport

We see 2 guys waiting for someone. They constantly keep looking at there watch.

Guy 1: Yaar, where is Nikki?

Guy 2: I don't know, I've been trying to call her for the last5 minutes.

 

Outside the airport we see a girl wearing a green tank top with black skinny jeans jeans; talking on the phone (we don't see her face). While talking on the phone she takes her luggage inside.

Girl: My flight is half an hour. I think it's for 8 hours. (I don't know the actual time it takes from England to India)

Girl: So I'm starting tomorrow

Girl: Yes, I'm coming with the senior doctor.

..

Girl: Don't worry Doctor Modi, I'll tell him

Girl: Okay, bye

 

The girl then spots 2 guys and runs towards them. She then hugs them both.

Guy 1: Where were you Nikki?

Nikki: Sorry Mayank, I was talking to Doctor Modi. He said were starting tomorrow.

Mayank: Its okay, if you were any later I would have not talked to you

Nikki: I said I was sorry.

Guy 2: Not fair babes, how can you forget about me

Nikki: How can I forget about my Sammy (As she says that she hugs Samrat)

Samrat: Did you talk to your sisters?

Nikki: Don't worry Sammy, I've talked to them. They said you can start on tomorrow

Samrat: There still 1 problem.

Nikki: What?

Samrat: We don't have a place to stay

Nikki: I thought you both were staying at your Chacha and Chachi's house intil your house gets renovated.

Mayank: Chacha and Chachiji are going to Nanital because someone is sick. Or something like that.

Nikki: I would have let both of you to stay with me but I'm staying at Kumkum aunty's house, until the surprise. I'll ask Anjali if you both can stay at the company's flat.  Excuse me

 

Nikita goes to the side and calls Anjali. After she finishes talking to her she goes back to Mayank and Samrat.

Nikki: Good news she says you both can stay there. But only for 2 weeks

Mayank: No problem. The renovations should be done by then.

Nikki: Remember, no one should find out that I'm in India. I'm planning on surprising them on Rishab mama's birthday on Monday.

Samrat: Don't worry babes, no one will know

Announcer: Will all the passengers taking Flight A56GH67 to Mumbai head towards the gate. Your flight will be leaving shortly.

Mayank: Let's go or else, we'll miss the flight.

All 3 of them go the plane (flight stuff I boring, so I wont write about that)

 

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India

Meanwhile in Sanjeevani

Doctor Keerti is giving everyone there duties.

(NOTE- Rahul didn't go to America and Armaan in the normal Armaan) 

Doctor Keerti: Doctor Atul and Doctor Anjali OT

Atul and Anjali: Yes ma'am

Doctor Keerti: Doctor Rahul and Doctor Muskaan children's ward

Rahul and Muskaan: Yes ma'am

Doctor Keerti: Doctor Armaan and Doctor Riddhima general ward

Armaan and Riddhima: Yes ma'am

Doctor Keerti: Get to work

Just then doctor Abhimanyu comes

Abhi: One minute. I would like to inform you all that we will be having 2 new doctors joining Sanjeevani tomorrow. 1 senior doctor and 1 intern. Please behave like humans I don't want them running away after there 1st day

All of them: Yes sir

Abhi: Get back to work (He then leaves)

 
Javeria

 

I won't be able to update as regularly because this semester is very heavy. I'll try to update at least once a week.

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Posted: 01 February 2009 at 4:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Angad-Kripa#1

Omg! SO awesome!!
Angad is a funny dude. Luvs girlz too much.
Kavya and Anjali, Prem and Mukti were great. Luved thier encounter.
Angad and Kripa are funny. Kripa's thots were funny.
Harji Ps. Plz PM me when u update.
   Thanks , i will pm you
 
 
 
Originally posted by yamnovbloom

wow really good plss continue soon can't wait yaar and Pm me wenver u do it
  
Thanks i added you to the PM list
 
 
 
Originally posted by Ridzigarima

hey di .. This was an awesome Part .. really Fab .. I'm dying to read the next part .. Can't wait .. So please continue soon ...and PM me ..
  
Thanks the next part is up. Please dont call me di, im only 15
 
 
Originally posted by nehasfan

nice part........
 
  Thanks
 
 
 
Originally posted by Love''sAngel

just read ur fick....
sounds gr8....
AK & KA will b easy to fall in love... but not to sure abt PM
continue soon
   Thanks
 
 
Originally posted by deeya123

awsum part
   
Thanks
 
 
 

yamnovbloom

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Posted: 01 February 2009 at 6:24pm | IP Logged
nice update so new surprises i lik it yaar , can't wait for next part

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Posted: 02 February 2009 at 3:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ridzigarima

hey di .. This was an awesome Part .. really Fab .. I'm dying to read the next part .. Can't wait .. So please continue soon ...and PM me ..
  
Thanks the next part is up. Please dont call me di, im only 15
 
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Rocking part ! Ok fine will not call you di .. but I'm supposed to as I am just 14 !! Is that ok ?? Please Please do update soon ... I will waiting for that ... Good Luck for he semesters .. Gonna watch out for mine tooo ..

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Posted: 02 February 2009 at 4:16am | IP Logged
hey....m a new reader....ma name is payal...jus caught up wid ur stry.........its really good.....quite interesting....must say...
plz continue soon.....n ya 1 mre thng....can u plz pm me d nxt tme u update......plz.......

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Posted: 02 February 2009 at 6:27am | IP Logged
nice part....

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hey luvly perts..lukin forward to more..esp. ka n ak scenes!

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