Belonging - (AR Mini)Epilogue pg42-12/02 - Page 3

Posted: 15 years ago
hey simi
wow yaar
this was soo mesmerizing
um blown away by this intro yaar
keep updating
if possible pm me
Posted: 15 years ago
Good start ... so whats to unfold in the village??? Waiting to read on!!!
Posted: 15 years ago
AWESOME>>>>>>>>>>.

amazing concept...truly amazing.......

d old puppy love will be back again i hope it does...........
the entire introduction was FANTASTIC.........

if possible do pm me wen u update next...
Posted: 15 years ago
that part was fabulous i loved ur conceptcud u pls pm me when u updt
again grt updt
Posted: 15 years ago
hey simran glad to have u back!!!!!! now wat a mind blowing concept
 
      will wait for the neXt part !!!!! good luck with ur work hope ur load reduces soonn!!!!!
 
 
love
RV
Posted: 15 years ago
wow thats really cute.....childhood love............and boys of that age can be very callous................wonder what ridz is going to find when she meets armaan again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
pl. do continue..............its really a sweet concept.
 
Posted: 15 years ago
the concept is mind blowing
pls pm me
wen u update
Posted: 15 years ago

The first part is up one page 1 guys!!😃

Posted: 15 years ago
Sim!!!! Am i first!! Wohooo. Hehe!!

Read the intro and part 1 together!! And um just.....wowwwwwwwww thats such a unique concept, he loved her since 5??

And the spoilt brat he was, he himself become the reason for their distance......*sigh*

The part was so excellently written.....all her feelings so brilliantly penned!!

Her wanting to go back, the feeling of belonging!! Sim need i say ur doing a fabulous job???

The entire way u depicted her going back, his mum guessing it, the love been in her for so long....and shes nurtured it and kept it in her for so long......beautiful Sim!! Excellent portrayal of characters!!


 Now i dunno wat um more addicted too?? Manzil or this???

U better cont them both soon, ur fab!! Kudos Sim, hope ur fine!! Take care.

*Edit* again....😆

Completely forgot my jaan here......😆 Armaan, i wonder how u r gonna portray him?? Bad turned good ruthless guy betrayed by love and in brooding??? Or a complete character change him turning gentleman, i hav my ideas, really eager to knw wat u gonna do with him.....fingers cross hes changed as his mum said.....and not ruthless....million dollar Q....will e recongnize her???😆

Sim u need to give a fast update, u hav me thinking and thinking babes.......


Edited by jia.. - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
Ya i m second huraaaaaaaaaaa
Hey sim
muha muha muha
OMG this is sooooooooooo amazing part i just loved it i cant wait till he comes face to face with her
armaan malik the business man thats just perfect i just loved it sooooooooooooooooooooooo much
plz plz if u have writen the next part then plz post i want to read more
plz
luv
nruti
Edited by arluver15 - 15 years ago

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