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Posted: 11 January 2009 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Payal25

Awesome Concept!  Can't wait to read the story! Big smile


Thnx for Commenting on my Concept !

I am glad you Liked it ..
I am writing the First Update Now ..

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Part 1/Episode 1




Salaam Namaste Friends
Welcome to the journey of Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai
I Hope this Story touches all of your Hearts
Hope all of you Support me throught out this Journey

Hope you all Like it ,

Note :
Full Introduction  will be done at Monday
as i dnt have pictures of Everyone Yet
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Arjun and Anjali is
Hina and Karan

This Story is based on a family Living in Udaipur ..
Anjali and Arjun is 14 Years Old Here

Anjali's Family Surname is Rajvansh
and
Arjun's Family Surname is Suryavansh ..





Anjali is Running through the house, her Payal are Making Noises, She is running all the way from her room to downstair, she is about to step out,
ANJALI Shouts her Mum from behind
She Turns around and Look ( Entry of the Lead )

Her Mum Rajshri: Betaa Itni Daurkaar Kaha Ja Rahi Ho ..
Anjali : Maa Mein Wo Apne Saheliyo Ke Saath Khel Ne Ja Rahi Hoon ..
Rajshri : Tik Hai Betaa, Paar Shaam Hone Se Pehle Ajaa Na Aur Haa Shamhal Kar Kehlna Haa..
Anjali : Jii Maa
Rajshri : Tik Haai ..
Anjali Starts Running Again ..
Rajshri Shouts Samhaal Kaar, Anjali doesnt listen and Rajshri Says, Ye Ladki Bhi Naa Mujhe ek din marwar kar rahigee ..

Anjali is still running, Anjali reached to the top of the mountain and she stopped but she is breathing too fast, as she is really tired but then she looks around but no one is seem to be seen around, She says herself .. Woh Ajayga Mein thori der Intezaar Karti Hoon ...
She waits for a while, But no one is seem to be coming ..
Anjali - Shahed Wo Aaj Nahiin Ayega .. Mein Chalthi Hoon, Yeha Rehkaar Waqt Kyun Bhala Waste Karoo....

Anjali is about to go back.. Suddenly  Anjali Hears a Guitar Sounds, She turns back but no-one is there, She Takes a Step Forward and the Guitar Plays but then she stops and look around the guitar Plays, Then Anjali Takes a Step Forward and then again guitar Plays BUT this time some one sings too,
Tujhe Dekhta To Ye Jana Sanam Pyaar Hota Hai Dewaana Sanam,
Abh Yeha Se Kaha Jayee Hum, Teri Bahu Mein Mar Jayee Hum.....

Anjali Smiles and looks at a tree which is near her, then Arjun ( Entry ) Comes Forward while he is still Playing the guitar and Anjali Smiles and Says " Arjun "
Arjun runs up to Anjali and Says, Dekho Dad Ne Meri Liye Guitar Kharidkar Layehain ..
Tume to Pata Hain Naa, Meraa Sapna hai mein ek Singar Banoo ..
Anjali, Haa Pata Hai ( with an Angry Voice )
Arjun : Hmm Maharani Bhala ab Kyun Naraz Hain Bhai ?
Anjali : Mein Naraz Hoon Ya Nahiin .. Tumhars Kya Kaam Hain ..
Arjun : Kaam Hain .. Bato Warna Mein tumhe Wo Nahii dunga Jo Mein Ne Tumhari Liye Laya Hoon ..
Anjali : Meri Liye .. Dekhao Naa .. Please
Arjun : Nahiin Pehle Tum Bato..
Anjali : Kuch Nahiin Aise Hi Tum Chehraha tha ...
Arjun : Oh Acha .. He turns his Back on her ...
Anjali : Aab Tumhe Kya Hua ..
Arjun : Kuch Nahiin, Aise Mein Bhi Tumhe Chehraha tha .. Hahaha, Smiles arjun

They Both Sit Down, Anjali Says, Bohot Kush ho naa Aaj,
Arjun : Haa... Paar Kyun Puch Rahi Ho
Anjali : Kyuni Aaaj tumhare Akhe Kuch Aur He Kehraha Hai
Arjun : Woh Kya...
Anjali : Woh Yeh, Ke Aaj Tumne Pehli Baar Gana Gaya
Arjun : Pata Hain .. Mein ne abhi Tak Kisi Ko Gana, Yeaa Guitar Baaja Kar Sunaya Nahiin ..
Anjali : Woh Kyun ?
Arjun : Kyunki Mein Tumhare Liye Pehle Gana Chahta Tha Kyunki Tum Meraa Lucky Charm Ho ..
Anjali : ACHAA .. Ek Minute Mujhe Tumhe Kuch Denaa Hain ...
Arjun : Kya .. ?
Anjali : Ek Min Rukoo

Otherside ....
Anjali's Mum enters the Kitchen and Ask Ramu kaka to Make dinner soon
Ramu : Ma'am Saab Kya Bano
Rajshri : Jisk Jo Pasnd hain Puch Kar Bana Lena, Mein Arahi Hoon Ha, Mein Bhi Kuch Banalungi Unke Liye ..
Ramu : Tik Hai Ma'am Saab.
She makes Tea and She comes out of the Kitchen and Goes to Her Mother-in-law Room with a cup of tea, She touches Baa's Feet ....and says Namaste Baa,
Baa : Jitti Raho mere Bache ...
Rajshri : Baa Kal Suryavansh Ke Yeha Pooja Hai, hume Boolaya Hain ... Kya Aap Chalenge Humare saath
Baa : Kyun Nahiin,Pooja Hain To Jana Parega Naa
Rajshri : Mein Unko Keh Dungi Ke Hum Saab Are Hain .. with a smile
Baa : Meri Choti Ka Hain

Rajshri : Aap Ko Kya Lagta Hai ?
Baa : Shaheliyon Ke Saath ?
Rajshri : Haa Chinta Maat Kariye .. Ajayge Wo .. Mein Aab Chalti Hoon

Back at Arjun and Anjali ..

Anjali Takes out her necklace from her neck, It is shaped as heart which could break into two parts .
Arjun : Yeh Tum Kya Kar Rahi Ho ...
Anjali : Haa Ye Lo, Is Necklace ki Half Tumhare Paas Aur Half Mere Paas
Arjun : Woh Kyun
Anjali : Rishton Ka Koi Baroshaa Nahiin .. Kab Kaha Se Kha Lejata Hain .. Kisko Nahiin Pata
Isliye Agara hum kabhie Bhi Bichaar Jaye to Necklace Ke Jaarir Hum Ek dusre Ko Pechaan Sakenge ....
Arjun : Tik Haii but Hum Kabhie nahiin Bhi Nahiin Ek dushre say Bechrenge ..
Anjali : Agar Hum Ho Jaye to ..
Arjun Puts his Hand on Anjali's Mouth and Says, Aak Je Baat Agar Esaa Kuch Kaha Naa Tune To Phir mein tujhse Baat Nahiin Karunga ....

Anjali Pulls her ears and says Sorry, Arjun is still angry,
Anjali : Sorry Yaar
Arjun, Tik Hai Jao Maaf Kya, Paar Yaad Rakhna .. Kabhi Bhi Nahiin ..
Anjali : Tik Hai .... Kabhi Bhi Nahiin

Anjali : Arjun Yeh Rishte bhi Kitani Ajeeb Hote Naa,
Arjun : Haa Rishto Ki Kitne Bhasha hote, Kitne Sare Rishte Jodte Logo Ke Bich ..
Anjali : Har Rishta Kuch Naa Kuch Kehlata Hai ... Naa Jane Humara Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlayga ..
Arjun : Humhara Rishta Sab Se Alaag Hain, Saab Se Jada Majbood ..
Anjali : Woh Kaise .. ?
Arjun: Kyunki Hum Dono, Ek Dushri Ki Bohot Garib Hai Aur Ek Dusre Se Ache Tarah Se Jante Hai,  Dekhna Waqt Se Saat yeh Rishta Aur Bhi Jada Majbood Ho jayga .. ..
Anjali : Bhagwan Kare Yeh Dosti, Yeh Rishta Kabhi Na Chootey

Anjali : Hey Chalo ab Chalte hain ..
Arjun : Chalo, Mein to Bhool Hi Gayatha .. Kal Hamare Ghar Maa Durga Ka Pooja Hai, Aur Ma ne Tumare Parivaar Ko Bulaya Hain ..
Anjali : Saach, i will definitley Come..

They Both Walks home, same direction ..


At Rajvansh's Office,
Anjali's Dad - Rishab Rajvansh
Arjun's Dad - Shiv Suryavansh

They both are chatting inside Rishab's Cabin ...

Shiv : Hey Kaal Pooja Mein to tu Aa Raha he Na,
Rishab : Dost ne boolaya to jana Pargena ..
Shiv : Rishab Humara Dosti Bhi Kitane Salo Se he na
Rishab : Haa ?
Shiv : Toh Phir Kyun na Hum isye Rishto mein badal de te hain ..
Rishab : Tumhara matlaab, tum aur mein Samdhi banjaye ..
Shiv : Kyun Nahiin, Anjali Aur Arjun Ke Bich itni ache Rishte hain, Kitna Gehraa Dosti hain inki, Ek dusre ke bina Naa Dono Reh Sakte Hai, Aur Nahiin Kabhi Rahenge ...
Rishab : Baat Tumne Saahi Kya Hain ...
Shiv : To Phir Kaal Pooja Ke Waqt Eh Announcement Ho Jaye ..
Rishabh : Kyun Nahiin, I am sure Rajshri yeh sunkaar Khushi Ho gi .. Aur Baa Bhi ...

Then the both Friends gets up and leave the Cabin ....

To Be Continued !!!!!!!


Guyz, Hindi is not my first Language, Infact hindi isnt my language at all
but still i have tried my best to Write clear hindi.. Any Mistake Please point it out
next time i could use it

Hope you all Like it, please keep in Mind, This is My Second Time writing FF although my first one is on Middle Right now ..

So i am not sure how all of you are going to react to this First Update..
hope you all Like it and Please do comment/Criticise so my FF does become well


Thank you


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Posted: 11 January 2009 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
IMRAN
Kya baat hai yaara.....Clap
First of I forgot to tell you I love the concept .....sounds great 111

As for the first part awwwww how cute meri jaan
The beginning....I love the idea of the guitar playing....
Uff toooooo cute..and omg you like picked the best song in the world....
And the necklace......Thats such a cute idea....Day Dreaming.
There innocence has been portrayed perfectly.... its sooo pure and beautiful
Awww and there conversation.... about relationships....bless them
As for the Dad's planning away...I wonder how Anjali and Arjun will take this news.

Anyway Imran....Hug
I really enjoyed your first part and the hindi was fine...
well its better then mine LOL
I can't wait to see how the relationships develop....
Keep up the amazing work!!!
Love Simmie






Edited by .x. Simran .x. - 11 January 2009 at 2:11pm

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Posted: 11 January 2009 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by .x. Simran .x.

will read and comment


thats was a Fast reply ..

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Posted: 11 January 2009 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
wow awesome first part yaar! Clap
Very Well Written! Im surprised Hindi isn't your first language Big smile
Your FF is really interesting Thumbs Up Can't wait to read more!
Big smile

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Posted: 11 January 2009 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
Hey Imran Bro
omg wow first of all congrats on your first FF on YRKKH
i know this is going to be a fabulous Ff to read and i guess this is one of the first FFz on here lol even with out the episode awesome ClapStarClap
aww yh really this title you thought of it?
im not only getting vibes for this serial but for your Ff too lol
loved the concept how your portrayed it
wow just wow you've done this before its even started
i wonder how your parts are going to be after tomorrows epi

Salaam Namaste to you too LOL
im sure this story and your FF is going to touch my heart bro
oh okay i cant wait till tomorrows epi
wow 14 years old
hmm that isn't going to be hard for me to picture as its my age right now lol
they even have similarities in their surnames
Rajvansh and Suryavansh
their so made for each other lol
hehe anjali dont run too much
who she waiting for???
she ran all the way to the mountain for arjun?
LOL some one with the guitar that has to be arjun
haha every time she carrys on it plays and when she stops it stops lol
kyaa baath hein arjun
aww arjun he bought a guitar for you
Maharani LOL
aww i lvoe the scenes between anjali and arjun
its liek their best friends lol
and their teasing aww its so sweet
aww arjun you played the guiatr and sang first time to anjali aww
aww anjalis arjuns lucky charm aww thats soo sweet
aww rajshri and baas little moment sweet
aww half of a heart necklace
aww anjali wow your speaking liek that so mature for a 14 year old aww
aww kabhi bhi nahi
aww
anjali bet your happy now that your goign to go to the pooja tomorrow
Shocked wow no way
so taht means their going to announce it in the pooja
thats going to be interesting
wow omg no way
hindi isnt your first language
yh right really?
wow it seems like it is

okay this part was awesome fabulous
and considering thta the serial hasnt started its just amazing
i lvoe it how youve portrayed already so many different relationships
and i love the relationship of Anjali and Arjun
omg the pooja now
wow just wow
i need to read the next part soon lol
please update soon
cant wait for it
keep up the great work
Clap
Hummy
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Posted: 11 January 2009 at 4:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by .x. Simran .x.

IMRAN
Yes Simmie !
Kya baat hai yaara.....Clap 
Yes Jaane Kya Baat Hui !
First of I forgot to tell you I love the concept .....sounds great 111 I am Glad you Like it ..

As for the first part awwwww how cute meri jaan ... I am Glad you Liked it..
The beginning....I love the idea of the guitar playing.... Yeah I couldnt think of a Better way to Make his entry lol
Uff toooooo cute..and omg you like picked the best song in the world.... I Know, I Love that Song ..
And the necklace......Thats such a cute idea....Day Dreaming. I Know, So when they meet in UNI, They can Recognise Each Other ...
There innocence has been portrayed perfectly.... its sooo pure and beautiful ... Aww Really, I was So thinking would it be Good enough to attract People ...

Awww and there conversation.... about relationships....bless them  ... Thank you for Blessing Them
As for the Dad's planning away...I wonder how Anjali and Arjun will take this news. Yeah, You will Know Tomorrow..

Anyway Imran....HugYes Simmie ?
I really enjoyed your first part and the hindi was fine...Thank you Soo Much Reading and telling me that My Hindi was Good .. Means such a lot to me ..
well its better then mine LOL No way- i am sure urs is better than mine ...
I can't wait to see how the relationships develop.... I have already Planned on it .. You will see, it will develope very easily, no Dragging ..
Keep up the amazing work!!! Thank you, Keep Supporting me So I can Continue ..
Love Simmie
Love Imran



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