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Beautiful Mirror, Make me lucky- Update p.22 (Page 4)

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Originally posted by Insanity

haha, I know. I was debating on whether I should say it or not. But its cool. I'm loving the story! I can't wait to read more. Big smile
 
it's kind of inspired from sajan story as wellWinkLOL  I'll continue some other time when I have like a shocking twist to the storyLOL
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Part 3
 
Next day of school, she sees Neil again following her everywhere like a stalker. And then she thought to herself that used to be her, she was like a stalker to him and he ignored her sometimes while she treated him like a friend. For four months Sunshine didn't talk to him and he felt hurt. Since now he understands how she felt before, she gave him a chance for them to be friends. Neil came up to Sunshine
 
Neil: Hi, are you still ignoring me now?
Sunshine: Now, I stopped doing that.
Neil: So your not angry with me?
Sunshine: No
Neil: You want to go out sometimes?
Sunshine: sure
Neil: How about friday at 4pm?
Sunshine: 4pm is the time I get off from work so that's good
Neil: Okay, I'll pick you up from work then
Sunshine: Great
 
It's 4pm, Neil came for Sunshine so he can show her around Washington DC. She always stays in Virgina and don't go other places but Washington is 4 hours away from her.
 
They went walking in DC for hours and talking. Neil finally felt a true friendship with her. So he wanted to tell everything about him and leave no secrets behind.
 
Neil: I want to tell you something very important about me
Sunshine: What it is?
Neil: Well I never had a girlfriend and I'm 22 years old now. Some people called me gay for that.
Sunshine: I know. People in school can be mean calling you gay neil all the time.
Neil: I can't believe I'm telling you this but I never had a crush on a girl so I thought I was gay too.
Sunshine: Are you gay?
Neil: No way since I like you more than a friend now.
 
After walking and talking for hours and taking pictures in beautiful garden, waterfall and building places, they finally decided it's time to go home. 
 
Neil: It was nice hanging out with you
Sunshine: yeah it was nice hanging out with you too 
 
Sunshine went home and saved the pictures that her and neil took together in the computer. She printed those pics and put those pics in her diary. After that she did homework and went to sleep.
 
Clock ringing, it's time for school. Sunshine wakes up with a happy face even though she don't like morning times. She was happy and was shining like her name.
 
She went to class but Neil wasn't in class. She heard from he's friends that Neil was going to be at a basketball practice. She decided to visit the basketball court at the gym class. She didn't see students there. She heard noises from upstairs in gym class where they practice dance there. She saw Neil kissing another guy. Neil turned around and saw Sunshine. Sunshine with a tearful eyes, walked out of that place running and crying. Neil running after her and saying, "Sunshine please wait."
 
To be Continue....


Edited by veryuniquestyle - 31 January 2009 at 10:39pm
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Stern Smile em.... horrified.... wat the... how come.... ugh i was expecting some cutie sweet scenes between these 2, neil and sunshine.... as per the comments and as per the story line.... Shocked u wanted to make it shocking? congrats then! Clap Confused ufff.... but i have to say, this is more interesting day by day, especially becoz of these sudden twists in this story.....
 
btw, u updated fast.. Big smile thanks, do pm me again plz.
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love the story so far continue Embarrassed
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Posted: 01 February 2009 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Girl_2007

Stern Smile em.... horrified.... wat the... how come.... ugh i was expecting some cutie sweet scenes between these 2, neil and sunshine.... as per the comments and as per the story line.... Shocked u wanted to make it shocking? congrats then! Clap Confused ufff.... but i have to say, this is more interesting day by day, especially becoz of these sudden twists in this story.....
 
btw, u updated fast.. Big smile thanks, do pm me again plz.
 
I'll try to make it entertainingLOL but maybe not this chapter but next chapter, they'll be a love storyWink Get readyEmbarrassed I won't tell u any detailsLOL
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Originally posted by shivani33

love the story so far continue Embarrassed
 
thank u shiv... will doEmbarrassed
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Part 4
 
 
Sunshine was running and crying from Neil. It was time for her to catch the bus home so she waited at the bus stop looking sad. Sunshine was too early for the bus time, it's going to come after one hour later. Sunshine knows the people that regularly wait for the bus but this time there was this good looking guy who looked like the type that don't take the bus was waiting for the bus. She looked at him, and he looked at her. He asked her, "Does this bus comes late all the time?"
Sunshine: No, the bus comes at 1pm and right now it's 12:55pm.
He asked her, "What's ur name?"
Sunshine: My name is Sunshine and what's ur name?
He said, "Sunshine like right now the sun is shining *he laughed* and said, "beautiful name. My name is Kunal
Sunshine: Nice to meet you
 
The bus came and they paid the bus driver money. Kunal and Sunshine sat next to each other.
 
Kunal: "Do you always take the bus?"
Sunshine: "Yes, I don't have a car."
Kunal: "It's nice to have a car"
Sunshine: "I"m too busy with school and work that I don't have time to learn how to drive a car."
Kunal: "You don't know how to drive? It's very easy to learn"
Sunshine: "Since you love to have a car, why don't you have one"
Kunal: "My car is getting fixed today, it kept on stopping in the middle of the road so hopefully that problem is taken care of by now."
Sunshine: "Oh so this ur first time taking a bus?"
Kunal: "Not my first but it's my third time taking the bus. My car is getting fixed for three days now."
Sunshine: Oh
Kunal: You said you go to school. What is your major?
Sunshine: Designing
Kunal: What kind of designer?
Sunshine: Designing clothes and what you do for living?
Kunal: I graduated school a month ago and I got hired for a job. My major in school was business so I work at a company.
Sunshine: Good for you
 
Kunal and Sunshine kept on talking about careers and everything. Finally the bus stop at Sunshine's house and she said goodbye to Kunal.
 
While Sunshine was entering her home, lots of people just jumped and said, "SURPRISE."   Sunshine was shocked to see her family and friends there throwing a party for her. It's Sunshine's birthday. Sunshine's friend Diya came up to her and said, "Since it's your birthday, we decided to have dinner in this new place that just opened. People are talking about and saying they serve the best food ever so let's go there and check it out. If it's good place, who knows we might go there everytime."  *everybody laughed*
Sunshine: Let's go there now, I'll get ready."
 
Sunshine getting ready takes two or three hours for her make-up and everything to be done right. Sunshine walks out of the room and she always has her magic mirror in her purse. Family and friends were amaze by Sunshine's beauty. They turned around and said, "WOW you look very beautiful. You keep getting more and more beautiful." All of them got three different cars because it was lots of family and family's friends and they all arrived at the new food place called, "Yummy yum."
 
The family sat in their different tables and they all order rice with chicken. They all got their food. Diya said, "wow, the food matches the place's name Yummy yum. Food is delicious." All the family agreed that food was really good. While Sunshine was eating her food, she saw Kunal sitting all by himself in a table and he was talking on he's cell phone. When she finished her food. She went to Kunal and said, "Hi, your here too?"
Kunal: "Yes, I'm here supporting my family. My mom and dad own this place and they opened it about four months ago."
Sunshine: "Wow, that's nice. It's my family's first time here. We heard from other people that this place serve the best food."
Kunal: "Well everyone says their mom is the best cook so I believe that too."
Sunshine: "Yeah"
 
Sunshine's family calling her and saying "We order a big cake so hurry up and cut it.
 
Kunal: "Your cutting a cake? is it your birthday?"
Sunshine: "Yes it's my birthday."
Kunal: "Happy Birthday. We have a special cake for b-days so I'll get you one. What kind of cake you like?"
Sunshine: "coconut cake"
Kunal: "Okay, I'll get one free coconut cake because it's your b-day"
Sunshine: "Thanks"
 
Sunshine went back to her family. And her family was teasing her and watching her, saying that she fallen in love. They were talking about how her eyes had sparkles when she was talking and how she felt shy. Diya said, "Even the boy likes you too. He had this beautiful and shy smile to him. As soon as you walked up to him, he looked at you like if your the most beautiful woman in the world." Sunshine blushed and became all shy.
 
Kunal came up with the special coconut cake. The family thanked him. Sunshine took the cake home. They ate a little bit of the cake since their stomach was full. Sunshine had a great time and she said to her family and friends, "Thank you everyone for making this day special. Thank you for the great gifts you guys brought me. You guys know I love eating sweet stuff so thanks to everyone who made me sweets."
 
Finally it was time for her to go to bed. Sunshine kept on thinking of what happened during the day, it was sadness and anger that Neil gave and she met Kunal who made her b-day even special. Kunal made her forget Neil in one second. While thinking of Kunal, she fall asleep.

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