Sher O Shayri


Sher O Shayri
Sher O Shayri

Eran's Poetry

umrao_jaan Goldie

Joined: 11 January 2006
Posts: 1211

Posted: 23 January 2009 at 4:37am | IP Logged

Hiiiiii! Welcome to my Poetry. I've written since i was a kid, but am not a meastro. It's my biggest hobby! Feel welcome to comment!


If life had just been a computer game
Where the mission is as clear as day
To be played over and over again
Untile you head the Hall of FAME

if life was just a book to read
Where everything has a final end
To be read over and over again
With a peek at the end-just in case

If life would just be a Bollywood saga
Whence it always good or bad and black or white
Fairytale beauties and Prince Charmings dance
To tune-not a step outside the beat

But then this wondrous thing called LIFE
Would never be realized as it is
This no-comeback entity made up
Of shades of grey and pastel hues


Edited by umrao_jaan - 23 January 2009 at 4:38am

Girl_2007 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 25 November 2007
Posts: 5733

Posted: 24 January 2009 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
aw Eran! its a really beautiful poem. Clap 
yesh, life is unique and continuous, we cant press the rewind button and relive the best moments so far... or modify our acts, no matter how much we want to do it.... seems that u were inspired.. Tongue when u wrote this piece of art. were you?..

Edited by Girl_2007 - 25 January 2009 at 8:37am
~devi~ Goldie

Joined: 27 July 2007
Posts: 1614

Posted: 24 January 2009 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
absolutely amazing poemClapClap

you are truly a talented writer.Thumbs Up

Edited by ~devi~ - 24 January 2009 at 12:57pm
Robsessed. IF-Dazzler

Joined: 15 August 2006
Posts: 3608

Posted: 25 January 2009 at 7:24am | IP Logged
iz excellent piece of poetry!
umrao_jaan Goldie

Joined: 11 January 2006
Posts: 1211

Posted: 25 January 2009 at 9:42pm | IP Logged
Thank you all guys! Will post more! Tongue
jassie_17 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 10 March 2005
Posts: 5003

Posted: 25 January 2009 at 10:50pm | IP Logged
nice work Eran..see i told ya i'll chk it out...
very well share more of ur poems..i've posted mine in the sher o shayri section!!!!
Jess. IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 07 February 2006
Posts: 13362

Posted: 29 January 2009 at 6:08pm | IP Logged
Beautiful!! Bravooo!!Clap

i loved it! i wish i could write poetry like THAT!
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