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Posted: 28 January 2009 at 5:41pm | IP Logged
gr8 part....
wonder how the couples r going to fall in love...
continue soon

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Posted: 28 January 2009 at 5:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tava

hey great ff loved what the girls wore do continue soonSmile

Thanks posting the next part soon
 
 
Originally posted by nehasfan

nice part
cont soon
 
  Thanks
 
 
Originally posted by ~*shaili*~

hey lovely ff..kavanj r my fav, as i always say lol
cant wait to read more abt ka..
thanks
 
 
Originally posted by Ridzigarima

Hey .. Awesome part ... Please continue soon and PM me when you update !! Please .. Nice part anyways...[/QUOTE
]   Thanks, will PM you
 
 
[QUOTE=deeya123]great part
   Thanks
 
 
Originally posted by sujalangad_rock

gr8 part....
wonder how the couples r going to fall in love...
continue soon
   Thanks, next part will be up soon.

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Posted: 28 January 2009 at 5:58pm | IP Logged

Part 3

 

We see a car stop in front of a temple. Then we see Anjali, Kripa and Mukti get out of the car. As they go in the temple we see another car stop in front of the temple. Kavya, Angad and Prem come out of the car. They also go inside the temple.

 

Anjali puts her dupatta on her head and goes further in. she goes to the front, puts her hands together and closes her eyes.

Anjali thinking: God today is a very important day for us. Today our company is having a meeting with a very big company, Basu Enterprises. If we do well, our company will get a big contract with their company. God please help us. 

While she is praying Kavya comes and does the same thing she does.

Kavya thinking: God all I know is that I can't live without Anjali. I may not know her, but…Please help me, Please give me my Anjali.

 

As Anjali finishes praying she opens her eyes and goes to the priest to get the amulets. When she gets the amulets, she turns to leave. As she goes she is stopped. She turns around and sees her dupatta stuck on someone's watch. She is about to ask the person, but stops when she sees the person is praying. When she fully sees the guys face, she is memorized. Kavya finishes praying, he turns around to find Anjali staring at him. He goes closer towards Anjali without taking his eyes off her. As Anjali realizes what she's doing she breaks the eye lock.

Anjali: My dupatta

Kavya: Excuse me? (He asks confusingly)

Anjali: My dupatta is stuck on your watch

Kavya than looks at his watch and sees her dupatta stuck on it. He gets it out and gives it to Anjali. Then she leaves, as turns to leave her hair goes on Kavya's face

Kavya: Beautiful

 

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Kripa and Mukti take there shoes off, while Angad and Prem are doing the same thing. Kripa and Angad go in. After praying they both hit the bell at the same time. As there fingers touch they both get some tingling feeling inside of them. Kripa turns to the side and she sees Angad staring at her. She then gets lost in his chocolate brown eyes.

Angad thinking: Wow, this girl is gorgeous. She is innocent yet sexy at the same time. Her emerald green eyes, her lips, god I want her. I want to love her, protect her make her mine.

Kripa thinking: He's so hot. His eyes, I can stare at them all day. I wonder how it would feel to kiss his lips. Kripa, what are you thinking. He's just a guy, a very irresistible guy. Kripa shut up.

 

While Angad and Kripa stare at each other, Prem and Mukti walk to the front and start praying. When they both finish, they both touch the priest feet at the same time.

Priest: Jeeti raho. Tum dono ki Jodi hamesha rahi.

As Prem and Mukti hear the last part they both look at each other shocked.

Mukti: Punditji app ko galat femi hai.

Prem: Hain, humari shaadi naih hui. Shaadi toh door (far) ki baat hai, hum toh ek dosre ko janti naih hai.

Priest: Toh kya, ek dosre ko janlo aur shaadi karlo. Agar rab chahi toh tum dono ek hosakti ho.

Mukti still shock: Muji jana chahi hai (She then leaves)

Prem starts walking still shocked. He keeps walking until he bumps into Kavya

Kavya: Prem, watch where your going. What happened?

Prem: Sorry, I was thinking about what punditji said.

Kavya: What did he say?

Prem: I'll tell you later. Where's Angad? We still have to distribute the money

Kavya: I'll look for him, you start distributing the money.

Prem: Okay

Prem goes to the place where the poor people sit. He goes to each one of them and distributes the money.

Prem: Yeh meri poori family si hai

Poor person 1: Shuakriya. Aap ni humari both madad ki. Kya hum aap ki liye kuch kar sakti thi hai.

Prem: Aap sub meri family ki liye dua kiye. Aur meri bhaiya ki liye, unhi unka pyar mil jiye.

Poor person 2: Hum zaroor dua karingi

Perm then goes to the car and waits for Kavya and Angad.

Prem: thinking: I bet he's with a girl

 

Meanwhile Anjali and Mukti get worried about Kripa.

Mukti: God di! Why is Kripa taking this long?

Anjali: I'll go check on Kripa and you go get the car.

Mukti: Okay

Mukti goes and gets the car. She drives it to the front of the temple and waits.

 

Anjali goes inside the temple. She sees Kripa staring at something, she doesn't see Angad. She then yells her name which brings Kripa out of her lala land back to the real world. Kripa without thinking goes, leaving Angad confused. As Angad is thinking about Kripa, Kavya comes.

Kavya: Angad…Angad…Angad (After getting tired of saying his name, Kavya smacks Angad's head.)

Angad: Ouch! What was that for (he says while rubbing his hand on his head.)

Kavya: Lets go, Prem's waiting

Kavya and Angad both go to Prem. All 3 of them get into the car and drive away.

 

Meanwhile Anjali and Kripa both go to Mukti and drive off. In the car;

Mukti: Di you wont believe what happened!!

Anjali: What happened?

Mukti tells them about the incident that happened with her in the temple.

 

Meanwhile in Kavya. Angad and Perms car;

Kavya: Are you serious! He thought you were married

Angad: Was the girl hot?

Prem: Shut up Angad! I was too shocked to know what was happening around me, or who was around me. But I think I can recognize the girl if I see her again.

 

Meanwhile Anjali, Kripa and Mukti's car;

Kripa: I think you both were meant to be, otherwise why would punditji say that

Anjali: You know Mukti she does have a point.

Mukti: If you don't want to be late or die, then SHUT UP!!!

Kripa: Whatever

 

Meanwhile in Kavya. Angad and Perms car;

Kavya: Prem, what time is the meeting?

Prem: In half an hour

Kavya: Okay, stop by the office I need to get something.

 

 

 

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Posted: 28 January 2009 at 6:17pm | IP Logged
Omg! SO awesome!!
Angad is a funny dude. Luvs girlz too much.
Kavya and Anjali, Prem and Mukti were great. Luved thier encounter.
Angad and Kripa are funny. Kripa's thots were funny.
Harji Ps. Plz PM me when u update.

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Posted: 28 January 2009 at 7:26pm | IP Logged
wow really good plss continue soon can't wait yaar and Pm me wenver u do it

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Posted: 29 January 2009 at 5:20am | IP Logged
hey di .. This was an awesome Part .. really Fab .. I'm dying to read the next part .. Can't wait .. So please continue soon ...and PM me ..

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Posted: 29 January 2009 at 5:41am | IP Logged
nice part........

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Posted: 29 January 2009 at 6:07am | IP Logged
just read ur fick....
sounds gr8....
AK & KA will b easy to fall in love... but not to sure abt PM
continue soon

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