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Part 2

As Sunshine was walking and thinking to herself maybe it was her imagination and nothing happened. She went home, it was 5pm in the afternoon, she did her homework and watched Cinderella the cartoon.
 
She turned off the tv and re-live what happened the day. She couldn't believe about the whole thing with the lady luck. Sunshine didn't wanted to tell her best friend Diya what happened because her friend will probably think she's crazy. While Sunshine kept on thinking suddenly she fall asleep.
 
Clock ringing, it's time for school. Sunshine wakes up with an angry face because she don't like waking up early in the morning and she has tests that she don't think she can pass. Sunshine is ready for school. She takes the bus because she don't have a car.
 
She goes to class. Everyone is telling her how beautiful and different she looks. They asked her, "There is something different about you. You look very beautiful, you don't look like that in other days." Sunshine says, "Make up it's magic."  She takes her test. The results came out and she has a B and couldn't believe because she didn't study that much.
 
It's lunch time and all eyes are on Sunshine. She walked like a model with her dark black-brownish hair swinging from side to side as she walks and her smile light up the room. Her shoes were looking like diamonds. Sunshine bought those shoes because it made her feel like a Cinderella.
 
While she was in line to get her lunch from the cafeteria, she sees her crush looking at her. He's name is Neil and Sunshine had a crush on Neil for two years now. Five months ago, Sunshine finally told Neil that she liked him and was wondering if they could go out. She even ask for he's number once. He rejected by saying he liked another girl and he told her he don't have a phone.
 
Back to the cafeteria, Neil was looking at Sunshine as if he never seen her before. He had a dreamy eyes and looked at her for the 20 minutes she was in line to get her lunch.
 
Neil came up to Sunshine and told her, "I'll pay for the lunch"
Sunshine: "No thank you. I can pay my own lunch."
Neil: "Have I seen you before? You look familiar"
Sunshine thinking to herself of how stupid this guy was to not notice who she is.
Neil: "Are you new to this school?"
Sunshine: "No I'm Sunshine, the girl in the gym class that was hit by your basketball."
Neil: *he laughed and said*   "wow, are you serious? is that you? You look very beautiful. I wanted to tell you, I got a phone now, do you want my number?"
Sunshine *Being angry and just walked out on him without even saying yes or no to the phone number offer*
 
Neil followed sunshine and became like obsessed over Sunshine. So many girls just love Neil for he's good looks. But Neil never had a girlfriend because he didn't find he's dream girl. This time, things are changed since Neil was telling he's friends that Sunshine was the perfect girl for him.
 
All the girls got jealous of Sunshine because of how Neil was behaving infront of her. Girls decided to make Sunshine's life hell by making fun of the way she used to be which is nerdy/weird with glasses. Now she doesn't have glasses, she's wearing green eye color contacts. They made fun of how her eyes color weren't real and kept on changing colors like her clothes. They even told the teacher a lie of saying that Sunshine stoled some of the girls clothes in the locker room and Sunshine got suspended for no reason, she tried to make her reason but she couldn't prove her points right when there were 15 girls saying that they were an eye witness to how Sunshine steals clothes.
 
Sunshine was back from her 5 days suspension. All she could do was go to the counselor's office and cry because they suspended her for something she didn't do. That counselor knows Sunshine for 2 years and he never saw anyone complaining from her or any bad reports of her. So he was surprise to hear this news.
He said, "I'm so sorry to hear this. You should've come to me about this when it happen. I know those girls are known for starting up fights."
Sunshine "Well, I already got suspended for it so it's too late. But now I'm back."
 
As Sunshine walked out of the office, she sees Neil. Sunshine used to have this feeling of love whenever she sees him but when she saw him this time, she had a feeling of anger and hate towards him. He didn't like her before but now he's chasing her because of beauty.
Neil came up to her and said, "Why your ignoring me?"
Sunshine,  *With an anger expression* she said, "Leave me alone, I don't want to talk to you."
Neil, "What did I do to you, why you hate me so much?"
Sunshine, "I hate guys like you who thinks beauty is everything."
Neil, "what makes you think that?  I was your friend before you changed your appearance."
Sunshine, "Yes I thought I was your friend but you treated me like I was this weird stalker of yours. I even ask you for a phone number but now your giving your phone number. I don't even know why I used to like you so much, I was so stupid and so blind."
 
 
To be Continue........


Edited by veryuniquestyle - 31 January 2009 at 12:15am

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wow! its beautiful... Aishu... can i call u Aishu? Tongue
the conclusion wich wid i came out is that, beauty and success dont bring happiness and satisfaction always.. Tongue
but the suspense comes in the last senteces, when neil tells her that he used to be her friend before... Ermm
please update soon. Big smile


Edited by Girl_2007 - 31 January 2009 at 3:41am

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wow Aishu!...the story is sooo nice!!...it's really good!. the story, you've written is so different from others that I have read so far!Tongue...plz plz cntinue! I can not wait to see what happens after!.. how Sunshine's life changes after that!..Day Dreaming

luv SanaHug

thiz was my comment for the 1st part!..but when i post my comment i have seen the second part!( I wonder how much i'm stupid?LOLLOLLOL)..anyways after reading the second part: well .. the story is becoming much more interesting!..i'm looking forward to read the continuation!Day Dreaming!...Sunshine & Neil's love story is FAB!..

[ i love romantic stories. i'm completely mad about that gendre of bookss or movies ]



Edited by sana_92 - 31 January 2009 at 7:02am

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Posted: 31 January 2009 at 9:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Girl_2007

wow! its beautiful... Aishu... can i call u Aishu? Tongue
the conclusion wich wid i came out is that, beauty and success dont bring happiness and satisfaction always.. Tongue
but the suspense comes in the last senteces, when neil tells her that he used to be her friend before... Ermm
please update soon. Big smile
 
sure u can call me aishuEmbarrassed  yes beauty and success don't bring happiness, actually money don't bring happinessLOL Happiness comes when you have the love of your family and friendsEmbarrassed Happiness is when you find your true loveTongue It would be great if one had everything from wealth, health, lover, family and friendsEmbarrassed But seems like you can't have it allLOL
 
yes neil and sunshine were friends. Sunshine considered Neil to be her best friend and told him everything but he wasn't interest in her talk at all. She was more like a stalker to himOuch


Edited by veryuniquestyle - 31 January 2009 at 9:15am

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Posted: 31 January 2009 at 9:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sana_92

wow Aishu!...the story is sooo nice!!...it's really good!. the story, you've written is so different from others that I have read so far!Tongue...plz plz cntinue! I can not wait to see what happens after!.. how Sunshine's life changes after that!..Day Dreaming

luv SanaHug

thiz was my comment for the 1st part!..but when i post my comment i have seen the second part!( I wonder how much i'm stupid?LOLLOLLOL)..anyways after reading the second part: well .. the story is becoming much more interesting!..i'm looking forward to read the continuation!Day Dreaming!...Sunshine & Neil's love story is FAB!..

[ i love romantic stories. i'm completely mad about that gendre of bookss or movies ]

 
thank you sanaHug  Me too, I love love storiesEmbarrassed
 
The first part was like a introduction so don't worryLOL I'll continue some other time because I don't know what to write for next... I have to make it shocking u knowROFL

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Posted: 31 January 2009 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by veryuniquestyle

Originally posted by Girl_2007

wow! its beautiful... Aishu... can i call u Aishu? Tongue
the conclusion wich wid i came out is that, beauty and success dont bring happiness and satisfaction always.. Tongue
but the suspense comes in the last senteces, when neil tells her that he used to be her friend before... Ermm
please update soon. Big smile
 
sure u can call me aishuEmbarrassed  yes beauty and success don't bring happiness, actually money don't bring happinessLOL Happiness comes when you have the love of your family and friendsEmbarrassed Happiness is when you find your true loveTongue It would be great if one had everything from wealth, health, lover, family and friendsEmbarrassed But seems like you can't have it allLOL it depends on how u deal it Tongue u have to keep those things carefully balanced, if u want them all.
 
yes neil and sunshine were friends. Sunshine considered Neil to be her best friend and told him everything but he wasn't interest in her talk at all. She was more like a stalker to himOuch
 
very true Big smile
well, money doesnt bring satisfaction, its a thing wich wid we are all familiar... Tongue i mean, we have viewed, readed and listened a lot about it,
about beauty, technically, its happiness wid brings beauty, not the opp. way. Tongue
and success doesnt bring happiness..... thats not a common thing.. Tongue but its true, success, or atleast, wat we tend to considere success does not bring happiness, not always.
thanks for clearing the Neil-Sunshine thing Smile, plz, pm me about the next part, Big smile

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Posted: 31 January 2009 at 9:25am | IP Logged
very true. Happiness brings beauty
 
okay I'll pm you when I updated it

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Posted: 31 January 2009 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
Very good Aishu!Thumbs Up

i like the fact that Sunshine knows that neil only likes her for her beauty..so she rejected himLOL...!!

now i bet he knows how she felt before...and those mean girls >(.. i hope she gets revenge on them too LOL

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