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Love In the Distance...

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Posted: 21 January 2009 at 6:36pm | IP Logged
Thought about a time in my life when i wanted to tell someone but couldn't out of fear of losing them...Well here is what i wrote (another poem inspired me to write this). Dont worry i dont feel this way still, but I am sure we all have at one point, always waiting for that 1...Embarrassed

I talk to you but you don't know it,

I walk past you but don't show it,

I want to say I love you and hug you tight,

But I know it wouldn't make things right,

I want to tell you, but am in fear,

Its you I hold, so close my dear,

My heart grows fonder,

As you wander,

For this painful endeavor,

I will love you forever,

I talk to you but you don't know it,

I walk past you but don't show it,


- Love in the Distance (Arun)


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Posted: 22 January 2009 at 7:16pm | IP Logged
any1 like it?

if u do i will dance!


if not, well cant really say anything...Approve
IMAN IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 24 January 2009 at 7:23am | IP Logged
it's realllyy  niceeeeClap
n gud to knw u wrote it yourself!!Smile
is it ur 1st own poem??
AsliiGuy IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 24 January 2009 at 7:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by IMAN

it's realllyy  niceeeeClap
n gud to knw u wrote it yourself!!Smile
is it ur 1st own poem??


thx! its like my 2nd or 3rd...

My first one was about my car....
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Posted: 25 January 2009 at 11:10am | IP Logged
i dunt belive i itz writen by u by the way tum poet kab se ban gaye  beautiful
AsliiGuy IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 25 January 2009 at 11:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by *Simran*

i dunt belive i itz writen by u by the way tum poet kab se ban gaye  beautiful


lol i agree with you simiii...When i wrote it, i said, "Yeh maine lihka?"..

i couldnt believe it, but i had some random words to use..and i finally made it...

Poet nahi hu, lekin dil se bol raha hu...Smile


thanks..Smile
xsweetbabygyalx Senior Member
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Posted: 25 January 2009 at 4:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by AsliiGuy

Thought about a time in my life when i wanted to tell someone but couldn't out of fear of losing them...Well here is what i wrote (another poem inspired me to write this). Dont worry i dont feel this way still, but I am sure we all have at one point, always waiting for that 1...Embarrassed

I talk to you but you don't know it,

I walk past you but don't show it,

I want to say I love you and hug you tight,

But I know it wouldn't make things right,

I want to tell you, but am in fear,

Its you I hold, so close my dear,

My heart grows fonder,

As you wander,

For this painful endeavor,

I will love you forever,

I talk to you but you don't know it,

I walk past you but don't show it,


- Love in the Distance (Arun)


 
Awww this is really sweet....kinda made me cry, really beautiful poetry.....I really enjoyed it.....I know guys have this fear of loosing the girl they really really really like from my own personal experiences with my bf but luckily I understood his fear LOL and my best friend kept telling me that every guy has that fear so that's how i understood.

Keep posting ur poetry.....it's fun to read them as I enjoy them Smile
 
Willing to GOD, u will find ur ideal girl. She's there somewhere in this world, wish u all the best of luck!
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Posted: 25 January 2009 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
i think itz reallie nice...it wud haf been much more beautiful if u expressed it to the person u were referring to....

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