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Posted: 27 January 2009 at 4:51pm | IP Logged

Part 2


            We see a big house. The nameplate says Bajaj Residence. We go inside and see a gorgeous living room. Then we go into the kitchen and see a girl cooking, but we don't see her face. As she is cooking we see a man come in the kitchen.

Guy: Anjali, hurry up otherwise you'll be late 

After he says that the girl turns around. She is wearing this View Raw Image' jQuery1233100245984="19">

Anjali: Don't worry papa, I wont be late. I done, I just have to set up the tables.

Om: I'll help you

Anjali and Om both set up the tables. When they finish we see Rishab and Surya sit down.

Rishab: Anjali, have Kripa and Mukti woken up?

Anjali: No mamaji

Surya: They'll never learn

Anjali: I'll go wake them up

Rishab: Anjali's so responsible, and she is getting in the age of marriage. I think we should start looking for a boy.

Om: Your right, but we should ask her if she likes anyone.

Surya: If she liked someone she would have told us

Om: We should give her time to find someone. If she can't then we'll look for someone.

Rishab: You're right. Anjali will find someone. But I worried about Mukti and Kripa.

Surya: They'll find someone. Nikita is also getting in the age of marriage.

Rishab: She'll find someone, if she doesn't, what are we here for?

Om: I think Anjali and Nikita should get married together.

Surya: Before that we need to find guys.

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Meanwhile, we see Anjali walk in a room. The room is painted shocking pick with orange and red dots. The curtains are orange and red, while the bed sheet is shocking pink with orange pillows. There are a lot of pictures of they family. There is a red bean bag on the side of the room, nest to the stereo. There is a big dressing table with a big mirror. On the side tables, there are candles in fancy candle holders. Also there is a plasma TV, right in front of the bed.


We see a girl sleeping peacefully on her bed, with her hair all over her face. Anjali sighs and goes and opens the curtains. The sun rays hit the girl's face, so she put her comforter on her head.

Anjali: Wake up

Girl: 5 more minutes di

Anjali: Mukti, mamaji will be very angry if you don't wake up

Mukti: Please 5 more minutes

Anjali: No! Now means now. If you don't wake up I'll pour cold water on you.

Mukti: Please 5 minutes.

Anjali goes to the washroom, fills a bucket full of cold water and goes to back to Mukti.

Anjali: I'm asking you for the last time, wake up

When Anjali doesn't get a replay, she pours the water on Mukti.

Mukti: Ahhh… (She screams while sitting up) What was that for?

Anjali: Stop whining, I warned you. Anyways get ready, everyone is waiting downstairs.

Mukti gets up and goes to the washroom, while Anjali goes to Kripa's room.

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When Anjali enters Kripa's room she is shocked, to see the bed made. She then hears some noise coming from the side tables. She goes close to see what it is, when Kripa comes out wearing a robe.

Anjali: How did you get up so early?

Kripa: Mukti's screaming

Anjali: Then what are you doing here?

Kripa: I forgot to turn the alarm clock off.

Anjali: Anyways hurry up, everyone's waiting downstairs (as she says that she leaves)

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Rishab: Anjali, have Mukti and Kripa woken up?

Anjali: Yes

Rishab: These girls need to learn their responsibilities. You can't always wake them up. Your going to have to get married soon.

Kripa: Who's getting married? (She says while coming down)

Kripa is wearing black skinny jeans with a top View Raw Image' jQuery1233100273375="19">and a black scarf around her neck.

Anjali: No one's getting married.

Rishab: I was saying that you and Mukti both need to be more responsible. Anjali is going to have to get married one day; she can't always take your responsibilities.

Mukti: But, we are responsible, right Anjali? (She says while sitting down)

Mukti is wearing this View Raw Image'> with a brown scarf around her neck.

Anjali: Don't get me involved

Om: Responsible people don't get there sister to wake them up, every morning.

Kripa: Mamaji, both of us work. In fact the 3 of us started our own company, Bajaj Fashion.

Everyone decided to leave the topic, knowing if Kripa would do anything to prove her point.

Rishab: God knows what will happen to the both of you after marriage.

Kripa: I'm not getting married; I'm living with all of you my whole life

Mukti: I don't want to die.

Surya: Rishab, leave it. It's useless talking to them

Om: Anjali, I want the 3 of you to go to the temple and pick of the amulets I got made for the 3 of you and Nikita.

Anjali: Sure

Rishab: Come home early, we have to discuses something important with the 3 of you.

Kripa: Don't worry, we'll come.

After Anjali, Kripa and Mukti finish eating the all go in their car and head towards the temple.





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Angel-Jot. IF-Veteran Member

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Posted: 27 January 2009 at 5:15pm | IP Logged
Awesome ff!! Luved the character sketch and Part 1, part 2.
Can u pm me when u update plz?

Edited by Angad-Kripa#1 - 27 January 2009 at 5:16pm
26javey IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 January 2009 at 5:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Angad-Kripa#1

Awesome ff!! Luved the character sketch and Part 1, part 2.
Can u pm me when u update plz?

Thanks, sure i 'll pm u
guju_girl1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 January 2009 at 6:26pm | IP Logged

hey great ff loved what the girls wore do continue soonSmile

love_KYPH IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 January 2009 at 2:52am | IP Logged
nice part
cont soon
~*shaili*~ Groupbie

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Posted: 28 January 2009 at 3:36am | IP Logged
hey lovely ff..kavanj r my fav, as i always say lol
cant wait to read more abt ka..
Ridzigarima Senior Member

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Posted: 28 January 2009 at 6:15am | IP Logged
Hey .. Awesome part ... Please continue soon and PM me when you update !! Please .. Nice part anyways...
MS-meghasharma IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 January 2009 at 8:42am | IP Logged
great part

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