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putturani Goldie
putturani
putturani

Joined: 06 October 2005
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Posted: 16 January 2009 at 6:54am | IP Logged
Guys I don't even know why I'm posting this! It just sort of popped into my head. Guess it's based on my life a little. I'm going back to my childhood home soon and this is sort of how I feel about what it's going to be like. Please leave comments guys, tell me it's horrible if you need to!

Not the Same

You move a step away
You lean over the threshold
You're pulled back
It's all as you left it
Yet still not the same

You step into the garden
Edge towards the gate
Again you return
Nothing's changed
But it's not the same

You open the gate
A foot steps out
Someone calls you from behind
You answer
But their voice is not the same

You're on the street
You lose your courage
You run back
Nothing looks different
But it doesn't feel the same

You leave the country
Your roots call you; you return
Everything is the same
You are not the same
And you never will be

suchi_dev2006 Goldie
suchi_dev2006
suchi_dev2006

Joined: 12 May 2006
Posts: 1765

Posted: 16 January 2009 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
it's very nice...I like the feelings its so true..
afreen_786 IF-Dazzler
afreen_786
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Joined: 22 November 2005
Posts: 3270

Posted: 23 January 2009 at 6:57am | IP Logged
toooooo gud
umrao_jaan Goldie
umrao_jaan
umrao_jaan

Joined: 11 January 2006
Posts: 1212

Posted: 23 January 2009 at 9:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by putturani


Everything is the same
You are not the same
And you never will be


Now this is what I call good poetry! It's really touching yaar and I feel that I can relate to the whole experience throughout.

Btw you used to post a fan fiction in the HP section-ages ago-right? I can remember your usernameTongue.

-EraN
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